Os1ris vs <..8..>
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-03-05 at 06:04 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Os1ris has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-03-05 05:35 PM.

This kid has nothing against me so he's already at a loss/
This guys useless like whoopi goldberg usin dental floss/
My verse aint that good but to your its great/
Leave this guys stomach on the sidewalks the only way he can carry his own weight/
So sit back relax and enjoy this consistent tongue lashin/
Slicin this guy up so bad the coroner gotta investigate in fractions/
This guy should have went first because he aint seein me later/
And your verse is generic and full of ass like your avatar/
Im the king while your the rook, there's no checkmate/
And you could remove the symbols in your name and still be left 8(Ate)........

&lt;..8..&gt; has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-03-05 05:40 PM.

this guy made many mistakes, he shoulda stayed-away/
i'll leave you like allen iverson, the way you fade-away/
the battle we partakin in is like a poodle fightin a pit/
you gonna get ate alive, some one come pick him outta my shit/
sorry ass nicca, i think he need a little bit of affection/
cause the way he starin at my lil pic i think he gettin an erection/
pay attention, accept already, i'm gettin tired of waitin/
accept/ decline whatever bitch quit debatin/
are you serious osiris, you think you can get by this/
jump up, meet the pump, come on go ahead and try it/

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Voted For: Os1ris

You Got Me Vote..
Your Wordplay Was Nice.. And You Had Really Good Humor Duke.. Disses Were There.. Just Work On Ya PUnches..

Hit Me Up With A Vote.,. Battles In The Sig..

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uppin this damn people vote ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^

57 muthafuggin looks in 1 vote rv is a fuggin joke damn

Voted For: Os1ris

Ok for me both did decent but osiris for me came out ontop, for me it was consistant and just a outclassed really, i think u both need to work on ur punches and metaz
so yea vote goes to osiris

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Voted For: Os1ris

i give it to osiris hands down man
both verses where elementary to me
but osiros where hardhere hittin because his ounches and personals where true about ya avatar
and the number ate in y anames he just killed that line
and your LIne 8 was just so elemtary are your lines where lack luister u could of came way harder man
vote osiris

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This was feedback posted for Os1ris
 

lines was betta an hotta an dat other fag was wack tell hem 2 front line me cuzzz he wack my lil sista got hotta rymes den dat an im talkin bout NURSURY RHYMEZ

murkz if i'm so whack why haven't you posted on our battle? huh? what up now? i smell a ko!

this battle was whack!

Voted For: &amp;lt;..8..&amp;gt;

8 won this battle but both of yall need a lot of work. 8 had better punches, flow and structure. try to put more multies in if u can. 90% of osiris' verse didnt make sense to me idk maybe ijm just slow but his punches didnt really hit or make sense
holla at me
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Voted For: Os1ris

very close battle....i was juss checkin out my oppenent but it aint look too good fo him...lol
TOO bad.
I THINK os1ris won dis battle, because his punches hit harder and he had the better personals. not to mention the betta vocab.
v/os1ris

*yawn*uppin this thing once more ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Voted For: Os1ris

OS gets this he had allright strucutre and his hits where kind of harder but I just think he came harder and hey keep elevating homes iight.

OS

This kid has nothing against me so he's already at a loss/
This guys useless like whoopi goldberg usin dental floss/
My verse aint that good but to your its great/
Leave this guys stomach on the sidewalks the only way he can carry his own weight/
So sit back relax and enjoy this consistent tongue lashin/
Slicin this guy up so bad the coroner gotta investigate in fractions/
This guy should have went first because he aint seein me later/
7.5/10

eight

this guy made many mistakes, he shoulda stayed-away/
i'll leave you like allen iverson, the way you fade-away/
the battle we partakin in is like a poodle fightin a pit/
you gonna get ate alive, some one come pick him outta my shit/
sorry ass nicca, i think he need a little bit of affection/
cause the way he starin at my lil pic i think he gettin an erection/
6.9/10

hit up on my links peace

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