Death vs Hammer
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-07-05 at 01:20 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Death has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-04-05 01:24 PM.

this lil noobie just dont know/
im tight my flow keeps flowing like H2O/

ill use my punchlines to break this nigga down to size/
fuckin around with me is a death wish and your bout to meet your demise/

ill own this nigga with lyrical domination/
im real and your just a fake imatation/

post ya verse nigga

Hammer has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-04-05 03:07 PM.

Im not black or a rascist, he said im a nigger, I hate that
Dont make me bigger to say ur a wigger, u probaly aint black

Your Original Crap, its gay like you enamored with Seth*
Like you a toy, i play with you, you get hammered to death

Thinks he’s death himself causing plagues of locus**
Caught you staring at a ford for an hour cos it said “focus”

*Enomored with Seth = Gay and loves Seth Cowen from of the OC
**plague of locus = dates back to plagues of locus god send to cause death to egyptians

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Who did ya sig death?

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how many times i gotta up this??

damn!

Voted For: Death

punches-Death
personals-none really, but Hammer had one
multies-none
structure-Death's was structured better
creativity-Death had a little more creativity to his verse
wordplay-Hammer
vocab-tie

Hammer-your verse wasn't too good, you didn't have too much creativity and your punches lacked.

Death-your verse was alright, you had a little more creativity than Hammer and you had better punches.

Voted For: Hammer

Vote=Hammer
Im not black or a rascist, he said im a nigger, I hate that
Dont make me bigger to say ur a wigger, u probaly aint black
tight personal if its true, gd opener - 8/10
Your Original Crap, its gay like you enamored with Seth*
Like you a toy, i play with you, you get hammered to death
personal and diss, gd filler - 7/10
Thinks he’s death himself causing plagues of locus**
Caught you staring at a ford for an hour cos it said “focus”
wordplay,punch, gd closer - 7.5/10


this lil noobie just dont know/
im tight my flow keeps flowing like H2O/
playeddddddddddd..lame-6/10
ill use my punchlines to break this nigga down to size/
fuckin around with me is a death wish and your bout to meet your demise/
ok bar for a filler, bu no punch - 7/10
ill own this nigga with lyrical domination/
im real and your just a fake imatation
nice floe, vocab, ok punch -7.5/10

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want some votessssss

Voted For: Hammer

okay i was gonna break this down till i read deaths verse to much self glorification in it to bother hammer gets this for actually going after his opponent and that ford line hahaha hammered to death loved it.... aight then enough said hammer = vote

displosive must be confused....

Voted For: Hammer

Death

this lil noobie just dont know/
im tight my flow keeps flowing like H2O/
^self-glorification: big no-no!

ill use my punchlines to break this nigga down to size/
fuckin around with me is a death wish and your bout to meet your demise/
^no punch

ill own this nigga with lyrical domination/
im real and your just a fake imatation/
^it'll do i guess

Weak drop in fact, had some lines who got potential of good punch or personal but it didn't came out that way. Vocab was good, structure could be slighty better though, just elevate...read other battles...no hate...


Hammer

Im not black or a rascist, he said im a nigger, I hate that
Dont make me bigger to say ur a wigger, u probaly aint black
^decent opener

Your Original Crap, its gay like you enamored with Seth*
Like you a toy, i play with you, you get hammered to death
^okay okay

Thinks he’s death himself causing plagues of locus**
Caught you staring at a ford for an hour cos it said “focus”
^nice closer

Overall good drop, maybe some more bold things in there but it's all good...Vocab, structure n flow were tight, nothing really bad in here, just keep on doing your thing!

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Voted For: Hammer

Hammer gets this one aint nothin specail he just came harder and had more personels his opener-closure was better he had more vocab and better multis in his you just need to elevate on ur rhyming and multis and most of all vocab no hate tho.




Im not black or a rascist, he said im a nigger, I hate that
Dont make me bigger to say ur a wigger, u probaly aint black

Your Original Crap, its gay like you enamored with Seth*
Like you a toy, i play with you, you get hammered to death

Thinks he’s death himself causing plagues of locus**
Caught you staring at a ford for an hour cos it said “focus”
hammer: 8.8/10


this lil noobie just dont know/
im tight my flow keeps flowing like H2O/

ill use my punchlines to break this nigga down to size/
fuckin around with me is a death wish and your bout to meet your demise/
5.4/10 keep elevating

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Voted For: Hammer

hammer gets my vote because his punches were better then death's which isn't saying much in this battle but it seems neither of you had your head in this battle. anyway the flow was so basic in this battle it was hard to decide but hammer's punches were stronger. you flo like water? fake imitation? Come on and i thought you were gon do somethin wit dude name when you said break him down to size. even though hammer wasn't alot better his personal saved his verse and the explanations cleared the enamored with seth up except did locusts actually kill anyone in the bible or was that just a scare tactic...anyway hammer gets my vote...
oh and check ya boy on there...i'm doin my thing

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