Week 7 (0-0) Soulja Vs (0-0) Intrin Sic
 

30 LINE MAX..


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I heard about this kid named Soulja who goes both ways
This cat even rap's gay.. cause he's dropping an anal phrase
I'm setting you ablaze.. leavin you burnt the way you flaming for days
Soulja's verse is so played.. your rhymes are full of cliches
Leaving you laid - my punches reach out.. I'll beat you transcontinental
I'm a bust your mental.. cause your rhyme scheme is so elemental
You in loser's denial - you heard it first so don't touch the dial
Keep your mind intact.. Soulja lacks at spittin true facts
I'm a shake you like a heart attack.. got Soulja bringing up the back
And that's a fact - you couldn't win this if you pulled a night shift
So get this.. Soulja reaches for a dick before looking for chicks
Check it.. my shit is first rate the way my rhymes elevate
Mad cats try and emulate.. my style is so fucken great
When Soulja reads my verse he'll try and copy it
So be it - his shit is sure to miss.. and I got him wishing he did
Cause a verse against me is a death request, kid
I'm so ill my verses sell on Ebay for the highest bid
Soulja got more filler than a piece outta his mouth is
This kid will ghost faster than a black cat wearing a night cap
I stay strapped.. I'm here to bust bitches who post whack raps

Good luck.

UP

i got'cha had cpu problems

mine as well post up a corpse, either way youll 'drop dead
set flames to the spindle, but never spot a hot thread
im like manson with a tazer how i stun-and-kill-fags
coat his train wheels with aids and still wont 'run-an-ill-track
equip my dick with spinning blades, watch how this bastard-gets-cut
cuz hes just like a greedy squirrel, always after-my-nuts
1st senior ive ripped, you dont want me to get violent
go back and edit ya post blank bitch and write to remain silent
your rhymes suck so face it, as for elevation?
your risin bout as much as someone locked in the basement
This aint football, so get off my nuts and stop jockin my style,
dip my head in cemement, you still aint rockin me child,
i eat as many rhymes as my mouth will fit,
you deserve as many W's as in the alphabet,
the truth is your wack now cuz ya ghostwriter backed out,
ill leave ya bones fractured so their like ya mom, CRACKED OUT,
i guess your really like your mom cuz your a fuckin wack hoe,
youll have a chance at me when truth dot com promotes tobacco

aiyo rep i gotta log off right now so i cant vote on battle but i will asap

is that cool?

~1~

^^^^^^A few were played but it came out better. I didn't post the rest cause after that it was pretty weak but that won it pretty much.



^^^^^^^Pretty much all metaphors but they weren't hittin' hard enough...they all came out aight but too weak to defeat the comp's verse, plus they seemed pretty force here and there.


Vote=Soulja

for hittin' harder because his punches overpowered Intrin Sic's metaphors...

Can we get some votes?

ummmm..dis is what u call a average puny battle
none of u came hard..creativity wuz booty..
vocab mataphors and etc. wuz also sam-booty..

but i gotta go with soulja cuz int wasnt throwin direct punches like soulja..plus soul first5 lines woulda of beaten int whole verse..dats why

vote: soulja

Intrin Sic didnt really have a hard punch, his verse was elementary. flow was ok

Souja had ok puches plus his finish "youll have a chance at me when truth dot com promotes tobacco" was very good. word play ok

VOTE = Soulja

im like manson with a tazer how i stun-and-kill-fags
coat his train wheels with aids and still wont 'run-an-ill-track
equip my dick with spinning blades, watch how this bastard-gets-cut
cuz hes just like a greedy squirrel, always after-my-nuts

Soulja ripped him, alot more hotter punches, and betta flo.

vote:soulja

yo vote soulja .....

its the punches!!!

I thought soulja's punches hit harder than the other nicca's. Sic came coo though. Nice battle.

UP

Some weak fucken votes on this. But whatever, upping.

BREAKDOWN::
 

INTRIN SIC


I heard about this kid named Soulja who goes both ways
This cat even rap's gay.. cause he's dropping an anal phrase

I KNOW WHERE YOUR GOING WITH THIS,NOT MY TYPE OF SHIT I LIKE,I REALLY WASNT FEELING YOUR OPENER HERE,I FELT SETUP WAS WEAK AS WELL AS THE PUNCH.HAVE TO REMEMBER IN THE BEGENNING YOU HAVE TO COME PARTICULARLY HARD.


I'm setting you ablaze.. leavin you burnt the way you flaming for days
Soulja's verse is so played.. your rhymes are full of cliches

AGIAN NOT FEELING THIS SHIT HERE,MAYBE IF YOU REWORDED IT,IT WOULD OF BEEN BETTER FELT


Leaving you laid - my punches reach out.. I'll beat you transcontinental
I'm a bust your mental.. cause your rhyme scheme is so elemental

TOO BASIC HERE,SETUP WASNT FEELING IT,AND PUNCH SECOND COMBO WASNT HARD AT ALL

You in loser's denial - you heard it first so don't touch the dial
Keep your mind intact.. Soulja lacks at spittin true facts

FILLER


I'm a shake you like a heart attack.. got Soulja bringing up the back
And that's a fact - you couldn't win this if you pulled a night shift

FILLER


So get this.. Soulja reaches for a dick before looking for chicks
Check it.. my shit is first rate the way my rhymes elevate

OK SHIT HERE,NOT HARD HITTING,NO EFFECTIVENESS


Mad cats try and emulate.. my style is so fucken great
When Soulja reads my verse he'll try and copy it

FELT THIS WAS FILLER AGAIN BLAHH


So be it - his shit is sure to miss.. and I got him wishing he did
Cause a verse against me is a death request, kid

ok


I'm so ill my verses sell on Ebay for the highest bid
Soulja got more filler than a piece outta his mouth is

FILLER AGAIN BOOO


This kid will ghost faster than a black cat wearing a night cap
I stay strapped.. I'm here to bust bitches who post whack raps

SIMPLE BASIC SHIT,FOR AN ENDING NOT FEELING IT,NEED TO COME THE HARDEST HERE,BUT OK VERSE


SOLJA

mine as well post up a corpse, either way youll 'drop dead
set flames to the spindle, but never spot a hot thread

DECENT OPENER,NOT REALLY HARD HITTING,BUT I FELT THE SETUP WAS OK,AND ENDED COOL WITH THE PUNCH


im like manson with a tazer how i stun-and-kill-fags
coat his train wheels with aids and still wont 'run-an-ill-track

OK SHIT HERE,NOT TOO HARD BUT COOL



equip my dick with spinning blades, watch how this bastard-gets-cut
cuz hes just like a greedy squirrel, always after-my-nuts

COOL,NOT PARTICULARLY HARD BUT DECNT SHIT


1st senior ive ripped, you dont want me to get violent
go back and edit ya post blank bitch and write to remain silent

BLAH AT THIS,NOT LIKING IT


your rhymes suck so face it, as for elevation?
your risin bout as much as someone locked in the basement

BLAH AT THIS ,FILLER SHIT



This aint football, so get off my nuts and stop jockin my style,
dip my head in cemement, you still aint rockin me child,

AGAIN FILLER,NOT LIKEING IT


i eat as many rhymes as my mouth will fit,
you deserve as many W's as in the alphabet,

I KNOW WHERE YOUR GOING WITH THIS,NOT REALLY FEELING IT,REWORD IT BETTER WOULD OF BEEN EFFECTIVE



the truth is your wack now cuz ya ghostwriter backed out,
ill leave ya bones fractured so their like ya mom, CRACKED OUT,

SORTA FUNNY,NOT BAD


i guess your really like your mom cuz your a fuckin wack hoe,
youll have a chance at me when truth dot com promotes tobacco

AGAIN FUNNY SHIT,I GET IT,DECENT ENDING,NOT TOO HARD BUT COOL SHIT


UMM BOTH CAME OK,BUT I FELT SOLJA GOT THIS CAUSE HIS VERSE CAME WITH MORE PUNCHES,NOT SAYING HE HIT HARD BUT HARDER THAN INTRIN SIC,I THOUGHT YOU NEED TO CUT DOWN ON THE USELESS SETUPS,CAUSE ALL YUOU REALLY HAD IN YOUR VERSE WAS FILLER,KEEP SPITTING BRO.

SOULJA WINS
 

SOULJA- 1-0



INTRIN SIC- 0-1