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(x) CeEd vs Diplosive
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 25 Check in by: 01-08-05 at 09:14 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
(x) CeEd has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-05 09:21 PM.
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homie accept
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yo...
Son. your like the great "Dip" wit'out the so called "losive" Im'a eat your Chips as if the "Sour Cream" had gone Corrosive, Heres the Motive..... i'll come on top of you and be like Great "Hillary" You beatin' me is like Bin Laden havin' his own Millitary.......Lyrically ima beat your rhymes Physically, and blow you up like "HEAVY ARTILLERY" I'll make you come down like the world wuz truly endin' hurt you like Disneys "Gargoyles" and play wit' you like the Gremlins...... Son, ima sweep you away like the SOUTH ASIAN Tsunami... Kid ima fold you up and unfold you like you were really Origami..... Ima make your brain "TICK TOCK" literally like you were "GWEN STEFFANI" Never pick beef wit' a Grown man ima make you resent this.....relentless i'll choke you more than choker chain your like the "Presley" wit' out the Elvis |
shit yo ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,look the flow is wack cuz of the font aiight i aactually ment font size 3 sorry but hey,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, uppin this and kat spit ur shit homie
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Diplosive has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-05 10:55 PM.
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yo kat spit homie......................................... i already have so,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, yer
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dawg when are you gnna spit you r shit ........................................
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yo dawg wen r u gonna spit i already have aiight.............
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6 - unlimited lines? LOL, i'll just key something up real quickly
thought your shit wuz flames but my bars burried the fuse- I can't strip you of nothin, unlike Pac-u never carried the juice- this ur best day?-u can have ur little co-leader spot for SA- but ur no comp-this il be a 'fast' battle like 'watchin' tha 'Jets play'- yo X-Ceed-u'd be better off tryin to jet-ski than to test me- ur raps dont impress me-cuz my flows on steriods-urs are anarexy- yea i read your off the dome and you aint grindin whore- i find you very sore-using lines that i heard way back in '94- u plex?-fight then nigger-be gansta?-u dont look right wit pistols- n ur record always have mores losts than wins like tha clippers- take a hike like Jigga in tha industry-u got nuts but not growin hair- ur off da dome thread's like 'the abortion topic'-cus 'nobody's goin there'- ur ball's aren't as big as Ds pair-Street Shorty said urs feel like 'touchin brail'- ur no typical male-not with a 'dick' that 'screws' like mini-ture-'nails'- its just a po' fact-ya might get 'Robbed' wit more whoa! then 'Black'- u know ur wack-'dirty teeth' is the only thing u got to show for 'plaques'- I spit inert disease to freeze ur weak work-u need church to warm it in- cus after this verse-the only way u'll be alive to reply is if ur -born again'- You probably think your 'flows' are ill, say bitch-unlimited lines?-i come fresh while you spittin basics- you beatin me is 'non-cents' like 'Quickie Marts' ran by 'Arabics'- done. |
uppin for votes...................................
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Voted For: Diplosive
thought your shit wuz flames but my bars burried the fuse- I can't strip you of nothin, unlike Pac-u never carried the juice- NOT A BAD START.... this ur best day?-u can have ur little co-leader spot for SA- but ur no comp-this il be a 'fast' battle like 'watchin' tha 'Jets play'- NICE FLOW yo X-Ceed-u'd be better off tryin to jet-ski than to test me- ur raps dont impress me-cuz my flows on steriods-urs are anarexy- HAHA NICE SHIT, yea i read your off the dome and you aint grindin whore- i find you very sore-using lines that i heard way back in '94- OK, u plex?-fight then nigger-be gansta?-u dont look right wit pistols- n ur record always have mores losts than wins like tha clippers- COOL take a hike like Jigga in tha industry-u got nuts but not growin hair- ur off da dome thread's like 'the abortion topic'-cus 'nobody's goin there'- CALL ME DUMB BUT I DONT GET IT? ur ball's aren't as big as Ds pair-Street Shorty said urs feel like 'touchin brail'- ur no typical male-not with a 'dick' that 'screws' like mini-ture-'nails'- I DONT PLAY THE GAME SO IF U GOTTA SCREW THE NAIL THAT WAS A SICK PUNCH its just a po' fact-ya might get 'Robbed' wit more whoa! then 'Black'- u know ur wack-'dirty teeth' is the only thing u got to show for 'plaques'- FUNNY SHIT I spit inert disease to freeze ur weak work-u need church to warm it in- cus after this verse-the only way u'll be alive to reply is if ur -born again'- NOT FEELING THIS You probably think your 'flows' are ill, say bitch-unlimited lines?-i come fresh while you spittin basics- you beatin me is 'non-cents' like 'Quickie Marts' ran by 'Arabics'- ACTULLY THEY MAKE THE MOST MONEY, BUT I KNOW WHAT U WAS TRYING TO SAY THOU GOOD ATTEMP DAWGS U'R VERSE WAS FIRE HOT PUNCHES GOOD FLOW MAN HOT VERSE 8.5 HIT HIM HARD EXCEED LETS GO, yo... Son. your like the great "Dip" wit'out the so called "losive" Im'a eat your Chips as if the "Sour Cream" had gone Corrosive, OOO GOOD START Heres the Motive..... i'll come on top of you and be like Great "Hillary" You beatin' me is like Bin Laden havin' his own Millitary.......Lyrically OO SHIT THAT'LL NEVER HAPPEN GOOD ONE ima beat your rhymes Physically, and blow you up like "HEAVY ARTILLERY" I'll make you come down like the world wuz truly endin' hurt you like Disneys "Gargoyles" and play wit' you like the Gremlins...... I DONT KNOW WHAT HAPPEN TO U'R STRCTURE ITS ALL FUCKED UP DAWGS Son, ima sweep you away like the SOUTH ASIAN Tsunami... Kid ima fold you up and unfold you like you were really Origami..... BASIC Ima make your brain "TICK TOCK" literally like you were "GWEN STEFFANI" Never pick beef wit' a Grown man ima make you resent this.....relentless i'll choke you more than choker chain your like the "Presley" wit' out the Elvis MAN THE ENDING COULD OF BEEN BETTER DAWGS THE WAY U STARTED I THOUGHT IT WAS GOING TO BE A GOOD BATTLE BUT MAN U REALLY FELL DA FUCK OFF MAN TOWARDS THE END SHIT GOT ALL FUCKED UP DANM ALL U NEED IT TO DO WAS KEEP GOING LIKE THE INTRO n SHIT BUT GOOD TRY DAWGS |
uppin this battle katz ........................cmon votes will b returnd
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yo uppin this fuked battle......................................
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Voted For: (x) CeEd
flow- (x) CeEd multies- (x) CeEd punches- (x) CeEd overall- (x) CeEd VOTE- (x) CeEd Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Diplosive
diplosive clearly took this battle...he had better more complex punches.....smooth transitions and everything....his verse flowed all 2-getha so imo.. v/diplosive Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Diplosive
Ceed U need to work on ur structure its hard to understand sometimes Opener-Tie Punches-Displosive Personals- Displosive Flow-Displosive Structure- Displosive Wordplay-Displosive Closure-Displosive Enjoyment-Displosive E-Z battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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