Dio Deus vs Lil Avenger
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-14-05 at 02:12 PM

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Lil Avenger has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-11-05 02:13 PM.

yo ur a fagot ass nigga just tryin to make a livin if u wanna fuck wit me then i know you must be trippin
i got a glock at my waist and a bullet proof vest ready to put holes up in you if you really wanna test just how dangerous i can be so now you gonna see a part of me that niggas cant really go and trust got yo bitch ass runnin duckin lookin for some cover while im hangin out that hummer wit that ak in my hand playin tugawar wit yo life while you jumpin under vans go ahead and bust back nigga if you think you can now my ak runnin low and i got 1 shot left sent the bullet flyin and missed you now i remember you owe me money and thats another issue now im pullin out the glock and fire a couple shots im the reason yo ass gonna stop rappin like pac see your punk ass hit the dirt and blood drippin from your shirt now you see wut happenss when u flirtin wit disaster and if your gurl turn me in best belive that ima blast her ill roll up 2 ur hood in that bullet proof hummer roll up 2 your house and spray your punk azz through your window now your wife a widow got that bitch wearin black and niggas best believe that she'll be hoppin on mi nutsack and ima tell you one more time that if you wanna live to see next summer dont you ever run up on me and my bullet proof hummer

Dio Deus has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-11-05 02:44 PM.

yo why did you wanna battle me I don't "understand"
I will still batlle you but normally I don't battle "wannabe fans"
I never said anything "to you", I didn't even "knew you"
You gave me a personal message that it's all set up, "screw you"
Why would I give a fuck bout battlin you give me one "reason"
I can beat you by cuffin' and own you by simply "sneezin'"
When I "start" my rap, yours "ends" and you're completely "finished"
I could say you did a good battle, but I'm sorry you "didn't"
What in the world made you think you could battle me you "deaf?"
when things don't go "right" there's only one option "left"
and that's quitin' this "battle" my words are harder than "metal"
You're words won't even hit me, they never should've been "made"
just like you only to bad that now it's too "late"

One thing, I am 13 so why would I already be married?

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Voted For: Dio Deus

I didn't see nothing special in these verses but dio deus takes this one cause he actually had punches. his verse actually had structure. Lil avenger didn't do more than talk about that bullet proof hummer that we all believe he has..... anyway lil avenger had multis which was pretty good but that alone can't win a battle so up your game lil avenger. but had this been topical about your bullet proof hummer and/or story time for lil gangstas than lil avenger proly would've taken this one but, it isn't and so my vote is for deus. Vote on some of my battles

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=169162 me vs. young soulja

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=171308 me vs. nightmare

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=168874 me vs. magical

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Voted For: Dio Deus

dio took this easy,

other cats didnt rhyme for one, structure was aweful and there were no decent punches

dio u had quite a nice verse dawg, good structure and flow n punches were o.k too

v/dio

can ya return the fav wiv honest vote on this battle...thx
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Voted For: Dio Deus

Opener - Dio, Avengers first 2 lines seemed to never end.
Closer - Dio, Avengers last 2 lines '' '' ''
Punches - Dio, Avenger basically freestyled about bullet proof hummers and killing Dio.
Personals - Dio, he used many - Avenger used none.
Metas - Neither, Dio almost had 1 or 2 whereas Avenger was nowhere close.
Multies - Neither, didnt see any in either verses
Structure - Dio, his was clean-Avengers made no sence.
Vocab - Neither, both were very weak.
Creativity - Neither, Both were basic.

Dio Deus took this one quite easily. If I were to give Avenger areas to elevate, no offense but id be here all night. All I can say to both of yall is go vote on other ppls battles and read and go overt their verses carefully cause you can learn from others...just dont bite. props to both...

Dio, be true to your ig and return the favour dawg...and please explain yourself so it doesnt get DQ'ed... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=172243

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Voted For: Dio Deus

good peace DIO I liked this bat a little you came harder on this one you're opener-closure can work on a lil work but it was good. ur vocab and multis and imagry was good but try expanding on ur vocab and ur personels where better.
no hate just keep elevating and hit up on my links peace.

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Voted For: Dio Deus

Dio took this one...
punches were harder, the flow was good
structure was aight, and the vocab was nice
overall u had a good drop though

Lil A...elevate more...