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.:DeAtH vIsIoN:. vs Mista_Auth3ntiq
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-11-05 at 12:54 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
.:DeAtH vIsIoN:. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-05 12:55 PM.
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ay dawg dis is kilo n dis 4 da crew battle so accept mayne
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a crime boss i accept bein punished; step up when confronted/
mash my foes to a bloody pulp make enemies sick to they stomach/ just messin around wit dat rhyme scheme tryna make somethin of it but here go my verse nigga u a bitch in hot water i'm down 2 slaughter opposers/ like jesus at birth a souljah; stuck on this earth callin jehovah/ LC in dis bitch til its ova guns as my witness i'm bound 2 rip dis/ u can tell from "how ya names spelled" nothin bout you's "authentic"/ i'm hellenic with ancient scriptures of felonious lyrical mashes/ known 2 leave chalk on blocks like a serial killin lryic assasain/ wanted me outta heavy hittaz bitch u got nerve 2 play me/ i'll put you in semi- retirement quicka than that faggot jay-z/ down 2 ride leave u 2 tha side layed out with a snipe riffle/ ya crew gon merk me, HOW? doin drive-bys on unicycles?/ picture that u couldn't kill me even if u was half tha man ya bitch was/ speakin of her when's tha last time she let me get in dem guts?/ watch me n my team take tha figure of a circle beatin niggaz purple/ claimin i wont do shit bich i aint ya average steve urkel/ LC til tha end mothafucka but i really dont need a crew/ matta fact fuck dis i'm done spittin *hands tha mic 2 u*/ |
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MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-10-05 12:07 AM.
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dis kilo dawg. i set it up n dis counts 4 tha crew battle. good luck mayne.1
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Even if you was an sharp shooter you still cant see death visions
Lyrica Cataclysm ? Wack ass crew, but you still jack with them (get it?) Even though hammerIn your crew, don’t mean your punches hit hard Man, you fucking with an poet, my punches will leave you emotionally scarred Your punches scared to come out like you have plague in every bar Even though in all battles you use unlimited lines, don’t mean you’ll win this by far Like your avy I’ll cut you in half but you wont be pledge allegiance for ever breathing The way I’m going to do to your skillz is going to be the same way like titanic leave it sinking I’ll make your eyes bleed for reading this hot text, it’s the only way you can see death visions Call me an worm the way I’m eating your deep death flesh. Hmm taste like baked chicken scarred- LOOK IN DICTIONARY IF YOU DONT KNOW |
Lol Yo Uppin For Some Damn Votes Holla At Cha Boi.......
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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
aight this was an aight battle... both of yall had some good points and some bad points so imma break it down for u right here: Death: ya shit was aight... i didnt like the structure at all.. shit hurt ya flow and all but it was aight... punches and personals were there but could have been a bit better... they were aight but could have hit harder.. the Jay-z line was played... good vocab tho... it was sorta creative i suppose... overall 4/10 Mista... GREAT STRUCTURE.... i was feelin it... i like it centered but thats just me, it helps the flow and gets it all goin.... flow was tight... personals were tight as fuck... punches could of hit harder... vocab was good.... the closer was dope... overall tight verse... 6.5/10 aight this was an aight battle... both of yall did aight but mista got this one... no hate to either of u.... Vote- Mista |
This was feedback posted for .:DeAtH vIsIoN:.
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aiyo wickedclown aint yall 2 in da same crew or somethin?
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Voted For: .:DeAtH vIsIoN:.
^^^uppin' for these cats and checkin' the polls... death... you came somewhat nice.......its too bad your names damn near the same as deadly's. he wont like that too much....lmao. hold it down fellas. oner... s.v.....c.s. Vote removed |
^^^my bad......this was meant as feedback. i'll hit the mods up.
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This was feedback posted for MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
it's really to hard to tell so i'm just gonna leave feed
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Mother fuckah, uppin for some honest votes holla at cha boi,....
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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
ok punches and vocab as well as struture were tied here but heres where the big diffrence came personals death you basically had a verse which couldve been used aganist anyone which makes me think prewrite it aint do no damage to your oppenant while mista had personals that werent spectacular but still decent and personals always win battles and thats why i think he won. both please return honest votes in my battle in my sig. |
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YO thanks for the vote, will return fav'z asap. wun.
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Voted For: .:DeAtH vIsIoN:.
AIi This was A close battle but This Is how I feel death Did A Little Better Than Mistah and That why he gets my vote he really did well on A few punchez and ETC. His structure was aii no multi's and stuff but umm did fairly well In this battle id say Mistah You did well to but it seems as if you werent original bcuz those pucnhlines seemed jus a lil unoriginal Thats all Im tryin to say No Hate its just how i feel and Also ..........You Structure Hurt My eyes it was a little to small Mayne Peace |
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Anyway, uppin for some more votes holla at cha boi............blah
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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
lets see, i'll have to give this one to mista_auth3ntiq -didnt come out as hard, but punches were cleaner and harder hittin, nice flow, good vocab, not so many personals, but in the end, your punches punched more and just was better than serial -killah, nice drop an everythin, but a little weak on the punches, didnt really hit, and your vocab, was....lacking, not really much of a finisher, suppose to knock em out with that one, flowed nice though -gota take mista_authentiq |
Thanks homie, uppin for some more votes chea.......uppin....... |
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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
this was an 1-sided battle so here's my opinion on it: opener: m_a vocab: m_a structure: m_a multis: m_a closer: m_a M_A wins my vote cuz his punches hit harder in this battle & his verse came harder den death vision no hating but d.v u need 2 elevate in ur wordplay & rhyming make sure 2 return the favor |
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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
Aight..... Decent drop from Mista here, much more consistent in his verse, structure was alot better, wasnt strcteched in some places like Deaths verse, the punches an creativity of the wordplay hit harder, an he gets my vote Death, ya verse was aight in places, theres some potential there, but ya gotta structure it better, an learn ta connect your build up lines a punches, no hate tho Return the fave in any of my battles you see floatin around with an honest vote Peace |
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