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3,000,000 to the best person that can...
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Best person that can write a poem about a certain topic that i pick: Topic: Your feelings about this person that you really like, your not really that sure if she likes you or not cuz of these unknown clues she gives u, but you also get clues that she doesn't like you, some clues are that she doesn't pick up your calls when she says call on a saturday, and some clues is that she talks to you so long on the phone after just meeting each other... best writter gets 3,000,000 If its better then i want u'll get 5,000,000 Rules: Min lines: 20 lines Max Lines: 32 lines No Rhyming |
Sooooo basically you like a girl but are too lazy to write the shit yourself?
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Umm... I could do that... but I won't.
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I can do this...
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but you won't...
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you cant ryhme? so it wouldn't be a poem? im confused...
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Not all poems rhyme |
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And i will do it |
lol... I was being a smart ass....
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lol.......just like the good ol P.S.A days... |
I'll do it just to outshine ol school and make the time he spent on it wasted :D
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Yes... Same Thing Except Different. |
Wow, VP, you're actually funny again
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dumbass... poems dont gotta rhyme........ i cant write poems..help em mwuhahahah |
I'm funny? Nah... I'm really retarded...
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Just gonna do it offa the top of my head...hope you like it
Mixed feelings towards a girl that I liked Not sure if she liked me or if she was just messin See she acted like she might one day The next day she was all over some one else So it makes me wonder why she wouldn't pick up the phone But when we did talk we talked for hours on end So I dont know if i should stick with it Or give up and fall in love with an other broad Not sure how she'd react if i gave her a hundred roses If shes act happy look happy or be happy But i know i like her a lot and will never give up So I must go on like the Us Soldiers did in the wars And not stop till i show her how i feel towards her Maybe she'll change thoughts and feel me I mean I look into her Eyes and think oh damn There beautiful like the sun when it rises up in the morning Seems like I feel like i love this girl Or is it puppy love? full graw what could this be I hope that she feels for me and gives a chance That'd be exciting and i'd have some one 2 hold |
damn thats hard how can I not rhyme?its impossible.. umm... Life's like.heat seeking......hidden signals..Invisible missles (sorry but it goes with it) going both ways..Bi-routed..emotions hoping for another path as veiwing only extended phone calls as the week ends weakining muscles including the strongest..helpful would be to think of me as I ponder you..being two faced..but both are very pretty think before action..your confusing my mind..you'r a brain teaser giving me gestures and looks..so you can't blame me I'm innocent is so..you're my shepord and Im the scapegoat.. your playing tug a war pushin me back and away.. you can't give me directions to the desert..so I'm not sure but I can guess..I can dream..you can play..with my mind with mindgames..although I don't know if you know..but I'm sure I want you by my side..like..is just a word hands are a feeling hands are your future..your the lines on my palms truthfully but a truthful guess I know I'm don't know..its half your fault and half mine.. I have and half mind..one side says approach but your maybe gonna laugh..or you maybe gonna smile you're your own woman..but your leesh has a blurred owner you often are caught using mascare but make up your mind damn its so god damn hard not to rhyme s I used semi-all metas pc |
I hope he picks mine..cause I cry very easily :(
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That was bitchin' (bad-ass) Indeph... someday you'll be as good as me...
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dabados.... why do u make threads like this and then no show 2 weeks in a row in poetry league?
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^^^^(to VP) agreed...... not gonna try anymore
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WtF? NO-Show? lmao, i didn't no-show, I wrote my verse, but just didn't try? so wtf u talkin bout no show? ConfuseD? |
both poems we're good, just waiting till tomorrow
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yo Doba you like or not? either way thanks for the practice
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your dumb... u no showed against me... then u no showed against lady fiya... valor just kicked u outta the league... dumb ass |
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wtf?? I was still in the league?? Oh shyt, i thought they already took me out wen i lost?? |
My life doesn't seem complete without you company. Scent's of rose's billow off your body, and stress my mind. Vision's of me and you, run back and forth through my head. Because i feel something for you, i have never experienced before. I look forward to the day, when i can wallow in your personality. And become close to you, share our feeling's and share our passion. To think rational, would just be grinding my mind all about your feature's. Word's cannot express my emotion's toward you, i just need you to know. That i'll forever respect you, whatever and wherever life takes you. Be there as a friend to console and heal your pain, and frustration. Or upon your decision to metamorph into someone more than a friend. Every waking moment, your essence is imprinted on my thought's. And every time i close my eye's you are all i see and all i want to see. Ringing you on the weekend, but you never answer upon my attempt's Yet, you converse with me for hour's, but i get shutdown like withered roses. I dont know if youre posing,i just cant detain the feelings that need to surface. Give me a reply, to put my hopes to rest, and let me live my life with you as a companion. Push my boundary's to contain you in freedom, and treat you wisely. So, before you pass judgement, i just want you to know my view's. That every soul, me and you, should become close, and become Two. |
I hope you like it dabatos....
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aight Dabatos i got a poem coming up........... so wait up, aight...........
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nvm cuz i ain't writing no poem about liking no female... forget that, and to those who said poems rhyme, they actually don't more than half the time...
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ok, ima change it up so that the she is a he, but if u wanna keep it, u can change the sexes.
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i felt so sure about us, u were like a gift from god
the way you spoke, u spoke the voice of angels i thought we had sumthing going on between us but it seems im standing here all alone, deserted i care 4 u, and i just gotta know if u feel the same cause if u dont, i gues im wasting my time i dont wanna spend effort on something that isnt there i love u but im so confused u said u loved me, that i was the best friend u ever knew but now ur blowing me off and i dont know wut too feel just tell me if u love me or am i invisoning a thing of the past a thing that was never there cause i would never do anything to hurt u i just wanna hold u in my arms save u from the darkness the cold, the rain i just wanna love u ok, it sucked, who gives a fuck? |
so?????????????????????? u decide?
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surprisingly this is the best one so far... If no one writes anything better by the end of the day, he will become the winner.. |
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actually, i wrote acouple of poems already, just go look in poetic scripture, so no im not lazy, and yes i like this girl, but i ain't gonna show no poem to her.. |
My feelings for you like warm sunshine on a spring day as it comes down
Your breeze of beauty floats my emotions in heavens clouds You voice beckons me through wires to kiss your lovely lips Yet i wait fearing rejection not sure if you will return my kiss I have a map to the path to your love but detours have made me lose focus I know not if we travel the same path or if the end is only of hearts broken Im confused the fog of you and i misting my sight But like a warrior who protects his kingdom i stand one time............. Knowing you are worth the fight I call you...you dont respond yet when you do it is passion of words How am i to make a picture from the inaccurate blurs? now pay me slut :thumbup: |
dont duck me you little bitch.. ^
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^i just told you set it up fag nobodys ducking you your are wack real simple
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