Fuel For a Freestyle (Da Vinci / Anxiety)
 

Anxiety and Da Vinci freekey'n off the top,

Ajax is black text
Da Vinch is blue


I've admitted that I’m whack at battles, but its true...
That no matter how whack i am, i'm better than you...
Back to show you what i got, im the one that you dread...
You keep cuttin corners, i guess thats why u lost ya edge.

That’s why I pledge, you’ll never get the upper hand,
Claim ya raps is tight… I see ya pages wrapped in saran,
Damn, Ajax and Vinch keep it fly like peter pan,
Leave'n RV entranced with keys come'n off these hands.

And i know, you think that im not a humble guy...
But fuck taken another piece of the humble pie...
Stumble by... But still somehow on top of ya game...
Ready to kill when people start droppin ya name,

Cause I’m take’n aim, fuck keep’n shit sane, my wit’s is sick
In regards with ya existence, ain’t noboday give 2 shits!
It’s Ajax and Vinch, the 6 speed and the grinch
Make MF’s famous like they drink’n Hennesy Fifths

The Council's newest member, back as a smartass...
The hardass, who's basically running a topical art class...
Pay attention, it's in session, bell just rung, ya late...
So now sit back and relax as me and Vinch run ya fate...

N’ wipe the smirk off ya face, you see no pearly gates,
Wanna run wit’s with Vinch? Please, just vacate and save face.
We do collab’s like DAMN……..while we run up scores,
Lyrics tight like clams, ‘n’ verses packed with multi’s ‘n’ mettaphores

Capable of the impossible, and reachin it soon...
Writing vigorously away till it's 90 degrees in tha room...
Respectin the cats, that dont have me checkin their stats...
Not the one next in the pack, the one addressin tha facts...

Key’s proceed make’n contacts to contracts
Believe I bomb first, ‘n’ worse without hot wax
Yea, time-2-time you got it on lock, but we talk’n BOUT CAPS

Stopin anx? Try it bitch and you'll drop in ranks...
Caught red handed like you tryna rob a bank...
Not worth the effort... Not worth the pressure...
In skill you dont measure. Stopping anx??? Never.

So stay at home and up under the covers
Stay off the chrome (mic), stay shook with ya stutters
Only thing yall bust, is ya boyfriends rubbers
I heaven sent, text leaves impediments
Ya text? Irrelevant. Ya Best? Use common sense

And this ish, was jist a free key,
2 all yall that want to beef stay off these
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u must drop a link with PROPER FEED-BACK with-in 24 hours or this will be closed....
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871

nice read here guys kept it simple it flowed really well vinch aint seen you drop ina while man anyways nice shit 8/10 drop some feed on my latest open mic be apreciated...=1=

He never dropped before:thumbup:

nah im talkin havent seen him battle or anything lol........

Yea little rusty with that shit, but we'll see how these peeps like it.

My rhyme operation could stop a nation but you write
Slop creations, your whack crops are not vegetation no height
Just a complex mess who tries to express himself you not tight
Clear and ugly why appear publicly with that crap you call rap?

Crap we call rap? Homie fall back...
Read 6 of your OM's, and dog, there all crap...

this was a fine drop for a quick keystyle fellas, nice work. you guys hit the mark here. you both bounced off of one another smoothly and came with some tight concepts. you kept things simple here....but in this case, i think that helped keep the drop refreshing. once again....y'all handled yours.

holla at ya boy sometime vinch...father-crhyme-209@sbcglobal.net

one love....our culture...


...the supervillain...

(life)
On My Knees In Cuffs ,prayin Ta God For It To Be Over , Ive Had Enought
When Its My Time To Go Im A Let Em' Know That Life Can Be Ruff/
Its Like Im Given It Up, Convicted Of A Crime For Screwin Things Up....
Its Like Monkey See Monkey Do Thanks Ta 50cent I Believe It To
Supportin Tha Rappers , An Keepin It Real In Tha Streets....
What Is It Were All After , Lyrics An Beats
Hear On Earth Is Part If Heaven But How Much Closer Is Hell/
My Younger Brother Dieing At Twentie Seven In A Five By Seven Cell,...
He Told Me Tha Devil Made Him Do It/ One Day We All Die An Get Old Wit Our Soul To Sell..........
Life We All Get Put Through It

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IM LOOKIN FOR FEED BACK ON THIS LITTLE PIECE
SO I CAN CONTINUE // ALSO HAD AN IDEA TA SET OFF A REAL FREESTYLE WERE ALL RAPPERZ MEET UP IN 1 SPOT GET SOME PRODUCERS THERE
JUST A THOUGHT ITS SOMTHIN ILL PUT TOGETHER WITH ENOUGHT RAPPER WIT GUTS INSTEAD OF SOME OF YA SITTIN THERE WRITTEN AWAY SCRATCHIN HIS NUTS FEED BACK CB83 :thefinger

lol, why are the feed's on this open mic so wak.(xcept supervillian)

convicted,create a new thread to post your own open mic.

maddrapper, shut the fuck up!!

anyway....

I seen this before you posted it, I like it, you can tell it's free flowing key and it's still nice. each other's bar's connect thru out it...with one exception.

somwe funny ass line's....

ajax and vinch keep it fly like peter pan....


good drop for a ketystyle cypher.
-8 out of 10...hahah

I.E... Here ya go.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171425

And why yall saying it's dope for a keystyle??? I mean, it was a keystyle, but it's still doper than 95% of any OM's... But thanks for the feed..

Nice. Da Vinci which one are you. Don't matter this was dope. I like the flow and I felt the punches. lol. I don't think Da Vinci is rusty at battling. lol. Uhm well dope drop and I wanna see more to elevate off. :D.
RTF
10/10

LOL...Thanks to all those who check it out,

Yea Fidel, I thought you'd like that peter pan shit....lol

dis shit was off the fuckin hook ya both riped the shit up good flow on boht sides rhymes and metas were tight...

man this was some funny shit, i love keystyle in this style, i think you both came pretty tight, fuck vinc, ours was sick too, word to anxiety you have improved more than anyone in this sites history. Vinc you've always been tight, this was a good piece of writting i enjoyed it.

thanks JP, I read your OM as well