Celestial vs Socrates
 

10 Lines

Drop by tonight
You can spit first Soc

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-10-05 at 12:26 AM

Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in.

Celestial has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-09-05 07:26 PM.

Socrates has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-09-05 07:27 PM.

Yes.. the personals are true

I told him I needed cash, & he must be gay, see
Next thing I know this soft fuck got a job to pay me
But he just wants to be down, chill wit the gang
So ill frame him for murder just so he can finally hang
Fuck u thinking, industries hard, u won’t make it
Cuz Rap is life.. no wonder Socrates is overrated
& when ya pops said he saw you smokin, im'a be true
That was just ANOTHER excuse to beat you
& this hated kids ugly as fuck, and I wont lie
Hes the ONLY cat to post his pic on HHS & get 0 replies

Sorry but i'm not going to give too much strength in this =/

Son, what in the world makes you think you can abuse me?
You still got the username and glow colors that scream newb
Deserve respect...pfft...for you its not even close to hardly
You only here because everyone is leaving your crew on RB
You aint even audio after like a year, still only doing text
So I aint talkin bout your name when I say your albums celes
I'm keying this up in 7 minutes,with you,i need no effort at all
Cuz it's easy to split Cel.................with no mitosis involved
Your'e a fuckin pathetic faggot, maybe just a loser at most
You dont pull crowds in......you just jerk them off for votes

blah

And let the voting begin

And nigga, you in CK too lol

I know foolio, its called a personal :p
.........

Voted For: Socrates

SOCRATES
Son, what in the world makes you think you can abuse me?
You still got the username and glow colors that scream newb
DOPE GOOD PERSONAL HERE
Deserve respect...pfft...for you its not even close to hardly
You only here because everyone is leaving your crew on RB
ANOTHER DOPE PERSONAL HERE
You aint even audio after like a year, still only doing text
So I aint talkin bout your name when I say your albums celes
WACK THIS AINT HIT AT ALL
I'm keying this up in 7 minutes,with you,i need no effort at all
Cuz it's easy to split Cel.................with no mitosis involved
HAHA DOPE PUNCH HERE
Your'e a fuckin pathetic faggot, maybe just a loser at most
You dont pull crowds in......you just jerk them off for votes
WACK CLOSER
OK SOC A FEW DECENT PUNCHES AND DISSES HERE NICE FLOW DECENT VOCAB OVERALL A 6/10

CELESTIAL
I told him I needed cash, & he must be gay, see
Next thing I know this soft fuck got a job to pay me
HAHAHAH FUNNY SHIT HERE DOPE
But he just wants to be down, chill wit the gang
So ill frame him for murder just so he can finally hang
PLAYED CONCEPT
Fuck u thinking, industries hard, u won’t make it
Cuz Rap is life.. no wonder Socrates is overrated
HUH?THIS AINT MAKE MUCH SINCE IT WAS REALLY LAME
& when ya pops said he saw you smokin, im'a be true
That was just ANOTHER excuse to beat you
WELL I GUESS YOUR SAYING YOUR HIS POPS?IF NOT ITS LESS WACK BUT STILL WACK ANYWAYS
& this hated kids ugly as fuck, and I wont lie
Hes the ONLY cat to post his pic on HHS & get 0 replies
HAHAHA FUNNY SHIT GOOD CLOSER
CEL BASICALLY YOUR OPENER AND CLOSER WERE YOUR BEST LINES WITH ALOT OF BULSHIT IN BETWEEN THEM PUNCHSE AND DISSES HAT SINT HIT SO SOC BEAT YOU WITH BETTER PERSONALS AND DISSES AND PUNCHES AND THAT WINAS BATTLES.

BOTH RETURN THE FAVOR ON THE ONE IN MY SIG

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

^ I told you fuck face, all the damn personals are true.. how the fuck are you going to say they were bullshit.. this kid hates me anyway cuz he got merked on my site..

Fuck u thinking, industries hard, u won’t make it
Cuz Rap is life.. no wonder Socrates is overrated

Are you fucking dumb? I didnt think i would have to explain it, but i will.. Its saying his life sucks. Rap is life, socrates is supposidly good here, hes overrated.. meaning hes not good.. rap is life.. get it faggots

& when ya pops said he saw you smokin, im'a be true
That was just ANOTHER excuse to beat you

No I wasnt saying i was his pops you dumb ass.. I was saying his parents hate him and beat him, so when his dad said he saw him smoking it was just another excuse for him to beat him..

God.. i didnt think i would have to explain my whole entire verse. .but i guess i was wrong

DO NOT VOTE IF YOU DON'T FUCKING UNDERSTAND IT

Some one please remove that vote, its bullshit.

This was feedback posted for Socrates
 

Yall niggas is trash, shame to rapverse yo........

^ Cels nasty yo..............



nah mean?

^i Understood Your Verse It Was Just Wacked Another Dude Dickrode To Glory On Rb Who Know Thinks Hes Nice.that Was Fucking Wack Period You Suck Wack

^ Actually I am no where near glory on Rb.. not even close

And seriously quit talking out of your ass man

Enough owned you in 6 lines.. rofl

Voted For: Socrates

I told him I needed cash, & he must be gay, see
Next thing I know this soft fuck got a job to pay me
ehh aight
But he just wants to be down, chill wit the gang
So ill frame him for murder just so he can finally hang
nice wordplay
Fuck u thinking, industries hard, u won’t make it
Cuz Rap is life.. no wonder Socrates is overrated
decent..good
& when ya pops said he saw you smokin, im'a be true
That was just ANOTHER excuse to beat you
pretty good
& this hated kids ugly as fuck, and I wont lie
Hes the ONLY cat to post his pic on HHS & get 0 replies
lol nice

Son, what in the world makes you think you can abuse me?
You still got the username and glow colors that scream newb
ight...no hittin hard though
Deserve respect...pfft...for you its not even close to hardly
You only here because everyone is leaving your crew on RB
decent
You aint even audio after like a year, still only doing text
So I aint talkin bout your name when I say your albums celes
nice....wordplay
I'm keying this up in 7 minutes,with you,i need no effort at all
Cuz it's easy to split Cel.................with no mitosis involved
good meta, good punch
Your'e a fuckin pathetic faggot, maybe just a loser at most
You dont pull crowds in......you just jerk them off for votes
lol i liked this, nice punch

this was a close battle, but ima give it to soc for bein a little more creative, you each had some good personals, but i think soc came a lil harder, this was a close battle but i think soc just edged it out

v/soc

Up..................

Can we get some more votes

Voted For: Socrates


Socrates:

Son, what in the world makes you think you can abuse me?
You still got the username and glow colors that scream new b
^^ehh wack 3/10
Deserve respect...pfft...for you its not even close to hardly
You only here because everyone is leaving your crew on RB
^^decent personal 5/10
You aint even audio after like a year, still only doing text
So I aint talkin bout your name when I say your albums celes
^^dope name play and meta good punch 9/10
I'm keying this up in 7 minutes,with you,i need no effort at all
Cuz it's easy to split Cel.................with no mitosis involved
^^dope meta decent punch 7/10
Your'e a fuckin pathetic faggot, maybe just a loser at most
You dont pull crowds in......you just jerk them off for votes
^^lol just funny 6/10

overall : 30/50(60%)

I told him I needed cash, & he must be gay, see
Next thing I know this soft fuck got a job to pay me
^^kinda wack 4/10
But he just wants to be down, chill wit the gang
So ill frame him for murder just so he can finally hang
^^decent punch ok meta 6/10
Fuck u thinking, industries hard, u won’t make it
Cuz Rap is life.. no wonder Socrates is overrated
^^no 3/10
& when ya pops said he saw you smokin, im'a be true
That was just ANOTHER excuse to beat you
^^wtf is this lol 2/10
& this hated kids ugly as fuck, and I wont lie
Hes the ONLY cat to post his pic on HHS & get 0 replies
^^lmao dope personal good closer 9/10

overall : 24/50 (48%)

vote: socrates

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PLEASE return the favor on this battle with an honest vote or i will eat your unborn children

*sigh*

I thought my opener was nasty.. or atleast Rb did.. was enough to beat soc in 1-2

but meh.. good job soc :)

Voted For: Celestial

Celes:
1st bar is recycled for sure soo boo to that and the frame hang connection is gettin kinda old but it still looked nice here, flow was fucked in the 4th bar...LMAO @ the closer tho, good personal and comedic

SOC:
lol, like the opener cuz i be thinkin the same shit so much
2nd bar failed, if they were leaving cuz of him then ok, but this was wa miss...like the sell less nameplay, and lol @ the biology in ya verse, meh @ the nameplay...and NO!!!! @ your closer, shit was honestly garbage...rest of the verse was nice until then

Overall: basically..i liked more of soc's bars then celes's....funny, cuz i came in here expectin celes to win...good closer to celes tho, shit was nice

v/ socrates


P.S. hit up that link in my sig (4 bars each) i need someone with at least half a brain to drop a somewhat decent vote, shit isnt even a contest but hes gettin votes

LMAO...FUCK...um, someone get a mod to change that...i posted the vote in the wrong box...LMAO

Voted For: Celestial

I told him I needed cash, & he must be gay, see
Next thing I know this soft fuck got a job to pay me
decent opener, punch was aight here
But he just wants to be down, chill wit the gang
So ill frame him for murder just so he can finally hang
decent punch here, nuttin much
Fuck u thinking, industries hard, u won’t make it
Cuz Rap is life.. no wonder Socrates is overrated
good line here, punch delivered
& when ya pops said he saw you smokin, im'a be true
That was just ANOTHER excuse to beat you
decent punch
& this hated kids ugly as fuck, and I wont lie
Hes the ONLY cat to post his pic on HHS & get 0 replies
nice closer here, decent persona…punch landed

overall u had a nice drop, some of the punches were
aight but overall, nice persona’s, but overall decent drop
from you though.. .. ..


Son, what in the world makes you think you can abuse me?
You still got the username and glow colors that scream newb
no…punch was weak here, plus hardly rhymed here
Deserve respect...pfft...for you its not even close to hardly
You only here because everyone is leaving your crew on RB
decent punch, persona was aight…nuttin much here
You aint even audio after like a year, still only doing text
So I aint talkin bout your name when I say your albums celes
decent punch
I'm keying this up in 7 minutes,with you,i need no effort at all
Cuz it's easy to split Cel.................with no mitosis involved
decent punch here, hardly landed
Your'e a fuckin pathetic faggot, maybe just a loser at most
You dont pull crowds in......you just jerk them off for votes
good punch, prolly ur best here…

overall u had a decent drop, some of the punches were
aight too, persona’s were decent, vocab was okay, and the
structure was in place overall decent drop though.. .. ..

Cel's comming back!!
























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This was feedback posted for Celestial
 

dope battle....just checkin the polls...............

Voted For: Socrates

have to go with this boy right here he had better structure, flow was good hits where harder had better personels opener-closure was better. his lyrics was good his rhyming was ok he could do better I know it but he did ok to take this battle by storm. But here are the ones that I liked in this bat and his vocab was good also hit up on my links peace!



Son, what in the world makes you think you can abuse me?
You still got the username and glow colors that scream newb
Deserve respect...pfft...for you its not even close to hardly
You only here because everyone is leaving your crew on RB
You aint even audio after like a year, still only doing text
7.7/10


I told him I needed cash, & he must be gay, see
Next thing I know this soft fuck got a job to pay me
But he just wants to be down, chill wit the gang
So ill frame him for murder just so he can finally hang
Fuck u thinking, industries hard, u won’t make it
Cuz Rap is life.. no wonder Socrates is overrated
& when ya pops said he saw you smokin, im'a be true
5.1/10

have to go with this boy right here he had better structure

What the fuck? Rofl

better structure? Our stuctures were identical..

*dead*

close this and give him the win before i kill some one for being a complete idiot

LMFAOOOOOOO...dayum nigga. ..does that end your 80-0 winning streak?

shit..before they close it go return the vote on that link in my sig

Voted For: Socrates

Damn Well i cant Lie im atell yall rii off of bat Socrates took this one BEcuase Celstail Lacked punchez 4real But N e ways heres An explanation for the PPl

Celestial
You lacked the Basic Neccesities of a Battle verse mayne You def Lacked punche which hurt you the most its ok to do personals every here and then but You dont need to do them Alll The TIme But mayne like I said You couldve done betta NO HATE its jus that You didnt Really use n e Good punchez And Even You can look through ya verse and see that But n e way
Best Bar
Fuck u thinking, industries hard, u won’t make it
Cuz Rap is life.. no wonder Socrates is overrated

Aii
Socrates
Well You didnT really come your harderst but you came harder Umm Theres not much i can say to you except never underestimate your oppenents Mayne because if you do then theyll sneak an easy ass win ova on you So Neva do That Umm,...l...I gave you the win When I read that bar
which Is also your
Best bars
You aint even audio after like a year, still only doing text
So I aint talkin bout your name when I say your albums celes
I'm keying this up in 7 minutes,with you,i need no effort at all
Cuz it's easy to split Cel.................with no mitosis involved


Aii yall Thats Jus How i feel Plz RTF in the link In my Sig

Fuck no.. 3/4 of RV fails to understand what a good punch is

Voted For: Celestial

Socrates-Nice flow, Punches with personlas, was "eh" kinda didnt come hard, you had effectives, but not the way you usually do, you came a little basic and balanced with effective and not effective.Nice multies.


celes-Nice verse, punches were good. Flow was nice and readable. Personals was awsome. Wordplays was GOOD as fuck. Punches were very creative with soem dope personals.




overall=Close battle, but i think celes got it, he had some harder punches with soem good flow plus personals and wordplay. Soc, your punches was good, but not the way it usually hit hard, came a little basic. Nice multies. Personals was good, the punches is what is weak in your verse, punches was balanced. Celes however came harder with the punches, so my vote goe sto celes. Wun.

word mayn, some niggas on here vote of either they idiots
or some just vote for the person who has the lead, im tellin
you, im bout to roll out and go to rb maybe.....................

Voted For: Socrates

good batle. good verse from both.

Soc: Real good verse, nice multis and personals and the heavy punvhes were hitting bang on all hte way thru. Vocab was cool aswel, i aint seen anyone use the word, "mitosis" on RV yet, -not that i can remember anyway.

best line: "Your'e a fuckin pathetic faggot, maybe just a loser at most
You dont pull crowds in......you just jerk them off for votes"
-Nice closer with a good punch.


Celes: Good verse aswel. The only reason he took this is because i just wasnt feeling ya punches like his. Ok structure, i think the flow went off slightly a couple time but other than that nice.

best line: "But he just wants to be down, chill wit the gang
So ill frame him for murder just so he can finally hang"
-nice meta use, hard hitting punch -bang on target. (best bar on ya verse by far)