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Explizit* vs d.j em sce
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting drop verse as son as possible Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-05-05 at 04:50 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Explizit* has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-05 04:23 PM.
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d.j em sce has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-05 04:23 PM.
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how long is it going to take to drop your verse becuz i got to go in like a lil bit so hurry up and drop your verse................is that coo
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im done with my verse so ill drop it. drop yours to
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If you’re a d.j. I’ll scratch you just like a disk/
A matter a fact you lower so I’ll scratch you like my dick/ You can call yourself an emcee but those are just letters/ I’ll stomp you like a stamp on a post card bout to go in the mail in rainy wheatear/ You’re not an M.C. you’re an F-A-G/ This site is for rippers so you got to leave/ |
aight im almost finished so go ahead................
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I know u tryna diss my verse right now but hurry the fuck up so i can win
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After this people will reminisce on how explizits punches tend to miss
your style is so tired it even leaves your free agent threads slept so you had to go and join a herbish crew full of fake vets i spit so much heat………..it peel back your skin like potatoes So I suggest you lay low before this K.O turns your hat into a halo god claims you’re an idiot so go ahead and think rv is at its end even before this battle started you admitted that I would win qiuck spit.............lest get some votes............. |
i dropped mines already.....................i see you havent posted your yet.......
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After this people will reminisce on how explizits punches tend to miss
your style is so tired it even leaves your free agent threads slept so you had to go and join a herbish crew full of fake vets i spit so much heat………..it peel back your skin like potatoes So I suggest you lay low before this K.O turns your hat into a halo god claims you’re an idiot so go ahead and think rv is at its end even before this battle started you admitted that I would win qiuck spit.............lest get some votes.............. |
ok now u ready to lose to a noobie....................
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uppin...can some one vote already. damn it plz vote
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Voted For: d.j em sce
ok, ur attempted punches were weak, but ur structure and wordplay was nice, 2nd guys first few linez were good, but fell off at the end, 1st guy got my vote http://community.rapverse.com/showb...874447&posted=1 |
Voted For: d.j em sce
ok, ur attempted punches were weak, but ur structure and wordplay was nice, 2nd guys first few linez were good, but fell off at the end, 1st guy got my vote http://community.rapverse.com/showb...874447&posted=1 |
wtf yo. some one vote please. you guys are taking a long as time.
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Voted For: d.j em sce
If you’re a d.j. I’ll scratch you just like a disk/ A matter a fact you lower so I’ll scratch you like my dick/ You can call yourself an emcee but those are just letters/ I’ll stomp you like a stamp on a post card bout to go in the mail in rainy wheatear/ You’re not an M.C. you’re an F-A-G/ This site is for rippers so you got to leave/ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^played punches, no flow.Had some personals (dissing his name) but still it was an played punch. your style is so tired it even leaves your free agent threads slept so you had to go and join a herbish crew full of fake vets i spit so much heat………..it peel back your skin like potatoes So I suggest you lay low before this K.O turns your hat into a halo god claims you’re an idiot so go ahead and think rv is at its end even before this battle started you admitted that I would win ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Nice CreaTive. good punches, with some personals. overall= Hands down to CreaTive, with punches (harder and decent) Flow was good, personals you had was good. E you need to elevate on punches and flow with some struture, you've come weak and played with your punches. I give this to CreaTive for harder punches. ps.CreaTive is an vet. lol. |
Yall see my vote?.................cause i dont see it.
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yo more people vote......uppin....................
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Voted For: d.j em sce
ex had a ok opener...Punches Where ok connecting sum of the time...Vocab was pretty bad seen better from you...Structure not bad but not good...Flow was good...need just a lil more elavating and you got it goin for ya.. dj ok opener..Punches where lil better...Vocab alrite...Structure started gettin boring for me...Flow was tite so that means it was good.... v/dj but just by a microscopic bit...both are almost to the top of there game...so keep workin this was a good battle |
well uppin for soem type of feedabck or votes.........
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upppin for some voters or atleast some sort of feedback
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This was feedback posted for Explizit*
dj all over man he dug shit up n you and put it on your face
mets flow and style 8.0/10 |
please wake this battle up it wont stop sleeping.......
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This was feedback posted for d.j em sce
UPPIN' FOR THE FINE BATTLECATS!!!
merkalization crhymie.......merkalization. one. ...the super... |
upppin for some fucking voters damn...............
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uppinf or more voeters it been hella long burosfnlsdkfgdflgnfgn
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uppin for voters......................are something.................
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Voted For: d.j em sce
good job man this spit was aight but get a tuffer opponent next time man |
this is not a freepost...well i didnt pay for it so maybe it is
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oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oo
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^^^^^UPPIN'^^^^^
s.v. dangerous..........crhyme sindicate |
Voted For: d.j em sce
ha! this battle was completely one sided. dj took this one w/ personals mainly, altho tha punches were ill...i think personals got him.rhyming were way better in this one. seeing how explizit came weak... explizit-u aint doin it big homie. ur opening bar just took it all off for u...how u start says a lot for tha rest of ur rhyme most of tha time, and u came off weak...ur punches werent there, and a bar or 2 were stretched. work on that... dj took this one by a far....... plz return tha vote on my battle in sig...for real...both yall honestly |
..............uppppiinnnn this...thanks for uppin this battle SV....
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uppity upptiy............................................ .....................
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This was feedback posted for d.j em sce
YOU fuckkin biter....GET OFF MY LYRICS...you probly think I didn't uise that line when I battled you at school...I'll find the link....I though you were bigger then me to know not to bite from me...
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Voted For: d.j em sce
well this was easy........ explicit...... 1st bar- no no no no no......not a good opener 2nd-not good 3rd- even worse DJ...... 1st-good opener...good personal...hit hard 2nd-nice concept...hit good...good bar 3rd-another good set of personal....good closer ok basically..... dj gets this because of punches...personal...everything.....his verse was just on another level.......explicits punches didnt hit...he had no personals...no wordplay...nothing......dj came pretty good....and ex cam weak.....that should explain my vote pretty well................. Dj.....please return the favor...links in sig |
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