Dio Deus vs DjPlAiMaKa
 

Battle Rules:

10-12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Half Assed Voting (wit categories)
No Dickridin



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-11-05 at 09:40 AM

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DjPlAiMaKa has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-10-05 09:40 AM.

Dio Deus has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-10-05 11:31 AM.

I tear u up to "pieces and bits"/
Word on the street is u faka than "silicone tits"/

U look like a cyclone hit u with "lyrical shit" D/
It looks like ur meant to be losing to me, on RV/

U lyrically declined, verbally disabled/
So I labeled u retarted, "special ed", only place u could be stable/

Ur like a laxative, u just "burst out shit"/
U "drop in decrease", like a "reverse stock split"/

Dio Deus u say u tha bomb?/
I'll diffuse u twice, before u can even say that im wrong/

Ima a Hitman Solja, u cant fuck wit this//
U cant even cum yet, u just "hold back pis"/

you say 50 sucks just like young buck,
gangsta, you probably better? no way you ain't no doubt
why don't you see you have to look out and watch yo mouth
and why would you be proud
that you got a cheap-ass selling-bad gamecube
what you suck my deep cash havin man hate you
cause you talkin bout it's bad to have cash
just because we work harder then your dad's ass
I flow even better than the tidal wave at the indian ocean
but you probably won't understand cause your brains work at slowmotion
I punch you so hard in your stomach you finally learn how to spit
and one day you gon' thank me for what I did

at the 6th line it has to be "men" not man, little mistake.

aight nice drop man .......
good personals
................

Voted For: DjPlAiMaKa

winner-djplaimaka

flow-dj
punches-dj
multies-dj
finisher-dj
opener-tie

Dio- ur verse was aight, just need to up the vocab and add some multies and more heavy punches

Dj- u had ok vocab, not bad multies and punchlines were aight

Voted For: DjPlAiMaKa

opening and closing:djp
flow:djp
structure:djp
punches:djp
enjoyment:djp

Djp just flowed better and made actual sense, better punches and just more complete in general

would appreciate the return feeback on battle vs assassin(check sig)

yeah djplaimaka had a good drop, but where are the multies you're talking about? Am I blind? :huh:

Voted For: DjPlAiMaKa

lol a one sided battle in my eyes... imma break it down now...

Dio Deus...

you say 50 sucks just like young buck,
gangsta, you probably better? no way you ain't no doubt
^^ ok wack opener... didn't rhyme and no punch 1/10
why don't you see you have to look out and watch yo mouth
and why would you be proud
and again no punch... 1/10
that you got a cheap-ass selling-bad gamecube
what you suck my deep cash havin man hate you
^^ eh?? i dont get it 2/10
cause you talkin bout it's bad to have cash
just because we work harder then your dad's ass
^^ nope. you really need to elevate 1/10
I flow even better than the tidal wave at the indian ocean
but you probably won't understand cause your brains work at slowmotion
^^ better... good vocab there... 5/10
I punch you so hard in your stomach you finally learn how to spit
and one day you gon' thank me for what I did
^^ mope the last line ruined it... 2/10

ryt you really need to elevate alot.... try looking at the tutorials in the help forums...

DjPlAiMaKa...

I tear u up to "pieces and bits"/
Word on the street is u faka than "silicone tits"/
lol alright punch but couldav been better 4/10
U look like a cyclone hit u with "lyrical shit" D/
It looks like ur meant to be losing to me, on RV/
not feeling this one at all... 2/10
U lyrically declined, verbally disabled/
So I labeled u retarted, "special ed", only place u could be stable/
lol alryt punch a bit of wordplay 5/10
Ur like a laxative, u just "burst out shit"/
U "drop in decrease", like a "reverse stock split"/
nice punch... 7/10
Dio Deus u say u tha bomb?/
I'll diffuse u twice, before u can even say that im wrong/
nahhh not feeling it... bad closure... 3/10

overall i think this was a one sided battle... both ya'll need to elevate though...

no you can see i have taken my time to vote on your battle PROPERLY can you please do the same with my battle please...

links are in the sig... no hate.
Ima a Hitman Solja, u cant fuck wit this//
U cant even cum yet, u just "hold back pis"/

Voted For: DjPlAiMaKa

DjPlAiMaKa u took da battle

I tear u up to "pieces and bits"/
Word on the street is u faka than "silicone tits"/

u killed em wit da first line

Dio Dues git out of frontlinez ya garbage

you say 50 sucks just like young buck,
gangsta, you probably better? no way you ain't no doubt
DATS FUCKIN GARBAGE>>> log out and stay out

aight uppin fo mo votes..............................

Are you stupid or what? It's

you say 50 "sucks" just like young "buck" (you get it? suck rhyms with buck?)

gangsta you probably better? no you ain't no "doubt"
why don't you "see" you have to "look" out and "watch" yo "mouth"
and why would you be "proud"(understand? 3 lines who rhyme)

.........................etc

Okay more votes please (And vote for me! :cussing: ) :D

Voted For: DjPlAiMaKa

both of you need to work on dropping some harder hitting lines. a few of them had potential, but you failed to capitolize on the set-ups.

dio...work on your structure and flow....as well as fine tune your punches. try to use some personals next time too. that always seems to secure the battle win...*thumbs up*

djp...some of your lines were played, but you seemed to know what you were doing here. next time...make sure you attack with full force...it seems as though you didnt really attempt to own this cat.

good job fellas.....continue to elevate and do you. handle yours.

oner...

...the super...c.s.