DjPlAiMaKa vs String9487
 

Battle Rules:
10 lines each
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-03-05 at 09:36 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

DjPlAiMaKa has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-31-04 09:37 PM.

String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-31-04 09:38 PM.

String that's what u say ur name IS "I'm no strings attached" so now u nameLESS//
I go to the casino play 1 game and become famOUS//
U go to the street to get a TRICK, but instead get a DICK in ur ANUS//
I've been through SHIT worst uve seen is a horror FLICK//
Or watch Scarface get a gun and say "O im gangsta FIT"//
U fuck wit me and die, nigga this aint a dream, its the PATH u CHOSE//
It's the wrong PATH stand BACK and get verbally SMACKED in the NOSE//
OPPOSE me and ill ex-POOSE u, u think u NOO me!BAM!//
Thas wat happens wen u MESS wit tha BEST//
Remember me 4 life BITCH, my names tattoed on ur TRICKS CHEST//

u down wit no half assed voting?
If u wanna vote u gotta vote wit categories and shit?
U down wit that
HIt me bak

lets get into it

chea chea, dog u meetin guys at secret rendezvous
this DJ couldnt "make a play" wit a Broadyway crew
thats the wrong way fool, ..that verse is dirt
u rap words that irk, the day u joined, the day rap verse is cursed
look, ..im a wanted man, n u just want a man
n ya lines stretch out farther than rubberbands
u get plenty madder, from the heavy laughter
the steady splatter, turn ya guts to a spaghetti platter
I'll make, big damn incisions, split Fam or give in
u a skinny lotto, u got a SLIM CHANCE of winnin..HAAAAAAAAAA

uppin for votes easy battle to vote on holla at me

uppin for votes easy battle to vote on holla at me

uppin for votes
this battle is taking 2 long
come on ppl just vote and get this over with
and no half assed votes

uppin for votes easy battle to vote on holla at me

uppin for votes easy battle to vote on holla at me
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When you see me in tha street, remember.... YOU DONT KNOW ME

uppin for votes easy battle to vote on holla at me
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When you see me in tha street, remember.... YOU DONT KNOW ME

Voted For: DjPlAiMaKa

i give dis to dj since he had betta punches and multis...da structure i give to string cuz i could read his better....flow i give to neither...metas i give to neither...and personals where lackin in dis battle

both elavate
v/DJwhatever his name is.........

Voted For: DjPlAiMaKa

Well true first verse didnt really have nothing to it but alot of pointless multies, 2nd wasent that great either but for me was the better spit, both need punches
u guys should do the cypher, ya stylez suit it more
thats my vote

if u wouldnt mind returning the favour for voting in ur guys batt could u vote on mine
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=170327

Voted For: String9487

my vote goes to string
his multies where tighter
presonal more affectibe
and he had real punlines
even though his whre played they where better
the other guys verse was good but it
was forced i strees on verses being strees that much because the wrods are more imortant
but in this case dude wasnt sayin toomuch of anything
any vote goes to String 1

oh yeah vote on my battles ........................

uppin for votes
come on ppl dis has to be over wit someday

Voted For: String9487

hands dwn vote goes to strings.........homie u had dope punches man,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,but u had wack flow,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,wack,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, overall good shit yo return the favour in my battle agaisnt necro pyronix................. below

Voted For: String9487

okay battle......

opener-dj..string ya first bar didn't ryhme
structure-string
punchlines-string
multis-string
creativity-string
personals-dj
finisher-string....nuff said dat explains it all string had da betta verse

links r in da sig...return it ya'll

MARVJAY how didnt my first bar rhyme? im just curious. It rhymed perfectly to me

uppin for votes come on ppl
this battle has been on for ever

MARVJAY how didnt my first bar rhyme? im just curious. It rhymed perfectly to me

Voted For: String9487

Wow String Got Thiss Ez
Openor=String His Aktually Made Sence
Closer=String Good Punch At Tha End Ta Close It
Strukture=Tie Both Wass Easy 2 Read
Punches=String His Hit Harder,Otha Kids Wass Homo
Vokab=None
Metaz=Sring His Wass Better

Overall String Merked Him....................

MARVJAY how didnt my first bar rhyme? im just curious. It rhymed perfectly to me

Voted For: String9487

String: shoulda played off his name. but what gave you mah vote was the opener.
both ya'll need tah elevate.
return tha favor!
link in siggy!