/\nightmare/\ vs blackmage
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no hate or d/r votes

*freestyle battle*

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-09-05 at 08:43 PM

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/\nightmare/\ has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-09-05 08:14 PM.

Blackmage has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-09-05 08:16 PM.

you still wishing you could beat me?
the genie can't grant it see
cause if you ever beat me it'd be your "final fantasy"
the man is me
a heavyweight droppin loads and i beat demons
leave you laid out in the middle of the road cause your street dreamin
your like herpes no one wants you but you never go away
forever on someones's balls and feedin off them everyday
my mind's eye can see through weak rappers like broken windows
when i drop i leave a crater you haters just pokin pinholes
which means my mind's eye see's clear and yours peekin
in your "dreams" you can't beat me, roll over and keep sleepin
i'm cynical but still i'm the pinnacle so i'm peakin
i'm just out of your punch's arm length but keep reachin
the difference between us is you a "nightmare" right?
i'm like freddy cause the shit i do happens in real life
you step to my flow but you so disheartened you dead beat
cause i'll part ya scalp like moses parted the red sea
be a gangsta, fine try but we'll see how far you get
leave the meat around ya eyes lookin blacker than tar pits
leave ya body black and blue it'll make you look like a crip
even though if you had a gong dog you couldn't bang shit
I'll put the nail in the coffin for your eternal slumber
you talk to rough i'll get you sliced up cleaner than cucumbers
the best can't be no other we don't act like plumbers
but me and my brother hit the block like the mario brothers

Good luck man and how the hell you get the battle set up 1 minute after i replied. You must've been waitin on a battle all day or somethin

blackmage is just a faze you cant rap your just stuck in a daze
my verses are so complex its like puttin your mind through a maze
i leave em amazed, and stuck in a haze, just by looking at me
if u performed a magik show, and used a saw, u still wouldnt be half of me
i leave tragedies, blackmage? man can he, spit i think knot
cuz your saliva is, is trying to ooze but is filled is thick clots
you get on stage, and choke, worse than cats with a fur ball
hell naw...you beating me? get ready, for your first loss
get the flag ready to be tossed, cuz im not leaving without a win
your shit is so wack, that if u used a mixer, it still wouldnt blend in
im a blast from the past bringin the facts like your mathematics class
you belong in the dumpster because you talk so much trash
its no lie, like "M and Y", im on the out *skirtz* of your mommy
coming outta the closet is the only time, youve ever felt a tommy-*tommy as in a boys name or clothing line*
i *flip* the skript so much you would think i wuz an *acrobat*
you couldnt be on top if u wuz wearin a top hat
got so many *cribs*, its like im an *unprotected hooker*
and got so much fucking *heat*, i should be a professional *cooker*
unable to decide your sex cuz your a M.an A.nd G.irl E.volved together
im coming heavy but your shit is lightweight like a dusting feather
so now ya'll know that nightmare whooped the shit outta blackmage
his ass couldnt *beat* me...if he was staring at my verses' 69th page

i whooped his ass....mad wordplay and multies
*plus i didnt even come my hardest*
hahahahahahhahahahahaahhahahahhahahahahahha

Good shit man Good shit even i gotta tell you that was pretty raw

^thanx mayne....it wuz just a freestyle

yours wasnt bad either homie

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yall i'm uppin this bitch for votes plus yall check out some of my other battles too you know how to find em'

Uppin this for some votes so yall hurry up cause this battle been on my screen way too long

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Uppin this for some votes so yall hurry up cause this battle been on my screen way too long

yo mage, this shit aint even getting touched, no1 is voting, if u want u can have it closed, but if u want to keep it up then you can, youpr choice, im personally getting tired of it on my screen......your choice


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Voted For: /\nightmare/\

easy win 4 nightmare coz the other dude came wit da uneven lines and waz wack wit no punchs or personalz jus kept talking bout dreamin,,,,
nightmnare u had sum decent punchs so elevate and ull be dope rtf in my sig

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Voted For: /\nightmare/\

yea i give this vote 2 nightmare for he had betta wordplay,flow,structure,and punchez....his opener was a 9/10 and his closure was a 9/10 also my vote went 2 nightmare

can u return a favor iight peace out man

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Voted For: /\nightmare/\

good job man keep going....................................

Voted For: Blackmage

both of the verse were average and a lil da same untill i re-read dem again...dis was hard 2 judge they were both very basic....blackmage with that herpes line was nice....lol....nightmare ur punches were elementary......no hate....neither of you used any multis i didnt c much wordplay...none 2 mention anyway...but

vote-blackmage

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Voted For: /\nightmare/\

black mage flow and struture is fucking horrible here punches and disses aint hit and were either played or childish as fuck it seems like a 10 year olf wrote this its madd just i cant say just corny is the best way to describe it here 2/10
nightmare decent struture you really not to cut down the length of you lines they are way tooooooo long punches and disses are decent still need work but they are decent vocab is good multis nice wordplay and personals are good also and helped line up ya punches good drop your better strture flow vocab and punches completely owned him 7/10

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Voted For: /\nightmare/\

morse code - very good verse here. came with a pretty solid structure, good wordplay and multies, nice flow the whole way through and some solid punches and personals in there. you had some allright vocabulary useage too

blackmage - not a bad drop, just not as hard as morse codes, you had an allright flow, the strucutre was a bit off. you didn't have nearly as much wordplay and multies as morse code, and your punches were more sub-par then his.

v/morse code

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