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MaRVJay1009 vs Vinci
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6 - 8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate Votes g'luck :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-06-05 at 01:05 PM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. |
Vinci has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-06-05 12:21 PM.
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lets see......
Kill this dude....Why should i lose to this fake......His skills are shrewd...Soory Marv...Dont mean to be "Rude"... "Pass up the W" cuz "I dont see you in this battle" You'll give me the easy win just like "Ur verse has been DQ'ed"// . . . . Bars is weak.....Compared to me sonny u nuttin....Ya Talk Is Cheap.....Ur skill will always remain "Bleak"... Your an "Idiot When You Talk"....son I'll have you "Constantly Stutterin My Name" like "Retards Tryna Speak"// . . . . Man...I shouldnt mess wit this Punk...I got dude scared n runnin...afraid to put up his Fronts..Like dem "Weak Chumps"... Scared of A "Lil Pressure?" i'll come at u "Full Velocity" so u can feel my "Full Force" just like lightin up "Gas Pumps"// hmmmmmm...that should do....g'luck |
MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-06-05 12:43 PM.
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listenin 2 ya audio's i force da sleep,but when i toss da heat..
ima put ya "brain on a calender" cuzz ya "thought is week"..... true story all his punches he re use,but luckly peeps lose... rv check dis niggaz battle stats u'll see nothin but dq's...... dis fag's a pre writer so there 4 everthing dis kid is spittin... aint off da top its like "nas album" cuzz "it was written"...... 4-0 ima stick da winnin..but fam i'll still pull da ruga....... & leave ya head like "armani's family" it a be full of "toomers".. last line...ya'll know dude from da giants...u'll get da punch |
first bar......i neva did audio
second bar.....my win was 5-3...but w/e...use that to make ur verse look good i guess uppin...... |
shut up fam u said alot of shit u neva did or i aint do
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
Vote: MaRVJay1009 ohhhhh Marv brand da HEAT lol his verse was dope Vinci was ok, but MArv str8 killed it listenin 2 ya audio's i force da sleep,but when i toss da heat.. ima put ya "brain on a calender" cuzz ya "thought is week"..... bad asss wordplay sun...what...killin it wid dis punch -9/10 true story all his punches he re use,but luckly peeps lose... rv check dis niggaz battle stats u'll see nothin but dq's...... personal, only made betaa wid a link..tight-9/10 dis fag's a pre writer so there 4 everthing dis kid is spittin... aint off da top its like "nas album" cuzz "it was written"...... what..what...tight wordplay..original....dope punch -8.5/10 4-0 ima stick da winnin..but fam i'll still pull da ruga....... & leave ya head like "armani's family" it a be full of "toomers".. i dont get dis im in UK, so it pro dus make sense, but had gd flow and structure - 8/10 MaRVJay1009 u got skills sun, drop like dis 24/7 and ur on ur way homeboy..:thumbup: Kill this dude....Why should i lose to this fake......His skills are shrewd...Soory Marv...Dont mean to be "Rude"... "Pass up the W" cuz "I dont see you in this battle" You'll give me the easy win just like "Ur verse has been DQ'ed"// structure blaaahh, stretched as hell,no punch, but gd flow - 7.5/10 . . . Bars is weak.....Compared to me sonny u nuttin....Ya Talk Is Cheap.....Ur skill will always remain "Bleak"... Your an "Idiot When You Talk"....son I'll have you "Constantly Stutterin My Name" like "Retards Tryna Speak"// .structure blahh...played concept - 7/10 . . . Man...I shouldnt mess wit this Punk...I got dude scared n runnin...afraid to put up his Fronts..Like dem "Weak Chumps"... Scared of A "Lil Pressure?" i'll come at u "Full Velocity" so u can feel my "Full Force" just like lightin up "Gas Pumps"// no punch, more self glorification than anything - 7/10 Vinci work on more creative and original wittier punches RETURN THA MOTHAFUCKIN FAVOUR Y'ALL LINKS IN SIG..PEACE..C.STEALTH BATTLE IS AN EASY HONEST VOTE |
ight 0-1................uppin......................
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aight uppin 4 some more votes........
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
vote goes 2 marv j no doub here ............aiight ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, you had puncehs good vocab and good word play vicni elevate,....is that ur alia vinci are u a vet or sum thin> anyways marv good battle here.......... hgood flow as well best line wuz listenin 2 ya audio's i force da sleep,but when i toss da heat.. ima put ya "brain on a calender" cuzz ya "thought is week"..... ^ lol hahah good wrd play yo RETURN FAVOUR MARV.............. in my battle below.........against me and Ncero Pyronix |
aight fam goodlooks...uppin 4 more votes ya'll
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
listenin 2 ya audio's i force da sleep,but when i toss da heat.. ima put ya "brain on a calender" cuzz ya "thought is week"..... true story all his punches he re use,but luckly peeps lose... rv check dis niggaz battle stats u'll see nothin but dq's Dayum. marv brought het this time. the other guy had bad structure and streeeeeeeeched lines and bad punches. you need to elevate a lot more. but damn marv you are dope keep it up with the hot ass punches and complex wordplay. v-marvjay1009 VOTE ON THE BATTLE IN MY SIG |
goodlooks fam uppin 4 some more votes
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uppin 4 more votes
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uppin 4 some more votes
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uppin 4 more votes ppl
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uppin 4 more votes...........
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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
check it marv u suck cuz if this is the marv from hiphopgame than that means u suck and got rocked by chronic in a pink slip battle u suck dawg get it straight bitch
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Voted For: Vinci
Aight this was hard to decide but both u need to elevate Opener-Marvjay(even though it made no sense) Flow-Vinci(both need work though Structure- Marvjay (Vinci some of ur lines were 2 stretched) Punches-Marvjay Personals-Tie Humor- Vinci Enjoyment- Vinci It was reall close |
uppin 4 more votes
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
one word...merked . marv jays punches were sick and he had good structure. n some ight multies too. but mostly punches won this battle. vince i didnt like ur structure at all is was too choppy n didnt flow well. had some good multies n some ight punches but not enuff to beat marv jay holla at me http://community.rapverse.com/index.php? |
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
ok.........pretty good battle Marvjay......... 1st bar-nice opener.....hit good....good wordplay 2nd bar-nice personal....hit hard....good bar 3rd bar-decent....hit ok....decent bar 4th bar-nice...wordplay...hit good.... Vinci................ 1st bar-decent opener....ok wordplay...overall a pretty good bar 2nd bar-2nd line was nice....hit hard...good bar 3rd bar-good closer....hit good..... overall it was pretty hard to choose....but i picked marv because he did have a nice personal...whereas vinci had none.....i didnt like vincis structure either....overall i was just feeling marvs verse better.....i like his wordplay better than vincis also....i thought his punches hit a lil harder............return the favor with a vote in one of my battles marv......links in sig |
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