Never Pull The Trigga (Limited Edition, WillAPeer, Hook by 20 Grand)
 

Link in sig bitches...peep it........

Links:

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1870288
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1870294

omg what did u do to my flow lol

u made me off beat jesus i might pull the trigger now :(

Send your vocals with the muted beat...like I said to before...and I will upload it again hopefully before anybody sees haha...

oh btw beat by conflicting cause of con pro production/odp get at him buy some beats u cheap hoes
gotta show love to the hometown kids

maybe up the vocals a lil on all.
better flow limited, can be elevated a lil, but better quality
CHorus OWNED who ever did it, o me lol
willa idk wtf that is lol he must have messed up mixing... flow = 0 lol

was cool, didnt like the beat..LEdition flow was aight,gd content in what you where ayin, barely made out WAPeer was sayin..and chorus was cool asweel..was a deep topic and well handled
overall-8/10

My Fault Willapeer Sounds Bad. She's Dope...

..i'm Wack.

:huh:
yea he messed it all up he put it in there wrong i have no idea how he messed it up that bad though lol :huh:

nice shit bro. you flow nicecly i like ur style we should collab sometime. keep doing ur thing.

ok le u need ot fix it now or take it off or something

send him ur vocals mixed with muted beat, that way start time is 0 and he CANT mess up lol imppossible to

woops thought this was LE song i listened to last nite n didnt leave feed on. i'll listen to this when willapeers verse is fixed.

<<<<<<<<<< is fixing to pull the trigger give it to someone else to mix or something how could u not tell u had me off beat lol

yo send me ur accepelas
AIM is and1rightherr

ROFL LMAO at willa peer damn u were off beat nice lyrics tho like 20 grand i think he owned the song LE nice flow nice lyrics overall nice track

check this out and leave feed http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=168012

Wow, not bad guys, the first guy needs to work on flow a little bit, and willa, what happened? lol,its all good girl,i know what your capable of, good lyrics by all tho..not a bad hook, it was aiight...keep it up..1

damnit it wasnt my fault lol read the posts le fucked it up

A'ight I think I fixed it...I'll get at you on AIM...

waiting

FIXED. Peep it...don't wanna repost haha...will if I have to...

better, im still not feeln her verse, but it may just be her.. lol idk good job though

quality on the hook could be a little better....something sounds off, but it fits the beat real nice......first verse.....flow is shaky, seems like you odnt have very good breath control, work on that, lyrics are "ok", nothing special really....but not bad...delivery is decent, but needs some improvement, try to make people believe what your saying, you kinda sound like your just reading off of paper or somethin.....

2nd verse...is dude like 12?...lol, flow is ok....not to many falloffs....deliver is ok, but to be honest im not believin these lyrics just cuz of his voice, thats just my opinion, im not sayin its impossible...lol...but whatever, decent verse homie...



decent track yall....both need some improvements but thats the point of spittin, find where u need to elevate...



peep mine...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=169832