FReestyle.....
 

ppl want marvjay lose im sick of dez dudes plottin.....
if they bars is so sickly why niggaz be crew hopin.....
ya'll take my marvs name n password but lyrically u not him......
u'll be sicka than dis cat see jay is just betta,peeps hatin da fella
cuzz i speak da truth plus im da most creative and clever.....
oh yeah & my crew is gutta...so be calm dont lose it brotha
my lines 2 sick da bite shit they even made "ruban-studar(d)"
my bars' r even felt by a 80 old bastard..even ya lady go rap it.....
T-WRECKS if u took ya "cd 2 a power plant" u wouldn't b "radio-active"
lol..my flows is sick as fukk,ur name no 1 knows ya spittin suck
he "drop trash" songs....shit u'll have da hold ya "nose 2 pick it up"
while ya fags debatin & crabs is hatin...im in da lab just patient....
u got no flows in da studio they turn ya "beat-off" like "masterbation"
ya punchlines is totally old da me fam try doin poetry.......
im focus b!...type of guns i got only dem iraq soldier's see.....
fukk if u respect me ya mc's textin is all blind..im destined 4 more shyne
u'll neva travel no where ya faggets only gon see "america-online"....

nuff said...just a lil freestyle

oh dam this was dope.. people need to stop sleepin on his pieces... that last bar was just sick.. if that was the first bar i would have stopped reading it... good flow.. multies well youre one of the best at em... good shit

9/10

datz whuts up fam goodlookin...and yo whuts good with dat text mixtape joint

Sick Shit Cant Complain About It,,,,,,,,,,stay Up

wack wack wack...stop flowin...find a notebook and draw a picture of somethin cuz flowin aint you right now cuz...you garbage kid...retire

goodlookin fam....WUN

umm okay how many karate points u want 4 hatin fam???...n chill i will destroy u real easy

u see why i don tlike this site that shit^^^ is pure HATE
i mean that nigga is sick man
he camed to my site and put it down and every body showed him love
i know i did yo u did ya thing man an du betta get in that tourney nigga s
show niggas where u really at MarvJay 4 real...oh yeah and SR$ i want to see u spit sumthin for real

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1891788
^^^^there go ya link

if yall aint know...SR$ is dead fam...~1~

word fam but all da hatin shit is nothin nahmean....and yeah im in dat tourney ima show niggaz whuts up....but goodlookin on da feedback tho..WUN

in otha words he is no more...im takin over...tha hate i threw wasnt real...dis shit is hot as hell kid...8/10...no hate, but i thought i could get banned for it...i didnt so i wrote "annoucement to everybody"...SR$'s last post...he is gone 4eva...~1~

whut??? ya niggaz got da same ip number fam..but im still callin u out 4 a battle

Slipping
 

SLIPPING

Length of rhyme strength is mine duration like Samson devastation //
Cats lack intensity with whack density scripts no sophistication //
Alleviate pressure, create a treasure to keep hope alive //
Deep with the dope jive, turn about is fair play scope and strive //
I’m a thug about to put cats in the dugout I’m above suspicion //
Love the mission, a scrub stand trial in this edition key in my the ignition //
Thug on the verge while my blood surge, pleasing picture be squeezing //
Scripture like economic recovery, Ebonics discovery of street lingo seizing //
Ironic to draw gun like Johnny Ringo, atomic when I sling verse yo //
Crew can’t figure my renewed vigor, glued the gun trigger now holster flow //
Bolster those rap by rhyming, critical about to cook wit a political out look //
Onstage, MADD it’s whack how facts stack like books cats are shook //
On how you rap stag, slap a *** wearing a dew rag while crew brag they mistook //
Your rhymes and hardcore lines, yeah kid even more times I’ve manage to cook //
Bread and feed cats sandwich spread and bandage their head with cotton because //
They’re misled and rotten belong to the bottom I twist and anoint but cats pause //
And miss the point mad classy rap in a nasty joint kid, but MADD why cats play a joke //
And delay folk and postpone a microphone? Kid cats prevail but fail in their quotes //
Curtail smoke and nails all the females choke with tongue are their antidotes? //
Madd stuff get shabby we glad to call PUFF DADDY he didn’t get time now he’s //
Starting a wet SHYNE in the game trying to lay low kissing on JAY LO but kid MC’S //
Got a lot to say doe, if it don’t fit you must acquit like ****RAN pay high fees //
It’s hard to keep a club card in a love affair make you want to shoot up in the air //
But you can get handcuff like PUFF so I’ve had enough putting grease in my hair //

no shit...i was SR$, now i made Dolla-Bill...get it now?...look we can battle but you set it up...i'll be ready...just give me at least 24-hours to sign up...~1~

lmaoo 24 hours?..4get it fam

lol *thinks*...well dont then...PM me when you ready...

i dont wanna battle u no more who needs 24 hours da spit 10 lines...be serious fam

i requested 24-hours cuz im not always on tha computer homie...i got otha shit to do than sit here and talk shit to you...4real...well when you do wanna battle a nigga, PM me cuz...i'll fuck you up...LMAO :laugh: ... :thumbup:

shut up fam..u been in da open mic forum 24's hours lol