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Macca 01-10-05 08:18 PM

ScarfaceXXL Diss. ft Parallel
 
Legend
This is a different ball game nigka and you should bounce right off the court
Your supposed to be dead its no wonder why ya dad didn’t pay child support
You’re still alive I guess ur mom was so hooked on my dick she forgot to abort
No musical talent is wif you even playing the guitar is ya very last resort…
I mean ya fake posing ass wouldn’t know real talent if it kissed you in the face
You’re a mutha fucking foreigner and I don’t feel digust for you cuz of ya race
You hate you fake and made a big mistake and I can’t relate when you call me fake
Face it nigka your B4L bullshit beats are too basic, getting pussy on face-pic
You’re too small to notice little kid and you get kicked out on the fucking streets
Now see I didn’t even have to endeavor to beat you I just did being discreet


Parallel
1, 2, 3 & to the 4 parallels bringin the hell to your door
Fuck scareface he needs help with his raps & alot more
He needs to drop off the frontin at least do it properly
Ill be playing him like another board game of monopoly
Stop thinkin your dope boy, get off are muhfuckin dicks
Like shit this cat loves watching them 1927 porn flicks
I hope you don't say men, thats wack shit, obviously
Next time it happens I gurantee you'll end up in surgery
& if theres a problem we'll come to your muthafuckin house
You'll know what we'll do, we'll do it as quite as a mouse


Skank and who ever wants to join in give me a 10 line verse and we'll add you.

Macca 01-10-05 08:29 PM

Here is a link intensify.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171473
Peace.

Macca 01-10-05 09:08 PM

You stupid bitches view this shit.

D3r@ng3d 01-10-05 09:52 PM

i viewed
eyyyyyyyy

Affinity 01-10-05 10:49 PM

straight bitched...and i didnt try at all i jsut went with the flow to still cruisin eazy e and game word....but yo legend i fucked up when i sent you my verse you know this line:
I hope you don't say men, thats wake shit, obviously
^^change the WAKE to wack...thanks lol...
o and take my verse off bold that shtis gay bold yuck...

Flamin Barz 01-10-05 11:36 PM

this was a good collab - i was feelin both verses - both had nice flow and nice punches - very iteresting topic too - 10/10

Parallel 01-11-05 05:56 PM

it wasent a topic it was a diss....newbies:nono:

uppin

Macca 01-11-05 05:59 PM

weerd keep ya ass out if you don't know what you readin. Ho's.

Macca 01-11-05 06:49 PM

Uppyn this shit.

Parallel 01-11-05 11:55 PM

blah blah blah blah blah..

Macca 01-12-05 09:00 AM

God Dammit is he that wack that no one wants to view shit even related to his name. I pity you ScarfaceXXL.

Os1ris 01-12-05 10:18 AM

Actually for you guys to be the "legends" on this board for a diss I hope that was a joke from legend's "You?re still alive I guess ur mom was so hooked on my dick she forgot to abort" played line and talking about himself with dude's mom that sounds a little elementary to me, but maybe im of higher lyrical content, then there's parallel's verse I dont know if it was just me but your verse sounded like something j-kwon would write you guys are going to call this hate feedback but i call it a reality check aint no one else puttin feedback in hee cause they dont want to relay the truthi just said i give it a 6.1/10 good day fellas

Macca 01-12-05 10:31 AM

Higher lyrical content you wack and your record proves it. Wanna get owned then set up a battle. I'm in the mood you bitch. G'Day Fella.

Os1ris 01-12-05 02:15 PM

Haha settle down there guy obviously you can't take any constructive criticism ..(if you know what that is....?), but anyways i dont have any more credits so I mean if your willing to grow some balls and use yours to lose to me by all means..... peace

Macca 01-12-05 05:57 PM

I can't lose to you. Your too wack.

Os1ris 01-12-05 06:08 PM

Well if thats the truth set it up than ill make a mockery of you and of rv for thinkin your good

Macca 01-12-05 06:59 PM

iight you set it up.

Os1ris 01-12-05 07:00 PM

didnt you just read that i dont have any more credits the last time i checked i can set anythingup so you go ahead

Macca 01-12-05 07:05 PM

I don't got credits. When you get the credits then you can talk shit.

Os1ris 01-12-05 07:45 PM

alright thee guy igot it set up lets go ha ha ha ....

Parallel 01-12-05 07:46 PM

wtf is osris or how ever you spell the gay name...wtf is he talking about....legends i aint no legend....wtf....it might say legendary in my user thing but shit its jsut cuz ive been here for awhile...lmao

and osisris i would merk you so such your mouth...but i quit text its all topicals now but uppin

-Parallel

Macca 01-13-05 04:49 PM

Uppyn this open mic ya'll.

Macca 01-13-05 05:31 PM

Uppyn this dammit.

Macca 01-14-05 02:27 AM

upp'n you stupid faggots.

Ysdat 01-14-05 05:19 AM

This is a different ball game nigka and you should bounce right off the court
Your supposed to be dead its no wonder why ya dad didn’t pay child support
^^
I was tryna figure were you used that line, I like it. as an opener it is strong,brought my attention up, I didnt read ti then be like.......blah this is gonna be boring.

You’re still alive I guess ur mom was so hooked on my dick she forgot to abort
No musical talent is wif you even playing the guitar is ya very last resort…
^^
not a strong diss on the grounds of , the guiter is dope man. lol.
but yeh this isnt the best bar.

I mean ya fake posing ass wouldn’t know real talent if it kissed you in the face
You’re a mutha fucking foreigner and I don’t feel digust for you cuz of ya race
^^
This is still flowing well, but once again this sint realy a strong diss,using a similie would of gone well here.

You hate you fake and made a big mistake and I can’t relate when you call me fake
Face it nigka your B4L bullshit beats are too basic, getting pussy on face-pic
^^
medium diss, the rhyme scheme change's int his bar,so it kinda messes the flow, but not much. rhyme's are ok,could of been alot stronger.

You’re too small to notice little kid and you get kicked out on the fucking streets
Now see I didn’t even have to endeavor to beat you I just did being discreet
^^
ok closure, but again you could of come alot stronger.


try using metaphor's adn simlie's to get the reader thinking. A good peice is when some1 read's a punch or a diss and may have to stop, put two and two together then be like, ohhhhh. feel me?

also bring your technicallity up in your rhyme's.

flow is good, no stretched bar's, just one change of rhyme scheme were I pointed out.


parrelel im not gonna break your verse down, only done legend's cause he asked me.

But your's is dope aswell. keep dropping.

who the fuck is scarfacexxl anyway?

Macca 01-14-05 06:01 PM

I forgot. Some gay fuck messing around wif himself on the internet. lol. Thanx for the feed fam.

Parallel 01-14-05 06:36 PM

yea lol thanks fi del but yea scareface hes kinda a chince lmao

Die Hard 01-14-05 07:15 PM

Scarface XXL is the coolest guy you'll ever meet...
Oh man... I'm so scared right now.. Some dude dissed me on the internet, you made me soil myself...
You guys are a couple of jokes.. Parallel, I don't even know you, so why are you even talking about me... And second of all Legend, the only reason you mad at me is because I exposed the truth about you and your fake girlfriend... Hmm, it seems you guys have little time on your hands so you'll right some gay lines about me? The only reason you don't like me, Is because you want to be just like me.
Losers these days...
By the way...
You guys are the ones giving rap a bad name, reason I stopped listening to it...
Peace out gentlemen.

Die Hard 01-14-05 07:20 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Legend
Legend
This is a different ball game nigka and you should bounce right off the court
Your supposed to be dead its no wonder why ya dad didn’t pay child support
You’re still alive I guess ur mom was so hooked on my dick she forgot to abort
No musical talent is wif you even playing the guitar is ya very last resort…
I mean ya fake posing ass wouldn’t know real talent if it kissed you in the face
You’re a mutha fucking foreigner and I don’t feel digust for you cuz of ya race
You hate you fake and made a big mistake and I can’t relate when you call me fake
Face it nigka your B4L bullshit beats are too basic, getting pussy on face-pic
You’re too small to notice little kid and you get kicked out on the fucking streets
Now see I didn’t even have to endeavor to beat you I just did being discreet


Parallel
1, 2, 3 & to the 4 parallels bringin the hell to your door
Fuck scareface he needs help with his raps & alot more
He needs to drop off the frontin at least do it properly
Ill be playing him like another board game of monopoly
Stop thinkin your dope boy, get off are muhfuckin dicks
Like shit this cat loves watching them 1927 porn flicks
I hope you don't say men, thats wack shit, obviously
Next time it happens I gurantee you'll end up in surgery
& if theres a problem we'll come to your muthafuckin house
You'll know what we'll do, we'll do it as quite as a mouse


Skank and who ever wants to join in give me a 10 line verse and we'll add you.


K first of all lemme get started.. My guitar skills are way better then your rap skills definately.. And my beats are way cooler than yours will every be, you still wont show them to me? why, because they suck..
Calling me a foreigner??? First of all, weak punch, second of all, isn't that a racist remark??
Hmm?
Last of all, Parallel, I have never seen you in my life.. so stop talking about me like you do..
Idiots these days

Macca 01-14-05 07:21 PM

Hasn't some one woned you when they turned that line around you fucking herb. Gays these dayz. You fuckin cunt mouth son of a bitch. Get the dick out ya mouf and battle me. I owned you once and I'm NOT afraid nor ashamed to do it again. You never exposed me. I didn't see any one post oh shit he was just exposed. Asshole.
Quit giving me assumptions cuz it makes you an ass more than me. IDIOT.

Macca 01-14-05 07:22 PM

Negro i ain't being racist. If you would stop being gay and read it right it said I don't feel disgust for you cuz if ya race. DUMB BITCH.

Die Hard 01-14-05 07:28 PM

Legend.. I DONT RAP..
I play guitar in a ROCK group!
So go ahead and diss me if you want, i dont care what you posers think...
I'm out.

Macca 01-14-05 07:31 PM

Then get ya gay ass and those gay ass beats out this muh fucking site. Die you bitch. lol

Die Hard 01-14-05 07:33 PM

I was OUT you ignorant joke of a so called rapper. I came back to deal with you idiots, because if you talk about me, I'm not standing for that. I got enough of that where I live alright. I don't need to DEAL with idiots who dont even KNOW me, have never MET me, and have never actually spent time to KNOW me. Alright. So unless you want to blindly say you hate someone you've never met, then go ahead. But face it.. Nobody really cares.

Die Hard 01-14-05 07:34 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Legend
Then get ya gay ass and those gay ass beats out this muh fucking site. Die you bitch. lol

Sorry sir, but it appears that my beats have actually done very well for themselves... They have been in the top 20 beats section on soundclick. And I've gotten many people wanting to purchase/use my beats... So unless you want to show everyone what crap you can create with your "FruityLoops", stop talking about my stuff....

Macca 01-14-05 07:37 PM

Your beats are gay gay gay gay gay gay gay gay but not as gay as ur comebacks. So if you don't give a shit what we say then why do you even reply you amazingly stupid fuck.

Die Hard 01-14-05 07:45 PM

Know what, I don't really care.. So seeing as you are just an idiot feeling the need to make fun of someone that you know NOTHING about... Then I'm done, I'm done with this site...
Half the people on this site are a joke! (Including you Legend, No offense)
Its full of CALI's and Lil' Calis... People like you who think they are cool, but are probably losers in real life.
There's a couple people here that are actually cool, (Nostradamus, Socrates...), but most of all, its wannabe white guys who think that they are, "Straight up Gangstas from tha Hood Yo!"... Sorrowfully, I was somewhat like that in the past, but I realized how stoopid people like that were, and I did not feel that I wanted to be affiliated with ppl like that...
So have a good day Legend!!!
I wish you luck in the future

Macca 01-14-05 07:49 PM

I don't need your luck you fucking herb. Socrates and Nostradamus said themselve you were gay. Leave this site and realize what a failure you are. You were a joke from the start. Now Quit posting in here. Your making it look gay.

Die Hard 01-14-05 08:07 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Legend
Oh man.. I'm so gay, I make Elton John look like a ladies man.I get absolutely no women, and I have no penis!!!!


Enough said


GONE FOREVER

Parallel 01-14-05 08:39 PM

shut of scareface your a wack little fag...stop talking about yourself hoe...i dont care about your guitar cuz there gay...str8 gay....now the qwueer thats amd cuz we dissed him and threw it down like it was an audio hes mad so leave...HERB..

uppin for feed


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