lil avenger vs Adrenaline
 

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10- 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
etc...etc..etc..

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-14-05 at 10:54 AM

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Adrenaline has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-11-05 11:54 AM.

nigga when u mess wit me i'll make u history
i'll put u underneath skydome like a brisked up key//
u cant understand the demeanor i bring to the table
that's why u gettin smacked like cain when he killed aible//
I got mad flowz, the punches is mad sick
u couldn't come harder if u were a brick//
u sound like slick rick u rhymes are so old school
this kid came here actin gangsta cuz he thought it was cool//
I will destroy u motherfucker am evil
im like a devil's night wreckin an innocent vehicle//
so u best warn all ur people
this kid name adrenaline will destroy you
u came wit no battle record? then I'll toy with you//
i'll use u like tonka trucks and crash u into walls
u have the foul scent of piss and u livin in ya stall//
my wrecklessness is so smitten I gotta brush of my shoulders
with skills like this u should destroy my rap folder//
u aint never been and never will be,the best in ur league
even though u aint got one, pssh dat aint hard to see//

Lil Avenger has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-11-05 01:10 PM.

hey nigga no matta wut you say yo shit aint gonna faze me and no matter wut you do yo bitch azz cant amaze me you call urself adrenaline but the only way you get a rush is when you fuckin homos in the azz and you try to keep it on the hush and every time i mention it you get calls from homo niggas sayin they want they want a gay convention and all im sayin is put the mic away and walk away from this game cause its amazing what a gay azz nigga like you will do fo 10 minutes of fame


FUCK U BITCH

hey nigga no matta wut you say yo shit aint gonna faze me and no matter wut you do yo bitch azz cant amaze me you call urself adrenaline but the only way you get a rush is when you fuckin homos in the azz and you try to keep it on the hush and every time i mention it you get calls from homo niggas sayin they want they want a gay convention oh yea nigga i forgot 2 mention put the mic away and walk away from this game cause its amazing what a gay azz nigga like you will do fo 10 minutes of fame


FUCK U BITCH

Voted For: Adrenaline

Adren wins this battle, he had the better verse. His punches were hitten harder and he rhymed better.

Lil - set your lines up better. so they are easier to read. and work on the flow abit and formin a harder punch.

keep votin peepl...

and avenger, I dont think ur lines met the expectations...but who cares//
yo I thought u were better than that...come harder next time!!

Voted For: Lil Avenger

lil avenger u had betta punchlinez
ya sturtcure garbage

adrenaline u flowed but didn't really say shit

both ya keep rappin an elevate

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^^ what's this guy sayin I wasn't really sayin shit? :laugh2:

anyways... keep votin

Voted For: Adrenaline

lil avenga a damn cheater.........................................

Voted For: Adrenaline

ehhh neither really came that hard, voted for adrenaline though, he had some structure and made attempts at punches, avenger just kinda sounded like he was ramblin some random shit, both uh you should elevate your punches, mutlis, and vocab but still adren took it

get those votes in dis... :cussing:

Voted For: Adrenaline

Adrenaline was the winner of this one because lil avenger didn't really do anything but make gay jokes and the gay jokes were pretty garbage. i thought he was gonna really do something with "the only time you get a rush" but it looks like he was just looking for something to rhyme with it. i didn't see no structure really and he was rappin basic to me. Adrenaline wasn't great but he was better than lil avenger and some of his punches didn't relate either unless i'm missing something on that devil's night bar in which he proly should've used quotations. anyway adrenaline wins this

oh by the way vote on some of my battles too

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=169162 me vs. youngsoulja

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171308 me vs. nightmare

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=168874 me vs. magical

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170520 me vs. Tyler

Voted For: Adrenaline

Adrenaline gets my vote, cause he had punches, had multies and his lines didn't hurt my eyes to read, while lil avenger kept talkin' bout gay parties from adrenaline. Well, at least it was going about something...................... ,by the way can you vote on my battles too? me vs lil avenger http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=171615