50hater_killer vs d-cËpt!0n
 

Battle Rules:

10 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Topic: You are a hostage in the US Embassy

Minimum posts to vote: 60

Check in by: 01-05-05 at 10:21 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Win by forfeit

50hater_killer has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-05 09:37 PM.

d-cËpt!0n has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-05 09:38 PM.

Opener//
The doors where painted with blood,
while the men fleed in the building like a flood.
I was force underneath my desk,
where I could smeel the stintch of death.

verse//
I lie underneath my desk, 1
as the smell of flesh ripped through my mind.2
I could hear the screams of men and women as they shot,3
but all I could do was watch as they took shots like pot.
The windows where painted with blood,4
while the bullets filled the room like water does ina flood.5
I tried to peer through my swollen eyes from the gas,
but all I saw was a vivid image of a throat being slashed, 6
I heard their vivid yells,
but as they shot out the window I heard the military bells. 7

They searched the office for their men and women,8
but when I dared not to move I was thrown like a toy of he-man.9
They lined us all up one by one as if we where gonna be bought,10
as I listened to their sorrow prairers I hear their last minute breath will they where shot. 11
I am stuck in a crisis, 12
where this will not be resolved due to some political biasis. 13
as they came face to face with their prize, 14
I was scared and I am not gonna tell no lie. 15
as my final hour came with the light, 16
I could only see as the gun shot into my eyes with a light yet so bright. 17
as I lay in my own pool with my killers,
I knew that this day would be the day that would be known as the terroist fillers.

uppppppppppppppppppppppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

In a dark room, Im consumed by the absence of light
Little girls doom, startled by the precense of a knife
"Everyday we will take a life, until the payment comes
She was first in line, little girl's time was done
With a flick of the wrist, made a slit in her throat
Then completely beheaded , ripped like a sacrificial goat
Mother's face sprayed with the life liquid of her little girl
Tears me blood droplets as it mixed with each pearl
The face cast into a gaze dropped into her mothers lap
She kissed the fore head, looked up, started to laugh
My companion is a woman, lost her daughter and her head
At night the screams mix with dreams drenched in red
Been six days now all i smell is the stench of dead
I go back to see that woman her face still smiling lifelessly
Then Im met by eu

Pressed post by accident but guess dere aint nothin I can do about it.

Voted For: d-cËpt!0n

Vote goes to D


cause .. 50 kept usin the same words again .. like Desk. and his flow was off .. and the vocan was 5th Grade Minded ..

D got this .. ferr shizzlin .. cause i like'd his flow .. n shiit .. and his shit was deep .. This shit was nice image shit thing ..

Nuff said

what da fuck ever ok where upppin still in her!!!!

^^^^^^^^^^^uppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iinnnnnnnnnn^^^^^^^^^^^

Voted For: d-cËpt!0n

iight im votin for deception reason bein he had a consistant way of makin you visualize how tragic such a thing could be...and reason why i aint vote for 50hater here..was cuz the opener was trash and yet you showed you aint have a good vocab rhymin wit flood in the opener and then once again in ya verse?..and the same for the word vivid as well..but yeah my vote goes to Deception 1ne..

thnx ho uppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnn dis one.

Upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin. Ill return the favor by votin honestly on your battle

Upiin this thing for votes. cmon people................Il return votes honestly.

cmon people lez finish dis. Plz vote on dis. Cmon

Voted For: d-cËpt!0n

d-cept!on i think won this battle not by a long shot just his imagey was a little more on-point 50_hater your verse was good i just think you could have shortened it and still got more detail so that my vote - d-cept!on

iight ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^uppin dis one^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

UPpin this bitch fo sho/...................................

uppppppppin fur some votes up in her^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^