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A.K.A. vs <..8..>
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting this is a battle to shut your fucking mouth Minimum posts to vote: 125 Check in by: 01-10-05 at 09:08 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
A.K.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-07-05 09:16 PM.
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lets get this shit going.............................
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check your ass in bitch............................
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<..8..> has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-07-05 10:26 PM.
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i'll get at this tomorrow to tryed to think tonight
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fuck an opener i don't need it to merk your ass in this battle
and i'll cut off the tails of everyone who wants to tattle dude u can get it from all angles like getting slapped by light skined part of my hand and you dudes was born to die thats why i got you chasing dots like ms pac man there might be dots in the middle of my name but if you fuck wit me your face will have the same mad cause after i spit you go on and no one by the stage your name is eight? you must be talking about your age look your name got to holes in it from where i already started popping i was kicking your ass before i even started dropping |
shit i meant to say something in my verse but forgot so for like the third line you should no that i'm white so the light skined part of my hand is my whole hand
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the number of rookies he defeated is twenty three/
take a look, see the vets, thats where he gets fifteen/ sitting, on your comp talkin shit like you got talent/ you gave me long enough to spit, shit, i shouldah mailed it/ whats wrong aka? can't spit from the top of yah head/ 4320 minutes, I coulda wrote a whole new thread/ duck hes "rite behide you with a gun to your head" lol/ go back to grade-school nicca, you can't even spell/ i'll give you credit tho at least you spelled gun right/ but you still stupid enough to bring a knife to a gun fight/ |
ok it was cute upping this shit lets get some votes. tell me why if you had too much time did i spit mine before yours????
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Vote on thsi shit!! how am i sposed tah elevate if nobody gives any feed back!!
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god damn ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^.
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what the fuck is going on here????? no votes damn.
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Voted For: A.K.A.
A.K.A. fuck an opener i don't need it to merk your ass in this battle and i'll cut off the tails of everyone who wants to tattle ^okay opener dude u can get it from all angles like getting slapped by light skined part of my hand and you dudes was born to die thats why i got you chasing dots like ms pac man ^good one... there might be dots in the middle of my name but if you fuck wit me your face will have the same ^decent mad cause after i spit you go on and no one by the stage your name is eight? you must be talking about your age ^hehe,nice look your name got to holes in it from where i already started popping i was kicking your ass before i even started dropping ^cool closer <..8..> the number of rookies he defeated is twenty three/ take a look, see the vets, thats where he gets fifteen/ ^uhm, huh? nah man... sitting, on your comp talkin shit like you got talent/ you gave me long enough to spit, shit, i shouldah mailed it/ ^not feeling it whats wrong aka? can't spit from the top of yah head/ 4320 minutes, I coulda wrote a whole new thread/ ^decent duck hes "rite behide you with a gun to your head" lol/ go back to grade-school nicca, you can't even spell/ ^nice one i'll give you credit tho at least you spelled gun right/ but you still stupid enough to bring a knife to a gun fight/ ^hehe,good closer Gotta go with A.K.A. on this one, none had very creative and hardhitting punches/personals but i felt his a little more. Vocab n flow were even, structure could be improved in A.K.A.'s drop though.<..8..>, your first 2-3 bars weren't that good man, improve on that cause your ending was nice! Keep on battling you two...no hate...DQ |
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damn cats on rv really are sleeping on battle......
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Voted For: A.K.A.
One-Sided vote right here... A.K.A. took this one...came harder in the punches..the vocab was pretty nice here though..fix your structure kinda lack...and the flow was aight..except for 1 part though, but overall u had a decent drop though 8: yo drop wasnt bad, but the punches need improving though..so just work on yo punches though & get some persona's up in there. . . no hate to both RTF A.K.A. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=172258 |
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3 more lol come on ................................
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Voted For: A.K.A.
the number of rookies he defeated is twenty three/ take a look, see the vets, thats where he gets fifteen/ sitting, on your comp talkin shit like you got talent/ you gave me long enough to spit, shit, i shouldah mailed it/ whats wrong aka? can't spit from the top of yah head/ 4320 minutes, I coulda wrote a whole new thread/ duck hes "rite behide you with a gun to your head" lol/ go back to grade-school nicca, you can't even spell/ i'll give you credit tho at least you spelled gun right/ but you still stupid enough to bring a knife to a gun fight/ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ok, you had some good punches and some good flow, got personals in it, the punches was good. fuck an opener i don't need it to merk your ass in this battle and i'll cut off the tails of everyone who wants to tattle dude u can get it from all angles like getting slapped by light skined part of my hand and you dudes was born to die thats why i got you chasing dots like ms pac man there might be dots in the middle of my name but if you fuck wit me your face will have the same mad cause after i spit you go on and no one by the stage your name is eight? you must be talking about your age look your name got to holes in it from where i already started popping i was kicking your ass before i even started dropping ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^OK, PUNCHES.FLOW WAS CHOPPED UP IN SOME AREAS. You had personals (dissing his name). overall=Weak battle, but i think aka pulled it off enough to beat 8. Aka your punches was basic fam, get creative, add some vocabs. 8 your punches was good alright but not enough to beat aka. Elevate some more on punches, you'll get better. I felt aka punches hit harder than your's 8. No hate. peace |
Voted For: A.K.A.
u got dis fam..ya structure was terrible tho opener-aka structure-8 punchlines-nun wordplay-nun multis-nun personals-aka enjoyed-aka return da favor links r in da sig |
wow i got votes lolol i need one more i surprise that ya'll looked at this. what took so long?
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rising... great i'm back to getting no votes lolol
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yo aka return da favor fam i voted on dis shit madd long ago
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Voted For: &lt;..8..&gt;
both were decent but aka kinda got a lil more creative in the end..........i thought for sure 8 hasd him lookin at the struture n expecting the worst...2 things is all i got to say...aka, please learn better english n try hadder punchlines.... 8 dont come soo weak in closers n personals n jus underestimate ya opponent........ . this is honest n im a vet so appreciate the fact i bothered to read it.....pc......... |
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you a vet you better have an alias cause that name is def not a vet. and sorry i have to translate my verse so they might come out weird |
Voted For: A.K.A.
wow both of you are fucking Garbage to the 10th power...why is it that everybody in Twizted government sucks? your all doing one syllable rhyming with fucking trash punches....who the fuck puts Tattle in a battle verse.....anyway ...u get the vote cuz u didnt repeat words like 8 did. |
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