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anxiety vs Phantom
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Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-01-05 02:56 AM.
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anxiety has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-01-05 02:59 AM.
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You stupid dunny, I mean look, why do I gotta son you again?
And it don't mean you gotta plasma screen cuz you use the new skin And you aint a pimp son, look, we all know that you're lying You could spit game everywhere and still not have a broad-in your horizons I crazy with the punches, so anxiety shut up and listen here I'll drop ya punk ass quicker than the glass ball on New Years Anxiety is a wigger and I coulda sworn that I had said this before But the only he ghetto......is when it comes to votes on the polls So if you ever come to my hood, and start looking like a dork We'll pop ya bitch ass quicker........than champagne corks W00t i'm in the New Years spirit :) Good luck homie. |
Kids only half me... So every time i try to see him i gotta double back.
Only time he pops up in convos... Is when he's jumpin on bubble wrap... Phantom aka Socrates already lost, somebody please take him away... And i wonder how you seem to be so experienced... ..............................................At faking your gay... You offered to show kids how to throw punches, and improve at text... But I think you misunderstood, were actually trying to gain respect... It's true when it comes between me and you, most people think ur better... But thats just because every time you lose, you re-set your record... Think your so dope, brag about your punches, structure and wordplay... But your officially the worst emcee of the year... ................................................An d it's only the first day... |
Word goodluck to you too...............................
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Voted For: anxiety
Vote: anx Phantom: decent structure, some ok bars, but it just wasnt as good a drop as anxieties..There wernt much wrong with ur verse, just more creative hard-hittin punches. Anxiety: Kids only half me... So every time i try to see him i gotta double back. Only time he pops up in convos... Is when he's jumpin on bubble wrap... nice opener, not original, but still good - 7/10 Phantom aka Socrates already lost, somebody please take him away... And i wonder how you seem to be so experienced... ..............................................At faking your gay... meh gay stuff........ok as a filler in ur drop - 6.5/10 You offered to show kids how to throw punches, and improve at text... But I think you misunderstood, were actually trying to gain respect... nice punch, well set-up aswell, gd bar - 8/10 It's true when it comes between me and you, most people think ur better... But thats just because every time you lose, you re-set your record... ok, nuttin special - 6.5/10 Think your so dope, brag about your punches, structure and wordplay... But your officially the worst emcee of the year... ................................................An d it's only the first day... nice closer, original aswell, well set-up, gd flow -8.5/10 RTF - links in sig |
This was feedback posted for anxiety
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This was feedback posted for anxiety
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Voted For: Phantom
Aiight to be honest soc even though text is wack, you are pretty good at it.. This was a good battle, I'll start with anxiety. Bro your verse was better than a lot of kids on this site I'll give you that, but some of the punches didnt hit as well as they should of, heres an example: Kids only half me... So every time i try to see him i gotta double back. Only time he pops up in convos... Is when he's jumpin on bubble wrap... That punch was a little weak for an opener, the multi was there, but it didnt really pay him out at all.. If someone used that against me I'd be like... meh.. Your second line was a little better, but could of been worded better if you had of maybe givin reference to pop lotty and made a punch with that.. 3rd punch I actually had no idea what you were talking about, and it wasnt till your last 2 punches where I was like o word this is picking up.. But I think it was a case of too little too late.. Soc, I dont have much to say because your better than me at text I think.. But I actually enjoyed reading your punches which is something that doesent usually happen when I read text verses on this site.. I might start voting on your battles more often.. Good shit.. Peace all.. And sorry anxiety, I think you were out done here, but keep at it and keep reading verses like the one soc dropped cause thats the best way to elevate. |
It does suck when you lose a vote to someone who wasn't trying :banghead:
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This was feedback posted for Phantom
...................................close battle, checking the scores
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Voted For: anxiety
You stupid dunny, I mean look, why do I gotta son you again? And it don't mean you gotta plasma screen cuz you use the new skin WACK NO REAL PUNCH HERE A DISS AINT HIT 3/10 And you aint a pimp son, look, we all know that you're lying You could spit game everywhere and still not have a broad-in your horizons OK THAT WAS WACK AS WELL I GOT WHAT YOU TRIED TO DO BUT IT WAS WORDED HORRIBLE 3/10 I crazy with the punches, so anxiety shut up and listen here I'll drop ya punk ass quicker than the glass ball on New Years OK THIS IS PLAYED AND STILL NOT A PUNCH2/10 Anxiety is a wigger and I coulda sworn that I had said this before But the only he ghetto......is when it comes to votes on the polls OK I AINT GET THIS I THINK I DID BUT IF IM RIGHT ITS STILL NO PUNCH AND HORRIBLE 1/10 So if you ever come to my hood, and start looking like a dork We'll pop ya bitch ass quicker........than champagne corks OK ALSO WACK NO REAL PUNCH2/10 11/50 OK SOC WTF NO PUNCHES BAD WORDING SOC I KNOW YOUR WAY BETTER THEN THIS THIS IS THE WORST I EVER READ FROM YOU WTF MAN IM DISAPPOINTED FOR REAL:( Kids only half me... So every time i try to see him i gotta double back. Only time he pops up in convos... Is when he's jumpin on bubble wrap... DECENT PUNCH HERE 5/10 Phantom aka Socrates already lost, somebody please take him away... And i wonder how you seem to be so experienced... ..............................................At faking your gay... HAHAHAHA LOL DOPE PERSONAL HERE 7/10 You offered to show kids how to throw punches, and improve at text... But I think you misunderstood, were actually trying to gain respect... OK WACK AINT HIT NO PUNCH HERE AT ALL2/10 It's true when it comes between me and you, most people think ur better... But thats just because every time you lose, you re-set your record... LOL HAHAHAHA ANOTHER DOPE PERSONAL 7/10 Think your so dope, brag about your punches, structure and wordplay... But your officially the worst emcee of the year... ................................................An d it's only the first day... HAHAHAHAHA DOPE PUNCH HERE BEST OF THE BATTLE 8/10 29/50 GOOD PUNCHES AND DISSES PERSONALS WERE DOPE AS FUCK AND THATS WHAT WON YOU THIS SOC HAD REALLY NO GOOD LINES IN HIS WHOLE VERSE. BOTH PLEASE RETURN HONEST VOTES ON LINKS IN MY SIG THANK YOU |
Voted For: anxiety
you win.... AN....you came alot better..it is liek oyu wanted the win more than SOC... good shit..nice perspnals...you kept my attention form the begining till the end....all of oyur shit had me laughing........the only thing thAt was wck was your opener just wasnt feeling that shit......but other than that everything was good...nice structure also SOC...it seemed as if you didnt try....so in my opinion you loose this...but dont go change your record again....j/k but yeah your punches where played...and your closer was weak...c'mon i know for a fact you can do better than that.....you already know where you went wrong........next time just try harder.... vote= anxiety becuas he tried alot harder to win.. |
Voted For: anxiety
Kids only half me... So every time i try to see him i gotta double back. Only time he pops up in convos... Is when he's jumpin on bubble wrap... lol this was a creative punch...humerous. Phantom aka Socrates already lost, somebody please take him away... And i wonder how you seem to be so experienced... ..............................................At faking your gay... lol, not bad... punch was kinda basic, but effective. You offered to show kids how to throw punches, and improve at text... But I think you misunderstood, were actually trying to gain respect... eh, not really feelin this bar It's true when it comes between me and you, most people think ur better... But thats just because every time you lose, you re-set your record... lol this was funny... nice bar, good setup and punch.. feelin it. Think your so dope, brag about your punches, structure and wordplay... But your officially the worst emcee of the year... ................................................An d it's only the first day... lol- not the most original concept, but decent closer... all in all u coulda came harder, but this was a pretty good verse. You stupid dunny, I mean look, why do I gotta son you again? And it don't mean you gotta plasma screen cuz you use the new skin good opener- creativity- a little wordplay- And you aint a pimp son, look, we all know that you're lying You could spit game everywhere and still not have a broad-in your horizons this is o.k-- "Broaden your Horizons"- but if it fit in the sentence better- then the wordplay and punch would have been improved... as it is its nice, but u coulda made this knockout. I crazy with the punches, so anxiety shut up and listen here I'll drop ya punk ass quicker than the glass ball on New Years blah... not feelin it. Anxiety is a wigger and I coulda sworn that I had said this before But the only he ghetto......is when it comes to votes on the polls lol-- again, u come w/ some pretty nuts concepts but when you word em- your only 90% there... so I know what ur tryin to say, but u dont say it with the kick u could. So if you ever come to my hood, and start looking like a dork We'll pop ya bitch ass quicker........than champagne corks corks dorks-- blah, not feelin, too basic for a closer..... looks like you began o.k but kinda stumbled in a few of ur concepts-- a little more work and it could have been a real nice peice. I think anxiety was more consistent in this... Phantom could have won in my oppinion if he worked more on the last two bars... but they just fell off, and the verse really suffered... anxiety was decent straight through... Vote Anxiety. |
Voted For: anxiety
Phantom: You stupid dunny, I mean look, why do I gotta son you again? And it don't mean you gotta plasma screen cuz you use the new skin ^^not a good opener... blah And you aint a pimp son, look, we all know that you're lying You could spit game everywhere and still not have a broad-in your horizons ^^nice wordplay not a hard punch tho.. I crazy with the punches, so anxiety shut up and listen here I'll drop ya punk ass quicker than the glass ball on New Years ^^decent..........no more, no less Anxiety is a wigger and I coulda sworn that I had said this before But the only he ghetto......is when it comes to votes on the polls ^^lol best bar so far... So if you ever come to my hood, and start looking like a dork We'll pop ya bitch ass quicker........than champagne corks ^^not a good closer... Phantom this has to be the weakest battle you thrown up... It seem like you didn't even try because you were missing words in your verse seems like you were just typing anything up on some lines... Anxiety: Kids only half me... So every time i try to see him i gotta double back. Only time he pops up in convos... Is when he's jumpin on bubble wrap... ^nice opener... nice wording Phantom aka Socrates already lost, somebody please take him away... And i wonder how you seem to be so experienced... ..............................................At faking your gay... ^^LOL best bar so far.. You offered to show kids how to throw punches, and improve at text... But I think you misunderstood, were actually trying to gain respect... no this is the best now.. nice punch and personal It's true when it comes between me and you, most people think ur better... But thats just because every time you lose, you re-set your record... ^^another good personal.... this is enuff to win Think your so dope, brag about your punches, structure and wordplay... But your officially the worst emcee of the year... ................................................An d it's only the first day... ha ha pa LMFAO ha lol nice closer.. Anxiety you came harder than Phantom most obviously, this was pretty one-sided. You kept throwing punches and personals.. and had some funny lines here and there, you took this pretty easily.. i think both of you know that.. stay up.. my vote/Anxiety |
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