cali born vs Murkz
 

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Check in by: 01-08-05 at 02:59 AM

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Murkz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-05 02:30 AM.

cali born has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-05 02:40 AM.

yo hommie u cali born but u newborn to rv
im from jerz, u from LA,but u repin it like u bout 2 harm me

But u must kno that its only a few things that charm me
my mans bout 2 be tha king of rv, nah u not gon don me

i dont play alot of games wit niggaz exept connct 4 b
And connect 4 means ill connect tha 44 to ya dome peace

So u rome when u see, u run and u hide
When i give u ya first L, It could roam away ya pride

But dont be mad i caught 4 L's
Its not just alost
its niggaz up and font like they ringin ya door bells

I let ya la streets rain from tha seeds of my bullets
ill b there 4 every thing up front 2 u ready 2 stop n pull it

you say "murked" but that's when you look in the mirror,
but ONCE it shattered cuz of your screaming fear,
the punch didn't reflect back at you.. got a win!
probably outta pity for your raps dude.. poor kid,
begging to succeed.. all you got is a website,
and an address thats in need..a place to rhyme bite,
and it is right under your favorites..easy to tell,
i can see into your profile.. you don't give info for help,
cuz you easily threatened... even on the net,
shoulda hid your record too.. it'll get you TOO upset.......

up right here lets get some votes please 50 characters long... ok..

up right now don't sleep on this shit c'mon people

Voted For: Murkz

i give it to murkz for actually rhymin in his verse...dis was a really weak ass battle...cali u need a lot A LOT of work......dis was an e-z battle 2 judge....
v/murkz
for rhyming
and better structure...

uppin upppin............................................ .................

wat itz like nigga uppin...........upppin..........

like i said u new to rv homie, im still flossin wit my record uppin..........

Voted For: cali born

have to go with cali on this one he came harder, his lyrics where clearer and his strucutre was better, his multis where batter, his personels where much better and his hits where harder.
CALI
you say "murked" but that's when you look in the mirror,
but ONCE it shattered cuz of your screaming fear,
the punch didn't reflect back at you.. got a win!
probably outta pity for your raps dude.. poor kid,
begging to succeed.. all you got is a website,
and an address thats in need..a place to rhyme bite,
9/10

MURKZ
yo hommie u cali born but u newborn to rv
im from jerz, u from LA,but u repin it like u bout 2 harm me

But u must kno that its only a few things that charm me
my mans bout 2 be tha king of rv, nah u not gon don me
7.6/10
no hate homes but keep elevating and hey return the fav on my links.

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up up up.... we need votes

Voted For: Murkz

Cali Didnt Even Rhyme
Openor=Murk
Strukture=Tie
Punches=Murk
Personals=None
Multiz=None
Closer=Both Wass Wack So None

Murks Did Better Cus His Words Rhymed Through Tha Whole Verse He Had Ok Punches,No Vokab,Fix Ya Bars Dont Have Them To Stretched Looks Wack In Mih Eyes Elivate Ya Punches And Vokab And You'll Be Good Ta Go..............

/V Murkz..................

uppin for more votes...

Voted For: cali born

V/cali born .....he had better punchs wit multis an his vocab was a bit better....Murkz....u had a good verse to but not as consistent in ur punchs creativity.....
punch=cali
multi's=cali
structure=cali
vocab=cali
overall=cali
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

This was feedback posted for Murkz
 

C.E. you wack
i dont play alot of games wit niggaz exept connct 4 b

rotflmmfbao!!!
EsTYLE BITCH!!!

uppin.......................uppin................. ..........uppin

hah, stupid ass nigga...............e-style bitch........

up.......................................

upppinnnnnnnnnnn.................................. ...................

uppin............................................. ..................................

up, up up, up and away....................................

Voted For: Murkz

BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH! WEAK BATTLE! MURKZ HAD BETTAH PUNCHES, NO PERSONALS. CALI BORNS VERSE WAS JUST TRASH TALK!
RETURN THA VOTE LINK IN MY SIG

uppin.............................................

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Voted For: cali born

i think that your verses were good but needed some tiny bit of elevation...but you came hard on punches bith good structure and openings and closure so u earned this vote my son

Vote cali born

Voted For: Murkz

Close call but you got him by a landslide Homie I know I KNOW you can do better than this mayne.. but reguardless I think you got it

Voted For: cali born

damn this woz a close battle

murked- seeen u come harder than this erm u need to work on ya punches an u need to put in more personals erm...u had sum ok punches although some jus didnt connect.

cali born-felt this verse a lot betta it woz structured better it had beeta punches liked the fflow better it woz a close battle i jus didnt feel murkz verse as much as this 1

Voted For: Murkz

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