J Gutta vs Tha Sickness
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3 Votes Wins

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-10-05 at 03:22 AM

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Tha Sickness has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-09-05 03:24 PM.

'Js' lyrics flow worse than a clogged up 'gutta' 'hes full-of-it'/
like my 'Shitter', after i drop a 'deuce', 'ya full-a-shit'/
im here to 'flush ya' down tha 'drain' you go/
come up in a 'sewer', somewhere in 'Toron-to'/
so you think you can defeat my sickness 'Ayy'/
im like a 'broken scale', here to say 'no wiegh'/ (way)
ya the 'mike tyson' of RV, 'bitin' rhymes to captures ya listeners 'ear'/
this battles like 'glass' ill be the victor, that much is 'clear'/
ya 'vocal box', and ya 'mind' must be broken/
cuz when you 'think' about a rhyme, all i 'hear' is 'Choken'/

J Gutta has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-09-05 09:25 PM.

Fuck Lc and Sickness.. haha iama don son..Lm will bomb on you tricks

I Spit Dat sickness, that has doctors like wats da cure,
Snitch, if a bitch uses a punchline against you ud sure her//
have you like ball tryouts and cut failers//
black on black cap, wit da black chuck tailors//
wen you spittin its kinda like a lyrical cataclysm,
these bitches like kkk there aint no black in em//
I got dem guns that’ll leave ya jaw shifted,
Got dem dawgs, that’ll leave ya ma fisted//
She a nasty bitch huh, oh yeah we left her pregnant,
Didn’t give good brains, so I left her chest wit segments//
I left ya moms crippled, and bullet wounds in her chest,
Left her face dimpled, cuz of da harpoons to tha left//
gutta is nasty nigga dont give a fuck waat u think,
sorry if i pop off shots wit no reason its an instinct//
intentionaly foul dis nigga if he look at me strange,
my eyes suck far vision, but ma scope got range//
this trick said Lm pussies, dats tha bitches word,
jus to let Lm and Lc know, that I got tha sickness cured//

uppin Legendary Mc'z Vs Lyrical Cataslysm or ( Gutta vs Tha Sickness) vote upp///

Voted For: J Gutta

VOTED FOR J GUTTA

Gutta man thas sum mad punclines yo hittin up the moms, thas hard
Rhymin was good i could stay in tune while sayin it to myself
Like How u used his own name is a punchline

GUTTA'S off the hook line:
""wen you spittin its kinda like a lyrical cataclysm,
these bitches like kkk there aint no black in em//""
(TIGHT WORK)

Sick Ya punches were ight but not nearly as strong as Guttas
I like how u dissed him by using his hometown in a punch though

Rhymin was ight lil choppy at sum times

SICK"S BEST LINE :
""'Js' lyrics flow worse than a clogged up 'gutta' 'hes full-of-it'/
like my 'Shitter', after i drop a 'deuce', 'ya full-a-shit'/""

Great Battle but I gotta Vote for only one
No Hatin at all jus my matter of opinion



Sick- The punches were ight but not as strong

iight fam uppin....

uppin for votes people...

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J-guttah Schooled Him...................................

uppin for votes wun........

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Voted For: Tha Sickness

Tha Sickness
decent drop from you...punches were on point
some of them didnt land though, the flow was
pretty decent, vocab was aight, some mispelled
words up in there but overall u had a decent drop
7/10

J Gutta
you had a decent drop too..most of it was
self-glory though, u need to stop doing that
but overall u had a nice flow & structure but
hardly saw any punches..........................
6/10

iight uppin............................................. .......

thanks man... up up up up up upppiinnn.....................

This was feedback posted for J Gutta
 

nicely done fam.......................................

Voted For: Tha Sickness

the vote goes to tha sickness he had more punches, flow, n structure..battles wasnt dat great but my vote went 2 tha sick ness return da favor man at da links

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Voted For: Tha Sickness

it was an ok battle but my vote goes 2 tha sickness

opena: j-gutta, punches: sick, multi: sick, vocab: j-gutta
structure: j-gutta, personals: sick, & closa: sick

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Voted For: J Gutta

gutta took this battle in my opinion. his structure and flow were alot better than the Sickness's. also his punches hit harder and were more creative, some ight attempts at personals. not a very good opener but ight closer. sickness needed to come wit more stuff to win but didnt
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^^ you just like to fuckin cheat for ya fuck-buddy jgutta ... well whateva im just gon rip you in our battle ... peace bitch

Voted For: J Gutta

im like a 'broken scale', here to say 'no wiegh'/ (way)
ya the 'mike tyson' of RV, 'bitin' rhymes to captures ya listeners 'ear'/


i have heard both of those lines before..... and like identical somewhere else.... maybe Rb.... but it sounds like biting to me.... u wouldve taken this battle for me, but i suspect biting goin on

J Gutta had an ok Verse..... his whole "sickness" thing that ran through the whole verse was good, and made a nice addition.... i ddnt like the "Pregnant" bar, it was kinda stupoid and too thuggish/fake personal for this battle..... but it was decent overalll

now The sickness had some nice punches, and a good personal to open it up...... but if those two bars i pasted is not biting, they are still very played concepts if i can remember someone else doin them, esp. the mike tyson biting one..... so u lose my vote for good punches, but bein played

Ohhh and i dropped an honest vote, so can u please return the favor to the link in my sig.... my battle with CALI..... idf really appreciate it....

Voted For: Tha Sickness

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Sickness:
so you think you can defeat my sickness 'Ayy'/
im like a 'broken scale', here to say 'no wiegh'/ (way)
ya the 'mike tyson' of RV, 'bitin' rhymes to captures ya listeners 'ear'/
this battles like 'glass' ill be the victor, that much is 'clear'/

vs.

intentionaly foul dis nigga if he look at me strange,
my eyes suck far vision, but ma scope got range//


v/The Sickness...for stronger punches...the broken scale was the best.

Can you guys hit up that battle plz, thank you.

Voted For: Tha Sickness

damm i give dis 2 u fam ...ya verse was kind of hott even tho it was shorter than gutta's u had a couple creative punchlines..no personals or multis and ya structure was cool...gutta whuts good fam y u stay talkin about "black chuck tailors"??? lol damm dat aint 4 dis type of rappin...u had a solid verse nothin really stood out from ya shit

opener-sick
structure-a tie
punchlines-sick
creativity-sick
multis-nun
wordplay-nun
personals-gutta
finisher-gutta
enjoyed-sick.....like i said he came with da betta verse


return da favor ya'll

Voted For: Tha Sickness

how does J gutta have three votes? prolly all dickriders... J you dont have any wordplay and you talk about what you do(killin and stuff like that) and you talk about his mom thats retarded and beyond played. sayin how (gutta) you are isn't battleing... its wordplay and punches.
godfather... you got this with alot of wordplay, but try directing more of your wordplay as punches instead of just sayin stuffya the 'mike tyson' of RV, 'bitin' rhymes to captures ya listeners 'ear'/
this battles like 'glass' ill be the victor, that much is 'clear'/
^^^this is dope wordplay, callin him a biter, see thats a punch as well.

ya 'vocal box', and ya 'mind' must be broken/
cuz when you 'think' about a rhyme, all i 'hear' is 'Choken'/
^^^decent, because it was worplay and a punch, but it was a made up punch, doesn't hit as hard.

so you think you can defeat my sickness 'Ayy'/
im like a 'broken scale', here to say 'no wiegh'/ (
^^real good wordplay agian, but this is the worst line maybe out of yours because its not a punch and not makin fun of the other guy.
decent drop, just try directing you punches more.
...check my sig later and it'll have a battle up

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Voted For: Tha Sickness

the godfatha takes this.. better wordplay and punches even though his opener is mad played... he had some good personals.. and his flow was on as well as his structure... gutta u gutta step up if ur gonna start battling more experienced peeps.. pz