TopNotch vs Big Woody
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-08-05 at 08:17 PM

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TopNotch has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-06-05 12:58 PM.

Big Woody has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-06-05 03:07 PM.

check thiz

the boy insecure so he has to promote his member(dick)
He act like he top dog but a pussy he ‘ll never enter
Since his member cant go up he trys to get up in rap
But that’s as likely as a black guy being president, so good luck wit that
Don’t break ya back carrying weight meant for a man
Stick 2 ya level pushin them grains of sand
I got gunz I spam bulletz like emailz
I’ll cum you’ll hear running an then see shells
Give my lead a detailed tour of ya insidez
He Say hez 1st 2nd 3rd 4th on his own self he dick rides
IN his eyes hes the greatest, he is his only fan
His momma wanted a boy but instead got a girl trying to be man

speed it Big wood...............................

aight itz all cool................................

FUCK THIS...hata, frog perpetrator, imposta, yous a faka
Danger is wat i say to a STRANGA, you a Power Ranga
You cant win with a "pre-written" kit, I'll bury it in a pit
I'm possibly making a hit when I put 9 in your shit
When you were the "Judge" I watched yo blood drip*
Your mind and body slip when u see tha jerk in my hip
Leap nigga if you feelin froggy kause I bring that raw heat
Ur pre-written shit Im bout to beat til I see sum white meat
Fuck you if you dont like me, call me DUB-DOUBLE O-D-Y**
In a blink of an eye, I'll sleep this nigga like a lullaby,
Not Dr. Suess or Mutha Goose, but wit these rhymes im bound to smutha you
You over due, I told this kat he needs "LUCK" like that clover dude***

*I beat him when he was the JUDGE...
**DUB-DOUBLE O-D-Y= WOODY

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o yea

***the three stars on the closer:




self explainatory

checked in at 12:58 posted at 3:20 prewrite really?

com on pplz vote..................................

get tha dick outta ya ass, i had a basketball game last night, stop bitchin

waz not talkin bout u those da time i checked in and posted

vote pplz uppin 4 1................................

Voted For: TopNotch

TopNotch had structure he sticked to his point
Big Woody rhymed more but that mutha goose dr.seuss whateva killed it
overall topnotch had the punchlines flow everything
i have to give props to Big Woody but today he didnt make it for my vote
Vote=TopNotch

Voted For: Big Woody

i think woody took this one...yall both had bad wordplay, and bad verses all around, but woody took this one with more creativitie, and better rhyming.
woody-u came okay in this verse. u had some nice rhyming words, and hard creativitie, but i think u came a lil soft on tha wordplay. ur punches hit harder of course, but u lacked sumthin in ur verse that took ur overall verse down. i think u should work on stayin consistent in yo flow and learn how to use ur punches right.
topnotch-u had an aight verse too, but ur shit was kinda soft and wack. ur punches didnt land at all, and ur wordplay was wack. u had soem creativitie n ur verse, but u came wayy too soft to take tha win. u should stick to ur day job
overall-i think wood took this one....nuff said


and return tha vote, or i wont return in any of yalls battles to vote.......

Voted For: Big Woody

ha! ...yall both hella weak...ha!...stop tryna rap.
woody won tho, nuff said. he had a harder all around flow. and he had harder wordplay. both ur punches were wack, but wood came a lil harder. that "dub-double-o-d-y" line was hella wack. u not snoop dogg, or fabolous, stop tryna spell ur name out in raps and shit.
topnotch you came softnotch. ur verse was hella weaker and ur punches werre just stupid. even ur opener was wack. go work on that. then, rematch hhim, and i htink u'll take it........

yall garbage...stop tryin, but big woody took this..........

yea um check my otha battles out...
and yea my verse is wack, i wasnt thinkin straight
u koo for tha vote, but yea do sum research b4 u speak

UPPIN

Voted For: Big Woody

that was a sick ass verse woody....*gives him a bag that says props on it*...have these props....

fav line:
Leap nigga if you feelin froggy kause I bring that raw heat
Ur pre-written shit Im bout to beat til I see sum white meat

Topnotch you lick balls, you have no talent. Make another alias right now and shit yourself whenever your in my pressence....your garbage. Sell your computer, leave your house, and suck some dick for crack...

worst line:
the boy insecure so he has to promote his member(dick)
He act like he top dog but a pussy he ‘ll never enter
Since his member cant go up he trys to get up in rap
But that’s as likely as a black guy being president, so good luck wit that
Don’t break ya back carrying weight meant for a man
Stick 2 ya level pushin them grains of sand
I got gunz I spam bulletz like emailz
I’ll cum you’ll hear running an then see shells
Give my lead a detailed tour of ya insidez
He Say hez 1st 2nd 3rd 4th on his own self he dick rides
IN his eyes hes the greatest, he is his only fan
His momma wanted a boy but instead got a girl trying to be man

best line:
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im done

vote: big woody

Voted For: TopNotch

nice spit..you really are elveating...stay up kid...................

didnt mean to vote.......................my bad...........pm strobe and tell him to take it out...but topnotch one this.....

keep vote pplz uppin................................

U herrd dj, pm strobe...naw keep it if u want...u kno wat 2 do...its up to u :thumbup:
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Uppin 4 Votes
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Voted For: TopNotch

top...................
the boy insecure so he has to promote his member(dick)
He act like he top dog but a pussy he ‘ll never enter
sex jokes played out....not a good opener (2/10)

Since his member cant go up he trys to get up in rap
But that’s as likely as a black guy being president, so good luck wit that
good concept...hit ok......(5/10)

Don’t break ya back carrying weight meant for a man
Stick 2 ya level pushin them grains of sand
not good...didnt hit good at all.....(1/10)

I got gunz I spam bulletz like emailz
I’ll cum you’ll hear running an then see shells
another bad bar......(2/10)

Give my lead a detailed tour of ya insidez
He Say hez 1st 2nd 3rd 4th on his own self he dick rides
prolly your best bar....good personal..(7/10)

IN his eyes hes the greatest, he is his only fan
His momma wanted a boy but instead got a girl trying to be man
not a good closer.....(3/10)

top.....21/60


Big Woody................
FUCK THIS...hata, frog perpetrator, imposta, yous a faka
Danger is wat i say to a STRANGA, you a Power Ranga
not a good opener at all......(2/10)

You cant win with a "pre-written" kit, I'll bury it in a pit
I'm possibly making a hit when I put 9 in your shit
gunplay = played out......(2/10)

When you were the "Judge" I watched yo blood drip*
Your mind and body slip when u see tha jerk in my hip
ok attempt at a personal in 1st line......(4/10)

Leap nigga if you feelin froggy kause I bring that raw heat
Ur pre-written shit Im bout to beat til I see sum white meat
not too good...hit ok....(3/10)

Fuck you if you dont like me, call me DUB-DOUBLE O-D-Y**
In a blink of an eye, I'll sleep this nigga like a lullaby,
ok...it was decent...1st line was pointless....(3/10)

Not Dr. Suess or Mutha Goose, but wit these rhymes im bound to smutha you
You over due, I told this kat he needs "LUCK" like that clover dude***
decent closer...could have been better......(4/10)

Big Woody.........18/60


Basically Top wins this because of his one good personal and the other good bar....this wasnt a good battle....just the way i seen it though.......PLEASE return the favor....i took time to vote on yours...vote on mine.....links in sig

uppin 4 votez.....................................

Voted For: Big Woody

Big Woody
FUCK THIS...hata, frog perpetrator, imposta, yous a faka
Danger is wat i say to a STRANGA, you a Power Ranga 7/10
Nice one, good multis
You cant win with a "pre-written" kit, I'll bury it in a pit
I'm possibly making a hit when I put 9 in your shit 4/10
Im not feelin that dogg
When you were the "Judge" I watched yo blood drip*
Your mind and body slip when u see tha jerk in my hip 7/10
Again nice multis
Leap nigga if you feelin froggy kause I bring that raw heat
Ur pre-written shit Im bout to beat til I see sum white meat 8/10
nice punch right there
Fuck you if you dont like me, call me DUB-DOUBLE O-D-Y**
In a blink of an eye, I'll sleep this nigga like a lullaby, 5/10
u need to work on that line
Not Dr. Suess or Mutha Goose, but wit these rhymes im bound to smutha you
You over due, I told this kat he needs "LUCK" like that clover dude*** 7/10
[B] Nice multis and an okay punch
Good job, u had lots of good multis and i like that
Top Notch
the boy insecure so he has to promote his member(dick)
He act like he top dog but a pussy he ‘ll never enter 6/10
Good punch right there
Since his member cant go up he trys to get up in rap
But that’s as likely as a black guy being president, so good luck wit that 4/10
[B] U racist or sumtin dogg?
Don’t break ya back carrying weight meant for a man
Stick 2 ya level pushin them grains of sand 5/10
Good punch but im not really feelin that line
I got gunz I spam bulletz like emailz
I’ll cum you’ll hear running an then see shells 6/10
[B] good meta
Give my lead a detailed tour of ya insidez
He Say hez 1st 2nd 3rd 4th on his own self he dick rides 4/10
IN his eyes hes the greatest, he is his only fan
His momma wanted a boy but instead got a girl trying to be man 8/10
Thas ur best line, good punch and a great closure, wasnt enuff though
Big woody got my vote cuz he had better punches, and easy to read structure
If that aint enuff for an xplanation u wack
return the favor vote on my shit its in my sig

sorry i fucked up on the bolding sorry if it hard to read
return the favor vote on my battle

Voted For: Big Woody

One-Sided battle here

Top:
your drop was decent for a person who is new to the site
but, not good enuff tho. punches were okay, not really feelin
them tho, & was hardly hard-hittin also, elevate a little more
though, & dont face any1 that has more x2 more wins than
you do though, but no hate though, but elevate more. . .

BW:
decent drop from you too, punches werent really there also,
but enuff for u to take the win tho, nice persona's there. . .
weren't really all that though, punches were aight. . .a couple
of them i had to read it 4 times just to get it. . .but you took
this one though wit ease. . .no hate though

-Skriptz