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mcpeejay vs Adrenaline
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting etc..etc... good luck!! Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 01-09-05 at 12:12 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Adrenaline has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-06-05 12:15 PM.
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McPeeJay has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-06-05 03:24 PM.
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here I go, it's toe to hoe.
you shouldn't be flowin, for you should be blowin. i'ma swat you like flyz, and you still have time to apologys. you be callin guyz, you givin them hi's but they still givin ya byes- in return. ya turn, is shreaded up en' burned. i don't give respect, it's earned! and if ya win ya earned it, yeah rap i learned it. and i lived it too, i'ma give to you. what you gave to me, best behave to dE! and thats an order! a mic belongs in my hand, like a fuckin reporter. i think i detect a lack of respect. comin from speck, if so then ya recked! i be token en' smokin, then chokin en' jokin. while you duckin then suckin. then tuckin while fuckin! like a dounut i'm dunkin, smash you like pumpkin. school of rap you be flunkin,a slump you have slumped in. you so tuff en' buff you belong in tha MOB? your stuffs so corny you belong on a cob. i spit so much people call me a slob. i'm a true emcee and that ya can't rop! but you can try or dye tryin, likly you'll try dyin! cause i'll kill ya, no lyin. like Scar did lion! so listen up Adrenaline, befor i get brutal. twist you like nuddle, ya soft like a strutle! give me my props, so i can pop shnops. start backin like cops , and you can spit flops. if em see me i'd be on MTV. MCV, you spitin flem! see me? i'm spitin words see? now give me ya curtsy! cause you know i won, but i can teach you like a father to son. or a father to daughter. shit, it's not worth tha bother. and was that a threat? no, i think you farted. this shit was over befor it even started. i'd like to say bye, but i think i'll good night. so good night to you MR. HELLO I'M WHITE!!! haha |
listen.
u a faggit wit big ears and I know u dont want beef im slimier than a worm and u the dirt that cleans my teeth// i aint even gotta have a rep to lethally diss you homie all I gotta do is take a mic and easily kill you// u like a pentagon wit 5 sides and aint got no volume "mc peejay" aint skilled he was prolly born in a test tube// yo I come wit sump'n harder everytime I spit im stonin u bitch, you not a blood or krypt// sorry for the prolong,adrenaline's been so gone im here to expose you trick, here's a tampon// this kid's dumb as fuck, let me give you a scoop I said I got sick rims and he thought I meant sum b-ball hoops// ur transparent in the rap game ur soul is a ghost that's why this newb spit his verse in a "poll-made" post// fuck u and ur pre-writtens u've been shaked and baked come and talk shit to me at ground zero, ur fate awaits// fuck my previous battles, my record is a mishap ay ludacris tell these fools sump'n, "nigga get back"// im the mvp- most viscious person and u a slave to my rhymes like a church nun// yo my flow erupts like a volcanic activity u like the lucky charms character u not real to me im like the cn tower and u just mini-me// its THE RUSH...HOlla!! |
yo dawg nice spit good battle but im not white... :laugh:
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people start votin...
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Voted For: Adrenaline
Weak Verse 4rm Both Yall Honestly........ Openor=Adre Punches=Adre Multiz=None Metaz=Adre Strukture=Tie Vokab=None Originality=Mc Personals=Couple By Adre Closer=None They Both Wass Wack Iight Both Verses Wass Wack No Real Punches,Weak Vokab, No Good Disses It Wass Off Elivate Tha Both /V Adre................... |
weerd up!!
that's 1-0 homie!! |
c'mon vote on this y'all...
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WE do need vote but i dont belive that guy voted ya he must be one of ya homies! fo shure!
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pssh!! negro pleeaase!! :laugh:
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ya must be kiddin me with ur bullshit ya mean ya flow was betta then mine?
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DAMN right it was...ur's was just longer!!
get them votes in... |
This was feedback posted for McPeeJay
you're not mcpeejay you're a fraud
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Voted For: Adrenaline
ryt adrenaline gets my votes because his verse was more complexed and had more punches mcpeejay you need to elevate and use more complexed vocabulary... other than that you verse was aight adreniline you get my vote becasue i liked your verse better and it didnt get as boring as mcpeejay's did... anywayz good battle... return the favour links in the sig. :thumbup: |
uppin...*yawn...Yawn...*
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someon pleeease get this shit closed...
^^look how long ago I posted!! :shoot: |
fine man ya won:S
my lost ganna get my anger worth ! we will batle again:D:P |
uppin...*yawn* *yawn*
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Voted For: Adrenaline
u got dis fam....peejay ys shit was so fukin wack lol damm u got 3 word lines whut da fukk is dat.... opener-adren structure-adren punchlines-adren creativity-adren multis-nun wordplay-nun personals-nun finisher-adren enjoyed-adren..... return da favor links r in my sig |
Voted For: Adrenaline
i think adrenaline won this battle he had better structure had better multies and his punches hit stronger both had good flow but adrenaline won adranalines favorite lines: sorry for the prolong,adrenaline's been so gone im here to expose you trick, here's a tampon// this kid's dumb as fuck, let me give you a scoop I said I got sick rims and he thought I meant sum b-ball hoops// |
This was feedback posted for Adrenaline
weakness on both parts......
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This was feedback posted for Adrenaline
checkin.....pollz................................. ..
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Voted For: Adrenaline
eehh wack battle fa sho. but ima go wit adrenaline for the win. both of yall need to work on ya structure tho. it was a pain in the ass . adrenaline had better flow and better harder hitting punches and his verse made lil bit more sense also he had better vocab, mc peejay's verse was alil too basic to win this battle plus it dragged on n on witout sayin to much try n make it a lil more syntehsized nah mean. but yall keep elevatin holla back at me http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174350 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174654 |
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