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.I.nsane .G.angsta vs Kswabbs
Battle Rules:
10 - 10 lines MAX No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Feeding Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 01-07-05 at 10:45 PM Must drop verse in 50 minutes after check in. |
.I.nsane .G.angsta has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-07-05 09:06 PM.
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Kswabbs has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-07-05 09:11 PM.
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I Cut threw my oppents so the're arms are left little knobs You Aint got a clean record cause K's likes use C Swabs* Man u got about 2 posts k swabbs u sure aint ready You aint even steady ya mom's callin u back its time for bed g I'm not the type to play around but i get u fans real hype Yes i am fatal so now i guess you about to see a pale light And My crew's real hood we up to show you a real fight You Straight Short U go to NBA games so u can steal height** You aint really all that i think you at the wronge Station Only Tight Send so thats why i gave u an Invatation*** * Cotton Swabs are cleaners so are usally dirty when finshed used ** Steal height NBA pro basketball u can steall the basketball but there all tall so u so small in the rap game he trys to steal height *** Only tight send i gave him the invataton to battle me Uppin i didint even waste the time |
Hurry ya Ass Up nigga i aint got all day lol i guess u do cause thats the only way u got a chance is Pre-writtin ya shit
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Nigga u checked in first.....i jus got done wit my shit, i was waitin for u, so drop u fag....or are u scared that im better than u expected.
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Dumb shit i fuckin spit god Kswabbs u go to a damn Retarded School im waiting ya dumb retarded ho shIT you read my verse and ran away and said shit lemmie prove him wronge now i got 10 more posts than i used to so he didint make sence well ya did dumbshit hurry up and post u retard
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Its all absurd, so watch me as I toss this herb
Ur from unspoken, cause when u lose ur at a loss for words Left on the curb, ull get slaughtered by all means Ur rhymes stink, u should work on ur lyrical I.Gien My bars is frightening, and ur bravados jus a disguise He lost, so he wants to clip on this batte to declare it a tie This loss has saddened him cause my lyrics jus ripped u slut So heres a punch to send u flyin…there goes ur pick me up |
If u dont get it dont vote, i only went 8 cause i didnt feel the need to drop more than that.
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U R really retarded u better ad another bar in atleast 5 mins or u getin Dq'ed ok |
Yea... ok
MY 5th bar since i jus read thats the minimum This guys a fag ur not gangsta u jus wish u could Workin on cars is the only way ur Striktly hood |
whata herb thats most used line when people say sumthin about hood hhaha uppin this crap
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This was feedback posted for Kswabbs
weak battle aint votin..ill vote later...
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Voted For: .I.nsane .G.angsta
winner- insane gangsta flow-tie punches-gangsta multies-none really but swabbs sorta had 1 finishers-both were pretty good nice battle all together if yall got time can yall vote on my battles, no hate votes, real votes plz, thx |
Voted For: .I.nsane .G.angsta
punches- K-he murked u dere man personals- K murked ya again...u gotta work on dat man structure- i think IG had da betta one multi- No1 metaphor- IG had like 1 so he got dis one closing- IG had dis OV/IG |
Voted For: Kswabbs
punches:ksawbbs delivery(structure):tied flow:IG overall:kswabbs I just felt he came a lil harder with the punches and that took it, good battle though would appreciate the feedback on my battle vs assassin in my sig pls thanks |
Voted For: .I.nsane .G.angsta
One-Sided I.G. u had some pretty decent punches there, some of them landed..and some of them were blah though...the flow & structure were good, vocab was decent..and decent wp's theyre...but overall u had a good drop, even thogh those punches could've been harder though Ksw ur drop was aight...the punches is what lost it..ur punches werent really hard-hittin anyway...the flow on yo piece was decent..and the structure was aight...but overall work on your punches though, so u can win more battles in the future n' shit RTF I.G. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=172258 ^Explain Your Vote Please... |
Voted For: .I.nsane .G.angsta
I felt insane more on this battle Ithink he came harder, he had harder punches his strcuture and his multis where good, keep working on the vocab but you had it down. His wordplay was awesome and his opener-his closure was better. INSANE I Cut threw my oppents so the're arms are left little knobs You Aint got a clean record cause K's likes use C Swabs* Man u got about 2 posts k swabbs u sure aint ready You aint even steady ya mom's callin u back its time for bed g I'm not the type to play around but i get u fans real hype Yes i am fatal so now i guess you about to see a pale light And My crew's real hood we up to show you a real fight You Straight Short U go to NBA games so u can steal height** 9.7/10 Its all absurd, so watch me as I toss this herb Ur from unspoken, cause when u lose ur at a loss for words Left on the curb, ull get slaughtered by all means Ur rhymes stink, u should work on ur lyrical I.Gien My bars is frightening, and ur bravados jus a disguise keep elevating homes 6/10 |
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Voted For: .I.nsane .G.angsta
Aii Ima Have to give mY vote to I.G. basically he punchez came terrifically and connected wit Some Decent Punchez And Really showed his ass off In This Battle it seemed to be A personal battle to me like yall hade some beef to settle but Maybe im wrong LOL but Ne ways i Have to Give my vote To I.G. Please RTF in The battle In my LINK |
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