Kordozar vs Kamikazee
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-05-05 at 11:13 PM

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Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-05 10:44 PM.

Kamikazee has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-05 10:45 PM.

yo im tellin u right now i throw real hard punches dat "Hit-Man"
da only votes dat he will get is from his dick ridin hoes dats "His-Fans"
You fuckin wit a real G i will merk in jus a couple lines and leace u "Word-Less"
u should have listen to me when i said u dont want dis anotha victim to my "Merk-List"
talkin shit in da thread sayin im trash dat y i jus smoked ur ass "Kordozar"
U jus goin to have to take dis L jus fo thinkin stuff like dat cuz dat wont get "You-2-Far"
Truth is homie I jus added anotha soul to my fucking "Hit-List"
u might ask for a rematch but u might as well not "Risk-It"


No hate and Goodluck cuzz...~1~

iight dat structure is a lill wack but da verse i think is syck.......lol goodluck........~1~

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Voted For: Kordozar

Didnt Want Ta Be 1-10,Restarted His Rekord Kid Knew Wea He Was Heading..
And His Gang Is Tha Controversial Thing Since Gay Ppls Weddings.....................

^ dat was sick, it was a little streched but it killed him. umm Ko had the betta punches, wordplay and metas. and to Ka may i suggest stop using the quoatation marks (").
v/Kodazar

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Voted For: Kordozar



vs.

nothing.

meh, this was a one sided battle in my opinion. but, for the sake of adequate feedback..

Kamikazee, you really need to elevate man. Your flow was about the only decent thing in your whole verse. Your concepts were wack and not witty, your punches weren't hard hitting, and your attempted wordplay was really bad man.

Kordozar, your verse was alright. It was a lot harder hitting than Kam's was in my opinion. Your concepts were wittier and you had a good personal, which I quoted. Your flow was alright.. overall though, you came much harder than your opponent.

Like I said, this was a one sided battle. Kordozar just came harder in every aspect. He had better flow, punches, personals, and concepts... so for these reasons..

v/ Kordozar.

Voted For: Kordozar

Kordozar

Punches-8
Personals-7
Multies-5
Flow-5
Structure-5
Wordplay-6
Creativity-8
Opener-6
Closer-7

Overall-57

Kamikazee

Punches-6
Personals-5
Multies-9
Flow-6
Structure-6
Wordplay-5
Creativity-6
Opener-7
Closer-5

Overall-55

Voted For: Kordozar

lmaooooo dis shit was wun sided.....first off kami it look like u were just tryin da ryhme u wasn't dissin da nigga u aint have no punchlines or anything ya verse was just basic fam 4real..kord ya opener was betta than his whole verse and da second bar which was a personal whut more can i say u won dis shit

opener-kord
structure-tie
punchlines-kord
multis-nun
wordplay-nun
creativity-kord
personals-kord
finisher-kord
enjoyed-kord..nuff said he won everything

RETURN IT YA'LL LINKS R IN MY SIG...

Voted For: Kordozar

ok i vote for u cuz u had way better flow and punches then COM did plus u had way better rhyme scheme and his was ah? so so but urs was way better now COM u need to elavate me u threw punches but they didnt seem to connect right so wat i suggest is to sit down and write shit so u can elavate your self so u dont gotta have to deal with hate threads bout u suckin and shit so over all my vote goes to Kordozar.