dolla-bill vs Adrenaline
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no bitching
etc...

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-17-05 at 09:33 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Dolla-Bill has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-14-05 11:59 AM.

im gone knock dis guy off tha map for talkin "everybody gets a rush" shit...
yeah, everybody rushed through yo battles and didnt vote for your shit...
my flows come easy, complex but simple...
read dis nigga shit and was like do you have ecstasy in yo temple?...
get off yo computer, go get some air, tha matrix must be really fuckin yo head up...
thinkin you tha one tryin to dodge my bullets but still gettin fucked up...
im serious like TI before the contracts...
and you like lil flip, tha clover boy, suckin dicks to get votes back...
*get at me when you ready*

Adrenaline has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-14-05 12:24 PM.

ayo I got 30 seconds to kill this nigga.chek it

dawg ur freestyles are irritant and garbage
ur goin down rite now, i'll ditch u in a tar pit//
this kid thought "complexest" was a real word
everybody booked u on OM dawg don't be absurd//
i bet ur seeing these rhymes and u gettin tense
im more buoyant than u, ur strictly dense//
rapverse is so wack with u-in-it
that's like chingy gettin signed to G-unit//
i'll put u in a double-clutch and give u an uppercut
my rhymes are tuff enuff to squish u like a rubber duck//
this kid's fallen off like an old school movie see
it's like he turned uninteresting like the matrix three//
im done wit u cuz im at a much higher level
u couldn't reach me if threw a pebble//
as a matter of fact take that and rewind it back
ur easy to break like an already broken tac//
let me end this wit sump'n real serious
the last punchline i say will get u delirious//
if u strike me then i'll smite thee rightfully
cuz only MC's who know me fight me frightfully//

uppin for votes...lol

yo bredgren I killed u...lol^^ :laugh2:

holy smokes!! where's the votes??

damn man...niggaz is sleep on dis battle...i mean i might just loose this one but it would be good to get SOMEBODY in here...good damn

Voted For: Adrenaline

opena: adrenaline
multis: adrenaline
vocab: adrenaline
punches: adrenaline
structure: adrenaline
closa: adrenaline

my vote is 4 adrenaline

THANK YOU!! dammit!!

more votes..plz

Voted For: Adrenaline

adrenaline wins this battle easily even tho it looked like he freestyled it up. but it was a better verse over all than dollabill. adrenaline had better structure and more creativity, plus his rhymes were better. both need to work on punches tho
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uppin people...

Voted For: Adrenaline

Ewwwwww@this battle. You are both herbs but Adrenaline won basically because he went longer, which is wierd. He had a couple similies in there that weren't as horrid as dolla's verse full of name-calling, lol. Both need to elevate more, read more battles, tutorials, etc. Definately change you style. Dolla needs to get less streched and adren needs to stop using these/// But...

v-adrenaline

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Voted For: Adrenaline

yo my vote goes to adrenaline his verse was way better the other cats shit didnt have any type of excitement to it was just blah but adrenaline came way harder he had better punches a way better structure vocab was decent and he was at least a little bit creative but dolla didnt have and punches at all structure was way off and he just didnt put any effort into the battle neither of u had any personals but it was cool my vote is for adrenaline return the fav and drop a vote here http://community.rapverse.com/showb...946543&posted=1

^^^i know...we gone have a rematch soon...uppin...now

Voted For: Adrenaline

alright this was kinda easy for me.

flow Adrenaline
style adrenaline
opener Adrenaline
closer bill
multas adrenaline
vocab adrenaline
punches adrenaline
personals adrenaline
creative adrenaline

adrenaline: it was good alot of nice lines but you might wanna be more complex not that you had to to win this battle lol.

bill: one thing that really threw eveery thing off for me was the style. def not the wosrt shit i seen but you need to elevate