MaRVJay1009 vs Lethal Lunatic
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

fuck it I got enuff time to murk you

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 01-11-05 at 08:05 PM

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yo r u retatded fam??? i dont even got 500 post why u decline da battle i set up n go make another 1....but im gonna set up another on elevated and make it a pink slip battle

Lethal Lunatic has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-11-05 07:36 PM.

nah accept it no man i already did............................

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-11-05 07:50 PM.

Adventurous games, bitch is a peasant and I’m the boss
Hip Hop played a Game wit dick-rides and he still lost *
You once met a kid called chronic and got smoked **
Now you met me which in fact who you provoked
I’m an addict to wins, like white castle craves my hunger
You winning is thin, like me getting a lost wen I wonder
Yea I’m a big guy, people make jokes but it’s all for fun
Well not really but you’re worse, you’re slim to none
You’re 20 wit no life, I guess life isn’t heaven
Cuz he been on since the bible been invented
1009 is the times he lost when he held the mic
He thinks he can get better if he held the wires tight

*: He was and still is on hiphopgame.com and has mad d/r’s
**: He got murked by a guy called chronic in a pink slip battle but neva left

look......

y would i use my hands da rite,LL rv but if fam is nice....
he wont STEAL BARZ cuzz on HHG you got BaNNED 4 LiFE*
u dont want it with jay stupid dat heavy shotti a bend ya quer
u soft "weather is cuba's" da only "cuban-storm" anybody a eva fear
dis nigga aint tuff rv dont listen 2 him dis guy's a gay crip...
ya crew wack even "sick jamaicans" say ya "roster aint sick"
now ya bitch-all-mine...ya not hard n you spit-soft-ryhmes...
you like "snoop on a tight wrote rope" u only a "crip-online"....
wish dis lame cat get betta,u lyin sayin ya gang blast berretaz
only time u had "chemistry w/ a girl" ya had da "same class 2 getha"
wait wasn't u da fag beggin legacy like yo put me on a team?
yup!.u like "lesbian porno's" just another "pussy on da screen"

nuff said

first bar-he was banned on dis other site 4 bittin*
second bar-his otehr name was cuban-storm u'll get it
third bar-u know how jamaicans r roster's n a crew has a roster

and datz it...

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Pretty Ok Battle,But Lethal Ya Gonna Get Banned Fa Spamming........
Openor=Marv,He Had Multis Good Punch And Personal
Strukture=Tie,Both Easy Ta Read
Punches=Marv,His Got Ta Tha Point And Hit Hard
Personals=Tie,Both Had Some Ok Punches
Vokab=None Elivate Ya Vokab
Metaz=None,Have Some Metaz Yall
Closer=Marv,Good Punch Nice Shit Cus

Overall Marv Took This With His Harder Punches Better Personals And Wasn't Talkin About Him Self Like Lethal Did

/V Marvjay1009..........................

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This was feedback posted for Lethal Lunatic
 

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Lmao, Another Onesided battle that marv has won ,

Marv
Damn CUz you merked this "lethal Lunatic" HAHAH , Damn you even put me in your verse :thumbsup: LOL , you had some nice personals they were all hitten hard an making there mark , nice punchlines they were really merking lethal lunatic , alot , and nice Structure , And ps : Lethal Lunatic's a fake crip , nucca aint even a crip hahahahaha , Nice personal Marv , your 100000000% right
dis nigga aint tuff rv dont listen 2 him dis guy's a gay crip...
ya crew wack even "sick jamaicans" say ya "roster aint sick"
^ werd , nuff said marv took this one easily

Lethal Lunatic
You need to elevate , your wack , you had some nice personals like from the HHG thingy, but other then that they were all most fillers , Punchlines were weak some were hitten there mark but others were just Hallen off , and not even hittne marv , your structure was good i gotta give you that but other then your structure your verse sucked , nuff said

Overall vote - MarvJay
Easily Wunz Cuz

This was feedback posted for Lethal Lunatic
 

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

marv took this one to me. he had better personals, and to me his punches landed harder. his structure was wayy better, considering that his bars were complete. LL, yo bars seemed a lil incomplete. yo punches landed a lil, but i think u didnt come hard enough for this battle. yo structure was bad, and i wasnt feelin it. i just think Marv came out stronger on this one...no hate...plz return tha favor on battles in sig.....

uppin 4 some more votes lets get dis shit closed ppl

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

MaRVJay1009: Ya verse was damn good brother! The open was good. Hit him hard with a personal, used the metaphor, bit of a multi use. Referred to the same site as he used against you i gather but your opener was better. Basically as i havent seen the site you can really say watever you want about his activities oever there and i would be none the wiser. Your close was quite good, sounds like a personal to me, quite a good punch but his closer sucked so you came off a lot better. Your verse as a whole was packed with good punches and some nice metaphors. The verse was far more advanced over the lunatic's in my opinion and there was some real heat between yous from that other site that made this an enjoyable battle.

Lethal Lunatic: I liked ya opener a lot. A good personal punch which hit hard. I do think however his was slightly better so you lost out there. I wasnt a fan of your closer at all bro. It wasnt shit, it was just basic and his was better than basic so therefore yours looked worse. Overall a good verse with good punches, a good flow and structure. It had some personals in it and it as definately heated. I dont think there was any love lost between the two of you in this battle.

Good verses none-the-less

vote: marvejay

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

ok...my breakdown.......

Personals- Marjay killed him with this catagory...Lethal had a few ok personals....but marvs personals were nicely worded and hit harder

Punches- Marvs hit was harder and were more complex

Complexity- Marv

Structure-Both had decent structure

Wordplay- Marv...even thought neither one had much



overall this was a one sided battle....marv took it with personals and punches......