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~Babylon~ 01-07-05 04:12 AM

"Three Days of Heaven"
 
"Three Days of Heaven"





[course 1]
It's mourning at dawn, I just opened my eye's
I take a glimpse out the window, I can see it out side
nuttin' loud no clouds, and the sun is shinning
Take a shower, go out, nevermind the timeing
A pretty women walks by, so I'm sneaking a peak
Aint no need for paranoia, I aint seeing no beef
Aint no cheatin' this theif, lookin for someone that sales
No choke when I smoke, when I'm hittin' this L
No problems no crimes today, I aint being no lifer
Kids spittin' on the corner so I hop in the cypha
And I boast a bit, spit throught most of it
Just battlin' for fun, so I roast this kid
So now I'm hi as fuck, and dreamin' of females
And my eyes gittin' cloudy, I aint seeing so well
Crossing paths wit that women again, makin a freind
And hookin' up just for that one sin....sin....sin






[Hook X2]
One of them days when not a moment seems worthless
Can't wipe the smile, everything seems perfect
No sqauds, no flags, aint no need for reppin'
Oh what I wouldn't do for Three days of heaven
........Three days of heaven...........Three days of heaven
Oh what I wouldn't do for Three days of heaven









[Course 2]
I had a good rest, and I'm feeling strong
Take a breath, hit the switch, see if the lights still on
Turn the fossit, water works, so the pipes still on
No bugs, no roaches, and the mice are gone
There aint no work today, so my pops aint leavin'
He could rest a bit, and my moms not screaming
No stress for her, favorite song she's singing
And I aint feelin' like smokin', aint no need for feinin'
And my sister lookin' happy, no more depression
Stoped lookin' in the past, now I'm all progression
Mom tells us to clean, so we pick up the mess and
No need to question, no fightin', no more aggression
We stay up all night, till real late in the mourning
About 8 in the mourning, without screamin' or scornin'
Just trading sad stories, and our eye's are pouring
Priceless, stayin home all day, and the days not bourin'






[Hook X2]
One of them days when not a moment seems worthless
Can't wipe the smile, everything seems perfect
No sqauds, no flags, aint no need for reppin'
Oh what I wouldn't do for Three days of heaven
........Three days of heaven...........Three days of heaven
Oh what I wouldn't do for Three days of heaven






[Course 3]
Today I call up my sister, cause its time we talked
Gotta find a new job and I dont mind the walk
Cause I got no ride, but now I gotta reason
No excuses to hide, cause now I'm thinking
Filled out an application, was hired on the spot
No need for conversation, proud of what i got
More than I noticed, theres more to this moment
An omen, the fact that i birthed it and own it
Now my mind can grasp, on small simple visions
No longer trapt, in these small mental desicions
Now I got peice of mind, and I can read my books
I can vast in knowledge, I aint being no crook
Three days wit the world, family, and my self
Tired of being scared, and standing with no help
And so all I ask of god, is a simple blessing
Please just give me 3 days.......3 days of heaven





[Hook X2]
One of them days when not a moment seems worthless
Can't wipe the smile, everything seems perfect
No sqauds, no flags, aint no need for reppin'
Oh what I wouldn't do for Three days of heaven
........Three days of heaven...........Three days of heaven
Oh what I wouldn't do for Three days of heaven

SUPERVILLAIN 01-07-05 04:33 AM

magnificent.

this is the best piece that i've ever seen you drop. hold it down like only you can.

one.


...s.v...

iamthatdude87 01-07-05 04:55 AM

word nice drop......

Tha Unknown (Uk) 01-07-05 05:02 AM

wet drop fam.............keep doin yo thing

~Babylon~ 01-07-05 06:04 AM

thanx yall...........i appreciate it...........


~Babz~

intensify effect 01-07-05 11:09 AM

u have 24 hours to drop a link or this will be closed...
lets make open mic the best and more active...

but we all have to follow the rules.....

~Babylon~ 01-07-05 02:13 PM

links.........

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1879140

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1879153

intensify effect 01-07-05 02:16 PM

^^^ 1 line feed back is not acceptable......

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871


u still have 24 hours to post a link with proper feed back....

look on top of the page if u dont know what im talking about or the link i gave u...

~Babylon~ 01-07-05 02:36 PM

theres my fuckin link............

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1879181

~Babylon~ 01-07-05 04:33 PM

uppin............................................. .................

Diplosive 01-07-05 05:01 PM

nice drop homie, i was feelin the piece.......8/10

intensify effect 01-07-05 06:39 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ~Babylon~



thanks u thats all i ask for why the grumpyness???

dipolsive those 1 line feed back wont cut it.........

~Babylon~ 01-08-05 05:20 PM

Uppin............................................

~Babylon~ 01-10-05 07:21 PM

uppin for feedback.......................................

SUPERVILLAIN 01-11-05 11:22 AM

^^^uppin' this piece for my crhymie babz.^^^

please drop some legit feedback for him people. thank you. oner.

s.v.

<..8..> 01-11-05 01:24 PM

That was a real deep piece yo! I liked the hook too. Theres a few spots here and there that need a lil work, but really its iight i wouldn't change it. drop some more shit yo, i like readin it!!
8.5/10

~Babylon~ 01-11-05 04:22 PM

thank...u...................uppin for more feedback............

~Babylon~ 01-12-05 04:47 AM

ups..........................................

Disorda 01-12-05 06:11 AM

im loving this man, just spat out the verses to Cold As Ice instrumental, sounds ace mate. liking the rythim but i think ur choruses need some work, fat rhyme though mate, just trying to stick to feedback rules :P

Parallel 01-16-05 04:04 PM

pretty good drop liked your stucture and your hook was good...but try to use more vocab to give all that emotion you used flavour...you know i hope you do..lol...but this was a good drop....i wouldnt mind a collab about something emotioanl with you...it would be good you should pm me or hit me on aim or msn w/e you got or shit w/e....but good drop i really like dyour flow and multis a few bad lines but i liked most of them...good job..

be sure to leave feed in my OM's links in the sig..

-Parallel

~Babylon~ 01-17-05 05:14 AM

ups............................................... .................

~Babylon~ 01-23-05 02:34 PM

ups yall......and thanks for all the feedback..................

~Babylon~ 03-10-05 04:50 AM

uppin.........bringing back my old shit


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