A.K.A. vs String9487
 

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basic rules... you no

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Check in by: 01-02-05 at 09:26 PM

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A.K.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-01-05 09:28 PM.

yo i check you rec you pretty good homie but i beat some of the same people and so that you did so.... this should be a good battle i guess. and i wanted to the only reason i set it up for a long lime to spit was cause i might be able to do it tonight or tomorrow

String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-01-05 11:06 PM.

sorrry it been taking so long but i'm get this done right quick

look i can have cats like you hung by they name
you tryed 9487 times to be hard but you still the same
my words i will make you think so much they'll leave your tongue in knot
this battle will leave you parinoid like will smith in i robot
i'll leave you wit a whole bunch of dead people like a necrophiliac
and even if you wrote ya shit in brail i wouldn't be feeling that
i let dudes get to no my gun in the street
so they'll no that it ain't the record that skipped a beat
just not the pencil ain't the only thing on me that hold lead
and it got the power to pop you in the head for every line you just said

oh you ain't even spit yet i thought i was spitting late

waiting...........................................

come on dude i hate winning by dq.................

hello come on dude his is stupid i hate winning by dq.... but of couse i'll take it

chea,,, yo, u beatin me? i'll need some evidence flashin
dog u got truant wins, cuz their presence is absent
and all ya good punches, they are less than a few
and i dont eat pussey, but i'll make an exception for u
n fuck this cross dressin homo, i'll hit you in ya Vikkis
u just a peanut butta thug, i'll fix you in a JIffy
im startin to get pissed, u betta murk before you git it
and u couldnt beat me if u saw my verse before i spit it
watch me rip this clown, this shit aint hard to do
cuz Google couldnt even find a good bar from you....HOLLA!!

uppin for votes dont sleep on dis one yall get at me

Voted For: String9487


chea,,, yo, u beatin me? i'll need some evidence flashin
dog u got truant wins, cuz their presence is absent

Realli Didnt Make Sence Dont Start It Off Like That 6/10

and all ya good punches, they are less than a few
and i dont eat pussey, but i'll make an exception for u

Wack No Punch Recyled,Heard It 4rm Murda Mook Vs Party Arty Dvd 5/10

n fuck this cross dressin homo, i'll hit you in ya Vikkis
u just a peanut butta thug, i'll fix you in a JIffy

Ok Punch Wat Tha Hell Uss Vikkis Fix That Hommie 6/10

im startin to get pissed, u betta murk before you git it
and u couldnt beat me if u saw my verse before i spit it

Wack Cus Self Glory No Punch Strait Garbage Im Done With Ya Verse 5/10




look i can have cats like you hung by they name
you tryed 9487 times to be hard but you still the same
my words i will make you think so much they'll leave your tongue in knot
this battle will leave you parinoid like will smith in i robot
i'll leave you wit a whole bunch of dead people like a necrophiliac
and even if you wrote ya shit in brail i wouldn't be feeling that
Weak Tha 9487 Line Iss Played No Real Punches Started Off Terrible Vokab Onli In Tha Last Line No Good Wordplay Eitha............

Iight A.k.a Won Thiss Bcus Of His Ok Punches String Wasnt That Far Off But His Realli Wasnt Makiin Sence So String Fix That Stop Usin Otha Pepls Material And Up Ya Vokab

/V A.ka..................

Switched

man wtf how was i supposed to know? who the hell is murda mook???

did yall ever hear that nas song, no idea's orignial?

damn yall are some dumb ass mofuckers what didnt make sense??

well i dont know who he is never heard of him

Voted For: String9487

damn this was a hot battle. aka came with good shit and i really liked reading his verse but DAYUM string brought FIRE like and all ya good punches, they are less than a few
and i dont eat pussey, but i'll make an exception for u
damn string wins, but barely i think he had a little bit better punches and better metaphors compared to aka but this was a really good and close battle. keep it up both but vote-string9487

VOTE ON THE BATTLE IN MY SIG!!!!!

Voted For: String9487

I give it to String
He had way more humore and I like that
Only thing I give to AKA was structure it was easier to understand and read. String, ur personals were dope, punches were pretty good
But u need work on ur multies
Vote- String (by far)

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damn dude i'm surpised that you made it in time. i guess you had a ok verse but foreal whats a vikkis?

victoria secret undewear is vikki's yall aint heard that peaches n cream remix its really not hard to figure out

Voted For: String9487

String: you got this vote cause you dissed in ery line.

aka: yo i'm lookin for an ez win hit me up! lol. keep uppin man.
try to dis in ery line that'll help alot

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Voted For: A.K.A.

Voted for A.K.A

All n all a very even battle but I have to go wit A.K.A cuz his verse seemed a lil more serious

Both of u had harsh punches but A.K.A had a lil more then string

Like how A.K.A used Strings las part of his name in a punchline thas what grabbed my vote

victoria secret undewear is vikki's yall aint heard that peaches n cream remix its really not hard to figure out

uppin holla at ya boy in PM and ur votes will b returned

Voted For: String9487

look i can have cats like you hung by they name
you tryed 9487 times to be hard but you still the same
pretty decent opener not really feeling it much
my words i will make you think so much they'll leave your tongue in knot
this battle will leave you parinoid like will smith in i robot
filler[/b[
i'll leave you wit a whole bunch of dead people like a necrophiliac
and even if you wrote ya shit in brail i wouldn't be feeling that
[b]Dope[/b[
i let dudes get to no my gun in the street
so they'll no that it ain't the record that skipped a beat
[b]Not feeling this
just not the pencil ain't the only thing on me that hold lead
and it got the power to pop you in the head for every line you just said
Decent closer , but you could have done better in your opener and closer

String9487
IP:

chea,,, yo, u beatin me? i'll need some evidence flashin
dog u got truant wins, cuz their presence is absent
Nice opener
and all ya good punches, they are less than a few
and i dont eat pussey, but i'll make an exception for u
Decent
n fuck this cross dressin homo, i'll hit you in ya Vikkis
u just a peanut butta thug, i'll fix you in a JIffy
Lol, Nice
im startin to get pissed, u betta murk before you git it
and u couldnt beat me if u saw my verse before i spit it
lol!!!
watch me rip this clown, this shit aint hard to do
cuz Google couldnt even find a good bar from you....HOLLA!!
Nice closer String took thisone easly

Vote String9487

wtf is this bullshit??? uppin for votes

wtf is this bullshit??? uppin for votes
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wtf is this bullshit??? uppin for votes
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When you see me in tha street, remember.... YOU DONT KNOW ME

wtf is this bullshit??? uppin for votes
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When you see me in tha street, remember.... YOU DONT KNOW ME

wtf is this bullshit??? uppin for votes
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When you see me in tha street, remember.... YOU DONT KNOW ME
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wtf is this bullshit??? uppin for votes
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When you see me in tha street, remember.... YOU DONT KNOW ME

uppin............................................. .....

Voted For: A.K.A.

iight

String9487: this is line as good and bad
and all ya good punches, they are less than a few
and i dont eat pussey, but i'll make an exception for u
^^This was a good punch but made u sound homo

stucture: 8/10
Punches: 8/10
Wordplay: 8/10
openor: 8/10
Closer: 7/10
Total: 39/50

A.k.A:
i'll leave you wit a whole bunch of dead people like a necrophiliac/
and even if you wrote ya shit in brail i wouldn't be feeling that/
^^was a good punch

Structure: 7/10
Wordplay: 9/10
Punches: 9/10
Openor: 7/10
Closer: 8/10
Total: 40/50

so my vote goes to AKA

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Voted For: A.K.A.

i gotta go with a.k.a His punches hit a little harder because not only did he seem to have the only personal but his were a little more original. I've heard string's pussy joke in every form possible. Both had a nice structure but neither had multis. Don't get it twisted though because both verses were tight and it was a close battle but aka got this one.

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uppin lol .....................this is crazzzzy

Voted For: String9487

yet again dawg that was some sick shit but ive heard you spit betta yo good job man

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uppin lol .....................this is crazzzzy