Armada Da 187 vs Damian
 

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Check in by: 01-03-05 at 01:49 PM

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Armada Da 187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-02-05 01:50 PM.

Damian has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-02-05 01:52 PM.

You cant spit a dis?/ "Diss" nigga a joke/
Seems like the bes thing you eva f*ckin do is choke!
C'mon Damian/Nigga be real, me n you is sumtin like a polar bear & seal/ Ima tell you dis dawg "Loose the Rust" u neva gonna recover once "Armada smacks you up"/ 2-2 record? goin be 2-3/ Ima Make u Regret the day u eva battled me/
Dont worry damian dis battles barely begun/ the only nine u eva packed is a "5 n 4 ones!"/ mess wit Armada you goin get hurt/ Ill treat ya like a ostrich, n shove ya head in the dirt/
W/E man dis rhymes sick, word of advice, rap sumbody who wont spit back prick!!!
I made dis battle, results are set, prolly washin dishes so you can finally get ya fingers wet!/ Ya gotta crawl before you walk ,get money fo the gat, hittin u wit mad rhymes makin ya head go splat/ You rnt ready for me fool I jus "stund Ya"/ cock it back blow ya brains all over canada. im laughin as I type , ya poor lil chump, u beatin me? ok and the Toronto Maple LEafs are gonna win the Stanley Cup!!

-PA MILITIANT-

I'll merk you bad like Rosie O'donnel trying to get her baby back
Putting yourself down without even trying,claming that your wack
Im like Donal Trumph's assistant,i have an important mission
I have to make sure to not miss it,destroy Armada Da 187
I bet you had your dick grabed by gays,bodysurfing at a rap concert
de day later asked his father to go back again,he told him to ask his mother
He ran up and ask and begged the slut telling that he would fuck her
You intelligent is exagerated like affonting a two head monster
Hes like a fucking disease lets cover him of a huge plaster
No mather the weather,let him sleep outside while its winter
Rainy or not i dont give i fuck i wish one day youd get hit by thunder

whats the meaning of toronto goona win the cup? andim from quebec lmao anyway uppin

Voted For: Damian

One sided.

open: Damian:"I'll merk you bad like Rosie O'donnel trying to get her baby back
Putting yourself down without even trying,claming that your wack" -Much better. Use of the meta and a harder hitting punch

close: I honestly didnt like any of those closes at all. Honestly Damian you could av done better than that. If the end rhyme was better tho it would have been damian.

Armada's best bar: "Of wat i could make out of that verse this was the best: "Dont worry damian dis battles barely begun/ the only nine u eva packed is a "5 n 4 ones!"/" -This was not good at all but the best in his verse. Honestly bro i dont mean to hate so much but you should just leave now and never look back.

Damian's best bar: "de day later asked his father to go back again,he told him to ask his mother
He ran up and ask and begged the slut telling that he would fuck her" - Was the best done i think. Your only problem was the lack of rhyming Damian. Not that it was a bad verse but i just feel it more wen it rhymes more.

Armada
Overall Armada's verse was really not appealling to me. I thought the flow and structure had gone completely out the window and he just thought fuck it il write til i stop. -Dont fly bro. apologies..

Damian
Damian your verse was good, good punches and quite entertaining but just try and get the rhymes flowing more.

uppin this,its my last battle on RV................

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Fuckin Uppin This Bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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the whole toronto thing wasnt sayin u was from toronto it was jus dissin canadian hockey cuz las tyme i checked quebec didnt have a hockey team if they do n i new about it i would have put them instead of toronto

Voted For: Damian

*sighs* damien, you shouldn't be battling people like this, myself and yourself both know it's wrong LoL.

You get my vote, for the better structure, flow punches and personals.

*sighs dramatically one last time*

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...t=166678&page=1

please hit that up with an honest vote.

Armada, It would be good if you worked your structure out, if you see how damian has it, try and make it like that.

That was probably your biggest downfall.

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Voted For: Armada Da 187

i have to honestly say you both were weak but if i had to vote for one of u it would be armada because he actually had some punchlines

V/armada

Voted For: Damian

both were nothing more than ok but 187 whats up with the stars you afraid to cuss is your mommy readin this while your spittin or somethin? Plus your only good line got killed "the only nine u eva packed is a "5 n 4 ones!"/ "after you started talkin bout gat splat blowin his brains out that was whack rookie shit plus your structure was more crooked then George Bushs hairline.

Damian your verse was ok nothing personal nothin that connected at least you didnt kill your only good line "I bet you had your dick grabed by gays,bodysurfing at a rap concert" so my vote goes to damian

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so i told that guy,so what up and...oh sorry i didnt see that no one was voting muy bad

drry bout the starrs yo las site i rapped on didnt allow full out cuss words or else u get in trouble so i star the one word but now that I know i wont start "The Fuckin Shit anymo you cocksuckin ma fucka" pfftt plus im not sure how peeps sayin damians punches r harder then mine i read his verse nothing he said even made since to me his lyrics didnt rhyme half the tyme plus the only thing i saw that dissed me was his mission was to destroy me, mos u guys r prolly a alias or sumtin cuz his came nowhere close to mine ya heard w/e yo w/e

whats the prog? dont get mad cuz im beating you,yah like your toronto mapple lead had sens,look s'only a battle

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Voted For: Damian

v/damian......he gets my vote because of creative punchs an his vocab was better.....armada...ur verse lacked vocab an creativity u need to elavate no hate....
punchs=damian
multi's=damian
vocab=damian
structure=damian
overall=damian
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

Voted For: Damian

Weak Shit 4rm Both You....
Openor=Dam His Shit Made Sence
Strukture=Dam His Wass Easier Ta Read
Punches=Dam Had Some Ok Punches
Vokab=None Both Could Use Some Vokab
Personals=None Didnt Cee N e 4rm Eitha
Closer=Both Wass Weak So None

Dam Took This Came Harder Had Better Strukture,Ok Wordplay Some Ya Words Didnt Rhyme Elivate Ya Vokab,Personals,Punches And Rhyming...............

/V Damian...............