ill game vs Dopeman
 

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No Recycling
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ill game has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-04-05 06:51 PM.

Dopeman has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-04-05 06:57 PM.

ill put rocks in my gun, just to get you stoned
i want to battle your ass.its to late e.t already phoned home
lyrically and physically im bout to give this dog a bone
ill take away weed and make u all alone
another tone u seem kinda stupid, i mean look at ur name
you signed up for this battle kid so u have no one else to blame
u lack any sing of intelliegence that what im starting to think
whenever you come hard..another guy washes it down the sink
now cherish the day you were born..cuz never again ur gonan touch pink

how the hell did u come up with ''ill game''?...
sucker, u cant even fulfill your name....
maybe if u strain your brain...
...you'll think of some good flow
all ya talk is tame n lame...
...its like u lost your mojo..
everytime u ''busta-rhyme'' these people never want ''mo''..
i'ma ship u to ''oz''...
...dress u up as a woman n have some homo make u ''get low''
oops u dropped the soap...
...now technically with these texts your gettin finger fucked by dope :)

Voted For: ill game

wtf dopeman????the shortest bars ever
they probably equal like 3 bars if u strcuture it
thats just so god damn sad..why'd u come weak?
juist cuz somebody got low post don't mean you
gotta come wack like this..man come on fam..
nothing good to say about you whatsoever

Ill Game

I've seen better raps off you on RB more often
you had an okay wordplay opener..but thats pretty much it
but you beat him basically in everything else..like structure,
flow,complexity and didn't have the word "mojo" in it

you sooooooooo win

This was feedback posted for ill game
 

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This was feedback posted for ill game
 

Ok this battle was pretty funny, both need to elevate hard, basic as but ill game for me gets this, he just has wat is needed hard to explain, but keep elevating

could u return the favour and vote here http://community.rapverse.com/showb...404#post1872404

Voted For: ill game

have to go with ill no hate iight I think he just had a better strucutre and a better flow. He had a little harder hits but keep elevating both of ya it was an ok bat but I went with ill becuase his strucutre was better and it was easier to understand.

ILL
ill put rocks in my gun, just to get you stoned
i want to battle your ass.its to late e.t already phoned home
lyrically and physically im bout to give this dog a bone
ill take away weed and make u all alone
another tone u seem kinda stupid, i mean look at ur name
you signed up for this battle kid so u have no one else to blame
u lack any sing of intelliegence that what im starting to think
7/10


DOPE

how the hell did u come up with ''ill game''?...
sucker, u cant even fulfill your name....
maybe if u strain your brain...
...you'll think of some good flow
all ya talk is tame n lame...
...its like u lost your mojo..
everytime u ''busta-rhyme'' these people never want ''mo''..
i'ma ship u to ''oz''...
5.9/10
keep elevating tho homes

and return the fav it is in the sig.

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once again bump,..................................

Voted For: Dopeman

hmm Ima have to say Dope gots dis...a lil better punches n vocab than ill game..n ill game his name just well creeps me out lol but yea
Multies-Dope
Punches-Dope
Structure-both
creativity-hmmmmm Dope

v/ Dope
good battle yall

Voted For: Dopeman

Vote for dopeman. He had punches and personals. And ill-game you neede to come a bit harder than that, if your going to challenge someone a little higher up. My advice would be to work your way up, which is how most people do it.

Dopeman the opener probably took it for you. It was pretty nice.

If you could I would appreciate it if you would hit this link up with an honest vote, as it's getting pretty badly slept on.

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...t=166678&page=1

Thanks.

bumpiedy bump i need this win please yall vote....

Voted For: Dopeman

ill put rocks in my gun, just to get you stoned
i want to battle your ass.its to late e.t already phoned home
weak punch
lyrically and physically im bout to give this dog a bone
ill take away weed and make u all alone
extend ur flow longer, punch was good
another tone u seem kinda stupid, i mean look at ur name
you signed up for this battle kid so u have no one else to blame
pretty decent…
u lack any sing of intelliegence that what im starting to think
whenever you come hard..another guy washes it down the sink
now cherish the day you were born..cuz never again ur gonan touch pink
nice multi’s but weak punch to it though


how the hell did u come up with ''ill game''?...
sucker, u cant even fulfill your name....
decent opener, extend ur flow hoe…
maybe if u strain your brain...
...you'll think of some good flow
all ya talk is tame n lame...
...its like u lost your mojo..
nice multi’s but a weak punch to it though…+ played
everytime u ''busta-rhyme'' these people never want ''mo''..
i'ma ship u to ''oz''...
...dress u up as a woman n have some homo make u ''get low''
pretty decent punch here…
oops u dropped the soap...
...now technically with these texts your gettin finger fucked by dope
punch line was aight here…

Overall Dopeman took this one…punches were harder and had a better
Drop overall to it…ill game elevate more though, and work on your punches
While ur @ it…

shit, i forgot about this, uppin folk!!!!!

Honest votes will be returned

Voted For: Dopeman

real weak batlle but imma give BS my vote had hot flow and punches hit much harder ill game ur just weak came rly wack BS take my vote easy even though u both came weak he had punches and flow

I did come whack, this battle has been open for months n months lol

Before chirstmas i think lol

Uppin y'all

Voted For: Dopeman

this was an 1-sided battle here's my opinion:
opener: buck.shot
vocab: buck
structure: buck
multis: buck
punches: buck
personals: buck
closer: buck
buck came harder & hit wit more punches in this battle den ill game; game needs 2 elevate in his rhymes
make sure 2 return the favor