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DeHotBwoy 01-07-05 09:05 PM

.I.nsane .G.angsta vs Kswabbs
 
Battle Rules:

10 - 10 lines MAX

No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding


Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 01-07-05 at 10:45 PM

Must drop verse in 50 minutes after check in.

System 01-07-05 09:06 PM

.I.nsane .G.angsta has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-07-05 09:06 PM.

System 01-07-05 09:11 PM

Kswabbs has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-07-05 09:11 PM.

DeHotBwoy 01-07-05 09:25 PM



I Cut threw my oppents so the're arms are left little knobs
You Aint got a clean record cause K's likes use C Swabs*
Man u got about 2 posts k swabbs u sure aint ready
You aint even steady ya mom's callin u back its time for bed g
I'm not the type to play around but i get u fans real hype
Yes i am fatal so now i guess you about to see a pale light
And My crew's real hood we up to show you a real fight
You Straight Short U go to NBA games so u can steal height**
You aint really all that i think you at the wronge Station
Only Tight Send so thats why i gave u an Invatation***

* Cotton Swabs are cleaners so are usally dirty when finshed used
** Steal height NBA pro basketball u can steall the basketball but there all tall so u so small in the rap game he trys to steal height
*** Only tight send i gave him the invataton to battle me

Uppin i didint even waste the time

DeHotBwoy 01-07-05 09:44 PM

Hurry ya Ass Up nigga i aint got all day lol i guess u do cause thats the only way u got a chance is Pre-writtin ya shit

Kswabbs 01-07-05 09:48 PM

Nigga u checked in first.....i jus got done wit my shit, i was waitin for u, so drop u fag....or are u scared that im better than u expected.

DeHotBwoy 01-07-05 09:59 PM

Dumb shit i fuckin spit god Kswabbs u go to a damn Retarded School im waiting ya dumb retarded ho shIT you read my verse and ran away and said shit lemmie prove him wronge now i got 10 more posts than i used to so he didint make sence well ya did dumbshit hurry up and post u retard

Kswabbs 01-07-05 10:00 PM

Its all absurd, so watch me as I toss this herb
Ur from unspoken, cause when u lose ur at a loss for words
Left on the curb, ull get slaughtered by all means
Ur rhymes stink, u should work on ur lyrical I.Gien
My bars is frightening, and ur bravados jus a disguise
He lost, so he wants to clip on this batte to declare it a tie
This loss has saddened him cause my lyrics jus ripped u slut
So heres a punch to send u flyin…there goes ur pick me up

Kswabbs 01-07-05 10:03 PM

If u dont get it dont vote, i only went 8 cause i didnt feel the need to drop more than that.

DeHotBwoy 01-07-05 10:11 PM

U R really retarded u better ad another bar in atleast 5 mins or u getin Dq'ed ok


Kswabbs 01-07-05 10:15 PM

Yea... ok
MY 5th bar since i jus read thats the minimum

This guys a fag ur not gangsta u jus wish u could
Workin on cars is the only way ur Striktly hood

DeHotBwoy 01-07-05 10:32 PM

whata herb thats most used line when people say sumthin about hood hhaha uppin this crap

J Gutta 01-08-05 01:10 AM

This was feedback posted for Kswabbs
 
weak battle aint votin..ill vote later...

MC IgGY 01-09-05 11:13 PM

Voted For: .I.nsane .G.angsta

winner- insane gangsta

flow-tie
punches-gangsta
multies-none really but swabbs sorta had 1
finishers-both were pretty good

nice battle all together
if yall got time can yall vote on my battles, no hate votes, real votes plz, thx

Technical 01-13-05 09:49 PM

Voted For: .I.nsane .G.angsta

punches- K-he murked u dere man
personals- K murked ya again...u gotta work on dat man
structure- i think IG had da betta one
multi- No1
metaphor- IG had like 1 so he got dis one
closing- IG had dis
OV/IG

ChaoticStealth 01-13-05 09:58 PM

Voted For: Kswabbs

punches:ksawbbs
delivery(structure):tied
flow:IG
overall:kswabbs

I just felt he came a lil harder with the punches and that took it, good battle though
would appreciate the feedback on my battle vs assassin in my sig pls thanks

Sik Wit It 01-16-05 01:34 PM

Voted For: .I.nsane .G.angsta

One-Sided

I.G. u had some pretty decent punches there, some of them landed..and some of them were blah though...the flow & structure were good, vocab was decent..and decent wp's theyre...but overall u had a good drop, even thogh those punches could've been harder though

Ksw ur drop was aight...the punches is what lost it..ur punches werent really hard-hittin anyway...the flow on yo piece was decent..and the structure was aight...but overall work on your punches though, so u can win more battles in the future n' shit

RTF I.G.

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50hater_killer 01-17-05 06:32 PM

Voted For: .I.nsane .G.angsta

I felt insane more on this battle Ithink he came harder, he had harder punches his strcuture and his multis where good, keep working on the vocab but you had it down. His wordplay was awesome and his opener-his closure was better.

INSANE

I Cut threw my oppents so the're arms are left little knobs
You Aint got a clean record cause K's likes use C Swabs*
Man u got about 2 posts k swabbs u sure aint ready
You aint even steady ya mom's callin u back its time for bed g
I'm not the type to play around but i get u fans real hype
Yes i am fatal so now i guess you about to see a pale light
And My crew's real hood we up to show you a real fight
You Straight Short U go to NBA games so u can steal height**

9.7/10


Its all absurd, so watch me as I toss this herb
Ur from unspoken, cause when u lose ur at a loss for words
Left on the curb, ull get slaughtered by all means
Ur rhymes stink, u should work on ur lyrical I.Gien
My bars is frightening, and ur bravados jus a disguise

keep elevating homes

6/10

50hater_killer 01-17-05 06:33 PM

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Scareface 01-22-05 09:10 PM

Voted For: .I.nsane .G.angsta

Aii Ima Have to give mY vote to I.G. basically he punchez came terrifically and connected wit Some Decent Punchez And Really showed his ass off In This Battle it seemed to be A personal battle to me like yall hade some beef to settle but Maybe im wrong LOL but Ne ways i Have to Give my vote To I.G.

Please RTF in The battle In my LINK


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