MaRVJay1009 vs TheWackestMC
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 01-14-05 at 04:06 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

yo why u make da time limit like 3 days??...well check in fam

TheWackestMC has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-11-05 10:33 PM.

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-12-05 05:11 AM.

look.....

its a easy win dis lame should just 4-fit,i aint gonna force shit.
but all u do is "pop-shit" like u took ya "gun & aimed at a toilet"
whut u know bout breakin da law bitch,you taken a lose quick
u tried out 4 enternal illness i saw da roster & ya name wasn't on it*
i know u panacin dogg,marvjay u wanna c da man get a lose..
my crew fukked ya girl her cunt like ya "avatar" we all "ran up dem walls"**
u aint seein marv datz it!,cuzz im speakin hard facts dick!.....
dude is really THEWaCKESTMC rv he's not bein sarcastic......
i live it 4real,when im grippin da steel i'll put a clipp in ya grill
why would i spit unlimted lines vs a nigga who got limited skill
me? ofcourse-sick...n you? a soft-bitch,u make me nauses....
and all ya punchlines like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "force-it"
u suck why be madd cuzz ppl on rv dont read your shit......
u from "MARYLAND" so whut im from ny & i "B-MORE" sick***
ya bars i read em n stop but tryin bein a cop join da force.....
i'll have da put ya "fingers in a church" 4 u da get ay "point-a-cross"
u dont wanna war fam i just bought a nice clean dez eagle
....................i'll run in ya crib murda ya family
cops a be sayin whut da "kid from da 6th sense said" i SEE
DEaD PPL
take ya 3 days da pre write go jot ryhmes,it wont top mine
ya verses r like "miss cleo" cuzz u dont have "no -hott-lines"..

nuff said

explainations.....

*he tried out 4 enternal illness & intesify effect showed me da roster his name wasn't on it...

**u know how girls pussy has walls...and look at his avatar unda his name u'll get it

***he's from maryland which is where baltimore is at they call it b-more..so i meant i "be more" sicka than u

its that wack nigga back again

lets get into it

im hungry for MC's, off this bout i'll b feedin
treat ya like Artest, ya punches get u kicked out for the season
dog its no doubt you'll be screamin
or you would b if ya didnt have a damn mouth full of semen
son, i'll make ya blood bubble up like ya pourin soda
and ya girl give me brain, as if she an organ donor
u should cut to the chase, u got nuts in ya face
from hangin wit those male sluts that he chase
this pansy, is just a snitch to the cops in general
only time dude go BAM! is when h'es watchin Emeril
nigga this ya final days, cuz my primal rage
make me throw punches that detach ya spinal cage
u could try to stay,.. but u should fly away
cuz if u dont ya career is gon die today
any notion that i hear jay's dope is absurd
cuz from the looks of yo shit, i really dont concur
ima choke this bird, this Jay gon b Blue when he lose
nigga couldnt find a win wit Sherlock and too many clues!...1

*Emeril is a cooking show where the cook goes BAM all the time

good battle MJ lets get some votes in this joint

good battle MJ lets get some votes in this joint
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

MaRVJay1009 had this. I liked his first 4 lines. Reall dope.
its a easy win dis lame should just 4-fit,i aint gonna force shit.
but all u do is "pop-shit" like u took ya "gun & aimed at a toilet"
whut u know bout breakin da law bitch,you taken a lose quick
u tried out 4 enternal illness i saw da roster & ya name wasn't on it*
Nice ^^^
Your flow was off and structure was weak. Work on that you will always get props like me. lol. If i had to rate your verse I would rate it 8/10
You didn't come that hard but you were still flowing better.

TWMC
you were simple. Try not to say
im hungry for MC's, off this bout i'll b feedin
treat ya like Artest, ya punches get u kicked out for the season
dog its no doubt you'll be screamin
or you would b if ya didnt have a damn mouth full of semen
That was a weak opener and your closer was worst. You don't really got a dope style of rhyming and hitting properly with punches. But you'll elevate. lol.
if i was to rate your verse i would rate it 4/10
So I guess MaRVJay1009 gets this.
:D
RTV in my muh fucking sig.

goodlookin fam uppin 4 more votes ppl

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Ok Battle 2 Much Readin Ta Do....
Openor=Marv,Otha Kids Wass Self Gloryfin
Strukture-Twmc,Marv Had Stretched Lines
Punches=Marv Had Stronger Punches
Personals=Marv And He Explained His Personals
Vokab=Tie Both Had Some Vokab
Closer=Marv,Good Personals Punch And Closer

Marv Took This Cus He Came Harder Wasn't Bein Self Glorified Like Twmc Wass Tha 1st Line Or So..Marv Also Had Consictency Through Out His Entire Verse.Onli Thing His Strukture Wass Off In Some Places Keep Ya Strukture Ta Getha Dont Stretch Ya Lines...............

uppin 4 some more votes

good battle MJ lets get some votes in this joint
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

lol!!! this was a one sided battle from the gecko damn you are the wackesmc , HAHAHAHAH

Marv
Damn Cuz you ripped it nice , shyt you won this battle Easily , You've really elevated from the last time i saw you in HHG , Nice punchlines , good personals they were all hitting hard and making there mark , nice shyt , Structure was Alittle off but it could be worked on but other then that nice drop man you won this one easily

Wackest
Damn should io even waste my time breaking this down
Pretty plain and simple you really need to elevate alot , your punchlines werent hitten there mark , you have to learn how to even out your structure, and learn how to make personals , other then that elevate and i think you'll be fine

overall vote goes to - Marvjayt

^ NUFF Said

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uppin 4 more votes ya'll

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uppin dis shit vote ppl

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uppin 4 some fukkin votes

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

well Here Me Go

MJ1009
you Came The hardest which is very clear to see here and um .......Personals were aii No Biggy though Punchlines had Some good Connection And You Multi's werent a Big but they still were Present so Ill give you a 7/10

THewackest
aii Mayne Im Not Gonna say You didnt Do Good Ima Jus Say You didnt do go enough so Bcuz Ya Verse was aii and Everything Did well It jus wasnt rocking in this battle so .....That jus How I feel Mayne
5/10

PEace

uppin lets get dis shit closed ppl

This was feedback posted for TheWackestMC
 

checkin dem pollz...i dont feel like voting

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Thewackestmc: you are wac. you're verse was played and wack as fuck ya mean. Punches none wat so ever. you had no personals and ya wack talent seriously man. you got merked it was basically one side elevate GET BETTER!

marv: ok one side I say again u had some nice punches and some good punches. flow was good and just the whole verse was good. openor good and I liked ya closer it was just betta no need to explain but why you won well u had hard hittin punches and personals and overall better

so I vote for....Marv