Flamin Barz vs Scene
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-12-05 at 02:20 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Flamin Barz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-09-05 02:21 AM.

Scene has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-09-05 04:24 AM.

Cant believe you steppin to this Flamin Barz
have ya wit sars punches leavin ya wit scars
when u PM me I thought dat u were good
when i said open callout u missundastood
Scheme got ya ripped like a cheap trash bag
merk me stfu fag have u in sarrow wat a drag
ya raps cheap heap personals r goin into deep
you gettin jumped like a fuckin hop scotch leap
you battle like Ol ppl fuck slow and sloppy
still wont win even if u made a sloppy copy

bitch flea and grab a couple...glasses pair of sight
never measure up, hott?...ur not even 'fair in height'(farenhiet)
i bet i scare this dike - all cus you cant duck tha beam-
like goin on a rampage at a play - i'll fuck up tha scene-
u get filled like vendin machines - so ur not one to over rate-
u’ll never ride a smooth flow like square wheels on roller skates-
n even ur mother wish she didnt have u - it wasnt part of her dream-
like bein drunk at church - shes like "how could i make such a scene"-
n fuck ya team - i dont trust ya gleem - i will never fuck with u-
good luck with crews*-u just a 'kid man'-no1 wants to be stuck with u-*(cruise)**
me and my niggas hit u on every rotation like passin a blunt-
i like ur city-great at 'cross' country-just a nation of 'faggots who run'-


**Tom cruise broke up with Nicole Kidman

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170652

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170703

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Uppin this ppl its 1-0 me ok plz uppin this ok pppl no D/R votes ok :thumbup:

^^yea - no d/r votes- and Scene it's not 1-0 you - it's 0-0 - we still have no votes - uppin

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uppim for some votes people.........................

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uppin please for some votes - quit sleepin on me -

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uppin - vote and i'll reutrn the favor on one of your battles -

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This was feedback posted for Flamin Barz
 

this shit is weak u need to go homec and write som new material if u don't u will never win a battle

Voted For: Flamin Barz

this was an 1-sided battle all the way down the line:
opener: flamin barz
voacb: flamin barz
structure: nemesis
multis: f.b
closer: f.b
f.b came harder & hit wit more lyrical punches then nemesis; nem u need 2 elevate in ur lines , & hit ur opponent wit more str8 direct punches

Voted For: Flamin Barz

Yeah...Flamin took this in every category...Punches were creative, flow was on point, decent wordplay...Overall, good shit...Nemisis, ya shit was weak man...First of all, you didnt throw a single half-decent punch throughout your whole verse...Ya shit did flow ok however, but it lacked creativity and punches, which are essential if you plan on winning a battle...Better luck next time, but my vote goes to Flamin Barz...Good shit man...1

This was feedback posted for Flamin Barz