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Scene vs Pleim
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No hate votes No D/R votes NO PM for votes bitch! Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-11-05 at 03:35 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Scene has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-05 03:35 AM.
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wow your gunna prewrite for three days?
ok w.e. |
Naw Im gonna drop in the morning bitch. :thumbup:
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Pleim has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-05 03:41 AM.
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Yeah thats wat I thought u better accept u faggot ass bitch talkin shit bout my homie mimesis u really gettin it now ho! :nono:
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No one looks at ya callouts cuz all u are is a herb
couldnt spit a perfect verse if all u said was verb dude look ya punchin ya self just look at your name cuz all ya lines are the same merkin u & takin fame u only got 1 u havin 2-0?? Naw bitch its slim to none this battle is for shits and giggles im doin it for fun messin wit me ill have ya shot more then columbine break ya spine got ya twisted more then a intertwine bars so bright thinkin u just saw a nuclear explosion Cuz u still wouldnt elavate with help from a erosion |
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You're NOT black,get it through ya head for christs sake mayne You're just a wigger in a faded Polo shirt wearing fake chains Lookin at ya pic, there aint much reason to keep ya head up I know your ass in poor, but you could at LEAST get an edge up Son, with that picture we ALL know you are easily dead I know farmers with smaller ears of corn than those on ya head You should been prepared against me dog, a fact you outta duck Shit even IF the camera adds 10 pounds, ya still fat as fuck i win :laugh2: |
K uppin this now ppl plz honest votes ok no hate votes. :thumbup:
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shit bitch urs was absolute wackness................... :nono:
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Voted For: Scene
Wow All Pleim Got Iss Personals Talked About Tha Pic Tha Whole Verse... Openor=Pleim Good Personal Strukture=Tie Both Easy Ta Read Punches=Scene His Wass Pretty Ok Personals=Tie All Pleim Had Wass 1 Personal His Pikture Vokab=Scene,He Had Ok Vokab Closer=Pleim's Wass Pretty Gay Didnt Make Sence How Does A Camera Add 10 Pounds? Iight Scene Got Thiss Cus He Didn't Talk About Tha Same Thing Threw Out His Verse,Had Vokab And Ok Wordplay.And Thass Gay Ta Give Feed On A Guys Pic And Put It In Ya Verse................ /V Scene Return Tha Favor..................... |
K thx man ok ppl upiin this ok no hate votes or D/R votes ok. :thumbup:
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Voted For: Pleim
haha nice battle winner-pleim flow-tie punches-pleim multies-scene Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin for summore voterz who kno whut dey talkin bout
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man how come all mah votez got erazed?
w.e uyppin diz shit fo` more votes |
ok ppl Uppin for some votes ok but no hate votes or D/R votes. :thumbup:
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Voted For: Pleim
lol this was a bit of a one sided battle if that picture was actually his... pleim you did play off his picture thyrough all of the battle but it payed of with some good punches imma break it down... Nemesis... No one looks at ya callouts cuz all u are is a herb couldnt spit a perfect verse if all u said was verb hmmm not really feeling it, it could'av been better.. 3/10 dude look ya punchin ya self just look at your name cuz all ya lines are the same merkin u & takin fame spose this was better... 4/10 u only got 1 u havin 2-0?? Naw bitch its slim to none this battle is for shits and giggles im doin it for fun ^^ not exactly a punch is it. 3/10 messin wit me ill have ya shot more then columbine break ya spine got ya twisted more then a intertwine ^^ better... 7/10 bars so bright thinkin u just saw a nuclear explosion Cuz u still wouldnt elavate with help from a erosion ^^ do you nkow what erosion is??? 2/10 overall i thought your verse was too simple it didn't have alot of punches in and you didn't really use alot of hard vocabulary overall 5/10 Pleim... You're NOT black,get it through ya head for christs sake mayne You're just a wigger in a faded Polo shirt wearing fake chains ^^ lol good punch... 7/10 Lookin at ya pic, there aint much reason to keep ya head up I know your ass in poor, but you could at LEAST get an edge up wasn't really feeling it... 4/10 Son, with that picture we ALL know you are easily dead I know farmers with smaller ears of corn than those on ya head lol alright but better wordplay wouldav made it better. 6/10 You should been prepared against me dog, a fact you outta duck Shit even IF the camera adds 10 pounds, ya still fat as fuck this had me rolling on the floor... this finished it 9/10 i thought that you got tis because you had some good punches in it... overall 8/10 please return the favour: honest votes please... links in the sig... no hate. pz. :thumbup: |
yeah, thanks dawg ill hit dat up uppin for mor voters
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This was feedback posted for Pleim
lmao..............
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Voted For: Scene
close battle......... punches- nemesis had punches but pleim u lacked punches, work on dat personals- pleim by far and how did u get dude's pic but wat eva structure- both were easy to read closing- it came down to dis and i think N had da betta closing. Pleim urs was kinda weak v/nemesis Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Ok uppin this ppl for votes ok no hate votes or D/R votes ok.
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This was feedback posted for Pleim
hahaahah you win...sorry i cant vote..........great personals
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This was feedback posted for Pleim
checkin polls...........
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Voted For: Scene
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coo thx lets get this uppin ok ppl no hate votes either ok plz? :thumbup:
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what the fuck? youre cheating everyone knows i won dis shit
uppin for real voters |
Voted For: Scene
hahahahahahhaha at the pic scene you had better everything your structure and flow murdered him he got you on personals with that pic but you killed him in everything else your punches hit hard i saw a few personals multis were there. overall : Nemesis gets this.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Scene
Aii Both of yall Didnt Do Very well But Far As i Care you both tried so .....Ima have to give my vote to nemesis clearly he Went and came the hardesty With the punchez But Pleim came harder wit The Personals Because he did his homework still when it all comes down to it im lookin at the verses and Nemesis verse was better At The time so my vote v/nemesis Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin dis shyt for people who no how to vote cuzz i obvizly won dis
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Voted For: Pleim
Lookin at ya pic, there aint much reason to keep ya head up I know your ass in poor, but you could at LEAST get an edge up You should been prepared against me dog, a fact you outta duck Shit even IF the camera adds 10 pounds, ya still fat as fuck VS. nothing of scene...came wack son, lacked punches v/pleim...rotflmmfao @ the pic. |
Voted For: Pleim
Pleim: You're NOT black,get it through ya head for christs sake mayne You're just a wigger in a faded Polo shirt wearing fake chains Aight personal, decent opener overall Lookin at ya pic, there aint much reason to keep ya head up I know your ass in poor, but you could at LEAST get an edge up Another good personal Son, with that picture we ALL know you are easily dead I know farmers with smaller ears of corn than those on ya head Lol it's funny cuz it's true. You should been prepared against me dog, a fact you outta duck Shit even IF the camera adds 10 pounds, ya still fat as fuck Good closer, with another good personal Scene: No one looks at ya callouts cuz all u are is a herb couldnt spit a perfect verse if all u said was verb Made no sense, weak opener overall dude look ya punchin ya self just look at your name cuz all ya lines are the same merkin u & takin fame No punch u only got 1 u havin 2-0?? Naw bitch its slim to none this battle is for shits and giggles im doin it for fun Decent setup, 2nd line didn't deliver messin wit me ill have ya shot more then columbine break ya spine got ya twisted more then a intertwine What the hell are you talking about? bars so bright thinkin u just saw a nuclear explosion Cuz u still wouldnt elavate with help from a erosion :huh: Winner - Pleim, for better punches, and also had some good personals in there. Scene the only decent part of your verse was a setup, other than that your verse was garbage. You need to go back to elevating, hardcore-style. No hate though, Pleim just did better. Gimme an honest explained vote here http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=171268 |
thanks voters letz get summore in hurr............
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cmon dawg diz shyt iz ridculuz more voterz in hurr cmon
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Posts: 123
Joined: Jan 2005 From: Los Angeles fa` sho Status: Online Text Record: 2-1 Audio Record: 0-0 Graphics Record: 0-0 IP: 28AD 5545 uppin for summore voterz who kno whut dey talkin bout |
Posts: 123
Joined: Jan 2005 From: Los Angeles fa` sho Status: Online Text Record: 2-1 Audio Record: 0-0 Graphics Record: 0-0 IP: 28AD 5545 uppin for summore voterz who kno whut dey talkin bout |
Voted For: Pleim
Nemesis i notice you have elevated since last time i seen you battle... and Pleim i never seen you battle period so here goes with the critique: You're NOT black,get it through ya head for christs sake mayne You're just a wigger in a faded Polo shirt wearing fake chains ^^nice personal aight opener Lookin at ya pic, there aint much reason to keep ya head up I know your ass in poor, but you could at LEAST get an edge up ^^omg another nice personal lol @ the edge up part Son, with that picture we ALL know you are easily dead I know farmers with smaller ears of corn than those on ya head ^^nice wordplay and another effective personal You should been prepared against me dog, a fact you outta duck Shit even IF the camera adds 10 pounds, ya still fat as fuck ^^lol nice closer, you verse had some really funny personals, very effective... Nemesis: No one looks at ya callouts cuz all u are is a herb couldnt spit a perfect verse if all u said was verb ^^not too bad of an opener, but not really hardhittin dude look ya punchin ya self just look at your name cuz all ya lines are the same merkin u & takin fame ^^nice flow but not very effective tho u only got 1 u havin 2-0?? Naw bitch its slim to none this battle is for shits and giggles im doin it for fun ^^aight coulda been way better... messin wit me ill have ya shot more then columbine break ya spine got ya twisted more then a intertwine ^^nice flow, best bar so far... first half was decent bars so bright thinkin u just saw a nuclear explosion Cuz u still wouldnt elavate with help from a erosion ^^nice closer...... overall your verse needed work, your flow was fine, really good, but you missing wordplay and/or metaphors, you don't need the whole works in ya verse but you still gotta work on ya punches and try more personals.. get more creative wit ya lines... but for this battle, Pleim won it.. |
Voted For: Pleim
LOLOLOLOLOL lamo.............hahahahahah.............pleim.... .......fuk ur funny u jus ate this kat.................lol ahhahahaha fukin krakin up readin it......You're NOT black,get it through ya head for christs sake mayne You're just a wigger in a faded Polo shirt wearing fake chains Lookin at ya pic, there aint much reason to keep ya head up I know your ass in poor, but you could at LEAST get an edge up Son, with that picture we ALL know you are easily dead I know farmers with smaller ears of corn than those on ya head You should been prepared against me dog, a fact you outta duck ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ lol mayne good lines obviously good punches flow wuz dope phat lines and wrdplay.....lol funny line dat fukin farmer lin lol.........hahahahahha yo nemisis....elevate...he jus ate ur asss......... and yo return the favour....in my battles below lol hahhahha |
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