WICKEDCLOWN vs Pop Lotty
 

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WICKEDCLOWN has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-14-05 03:39 PM.

Pop Lotty has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-14-05 03:56 PM.

I'm gonna bring the toast to wicked, you know I'll cook em
Made his verse bleed...ready for an ass whooping
Fuck faggot, dickrider...how can you say your straight
You'll do anything for White, and it wont be cocaine
He knew you'd battle me in the future, and I'd whore em
and that i'd clown on him so bad...he made an alias for it
Wanna have 9494 lines,your verse is jus a run on sentence
I knewd this be a free win, verse look like the Declaration Of Independence
Someone needs to kill you, put u in the ground dog....
...cuz ever since May 5th, RV has been on a fuckin downfall

lmao half ya shit didnt rhyme... goddamn u suck hardcore ass... lmao omg... hahahahaha only way u winnin is with DR

I know straight and cocaine ain't really rhyme, I just wanted to get over with this shit.
I didn't care at all.

Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

wow.....this iz so one sided shit ain't even funny let's see since wicked won this battle obvisously i'ma break down wut i liked about his

nice punchez flow wuz nice an structure wuz iight punchez were nice an had sum tight personalz in there had sum forced linez in there an sum perfect shit that flowed rite 2getha this iz one of ur best battlez or maybe it jus seem like that cuz lotty shit didn't rhyme but nice try lotty....wicked got this easily whoeva say he didn't iz dumb as hell no offense lotty

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Voted For: Pop Lotty

I'm gonna bring the toast to wicked, you know I'll cook em
Made his verse bleed...ready for an ass whooping
Fuck faggot, dickrider...how can you say your straight
You'll do anything for White, and it wont be cocaine
He knew you'd battle me in the future, and I'd whore em
and that i'd clown on him so bad...he made an alias for it
Wanna have 9494 lines,your verse is jus a run on sentence
I knewd this be a free win, verse look like the Declaration Of Independence
Someone needs to kill you, put u in the ground dog....
...cuz ever since May 5th, RV has been on a fuckin downfall
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Nice punches fam, had some good wordplay, but barley rhymed. You had some flow, decent wordplay from your verse,had some personals in there too.



Mcdonalds is lookin for a customer of the year, you the only candidate
fuck this fat ass, lyrics makin me laugh like chris rock in head of state
its time to relate to the fact you aint shit in this world and there aint no debate
that all you create is bullshit rhymes, ya aint neva gonna make it in the game
aint no fame on the way to your front door lotty, ya lifes always gonna be the same
full of broken dreams and empty french fry boxes, its enough to make u wanna cry
i bet all you ever do is sit around and wonder why it is when at night u look to the sky
to find the answers to all ya problems you see ya lost in the 'RANKS' Shabba
fuck you bitch, no ones ever gonna know you, ya just a lyrical grave robba
stealin old ass lyrics and puns, rappin about nothin but gangstas and guns
when in real life your just a fucked up little nerd tryin to be a net thug
ya get beat up for ya change when u walk into the schools halls
run home hide in the corner cryin and poundin ya flabby fists on the walls
askin god why he made you this way, why he wanted you to fail
but no single answer to you will be givin once i prevail
comfort ya self with a Bigmac, i hear Mcdonalds is havin a sale
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Ok clown, you came a lil weak on this. You had good punches,flow,multi'z, and some wordplay but not decent.



overall= This battle was close,Both threw some hard punches and some decent personals. In my opinion i think pop won this with some decent wordplay and some hard punches along with personals, I aint hating on wicked clown your punches was kinda played out. Talking about fat and his habit of mcdonalds, i give you points for that fam, they were personals and some good punches, but i felt that pop had the upper hand with punches.

peace

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Voted For: Pop Lotty

Mcdonalds is lookin for a customer of the year, you the only candidate
fuck this fat ass, lyrics makin me laugh like chris rock in head of state
its time to relate to the fact you aint shit in this world and there aint no debate
2nd lines was played here, weak punch, plus I hate 3-line rhyming
that all you create is bullshit rhymes, ya aint neva gonna make it in the game
aint no fame on the way to your front door lotty, ya lifes always gonna be the same
decent multi’s here…decent punch
full of broken dreams and empty french fry boxes, its enough to make u wanna cry
i bet all you ever do is sit around and wonder why it is when at night u look to the sky
wtf?...no
to find the answers to all ya problems you see ya lost in the 'RANKS' Shabba
fuck you bitch, no ones ever gonna know you, ya just a lyrical grave robba
weak punch, but decent here
stealin old ass lyrics and puns, rappin about nothin but gangstas and guns
when in real life your just a fucked up little nerd tryin to be a net thug
decent mutli’s…an okay punch
ya get beat up for ya change when u walk into the schools halls
run home hide in the corner cryin and poundin ya flabby fists on the walls
decent
askin god why he made you this way, why he wanted you to fail
but no single answer to you will be givin once i prevail
comfort ya self with a Bigmac, i hear Mcdonalds is havin a sale
same as the 1st comment…”hate 3-line rhymes”…but decent

I'm gonna bring the toast to wicked, you know I'll cook em
Made his verse bleed...ready for an ass whooping
decent drop here…
Fuck faggot, dickrider...how can you say your straight
You'll do anything for White, and it wont be cocaine
decent punch on him…
He knew you'd battle me in the future, and I'd whore em
and that i'd clown on him so bad...he made an alias for it
kinda good, hardly landed though
Wanna have 9494 lines,your verse is jus a run on sentence
I knewd this be a free win, verse look like the Declaration Of Independence
nice…
Someone needs to kill you, put u in the ground dog....
...cuz ever since May 5th, RV has been on a fuckin downfall
…kinda decent here

Overall Pop Lotty took this one though

Why u say?...just read the bold hoe

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Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

well this is easy to judge. , WICKED took this one easily he ripped pop Lotty , nuff said for that , now for the break down

pop
I'm gonna bring the toast to wicked, you know I'll cook em
Made his verse bleed...ready for an ass whooping
Weak, opener
Fuck faggot, dickrider...how can you say your straight
You'll do anything for White, and it wont be cocaine
weak
He knew you'd battle me in the future, and I'd whore em
and that i'd clown on him so bad...he made an alias for it
?????
Wanna have 9494 lines,your verse is jus a run on sentence
I knewd this be a free win, verse look like the Declaration Of Independence
decent
Someone needs to kill you, put u in the ground dog....
...cuz ever since May 5th, RV has been on a fuckin downfall
Nice closer but....you lost

Wicked
Mcdonalds is lookin for a customer of the year, you the only candidate
fuck this fat ass, lyrics makin me laugh like chris rock in head of state
decent opener, but could have been better[/n]
its time to relate to the fact you aint shit in this world and there aint no debate
that all you create is bullshit rhymes, ya aint neva gonna make it in the game
[b]not feeling it
aint no fame on the way to your front door lotty, ya lifes always gonna be the same
full of broken dreams and empty french fry boxes, its enough to make u wanna cry
i bet all you ever do is sit around and wonder why it is when at night u look to the sky
lol nice!
to find the answers to all ya problems you see ya lost in the 'RANKS' Shabba
fuck you bitch, no ones ever gonna know you, ya just a lyrical grave robba
weak
stealin old ass lyrics and puns, rappin about nothin but gangstas and guns
when in real life your just a fucked up little nerd tryin to be a net thug
decent
ya get beat up for ya change when u walk into the schools halls
run home hide in the corner cryin and poundin ya flabby fists on the walls
not feeling this
askin god why he made you this way, why he wanted you to fail
but no single answer to you will be givin once i prevail
comfort ya self with a Bigmac, i hear Mcdonalds is havin a sale
lmao , decent closer, funny

nuff said vote- WICKEDCLOWN

aint no fame on the way to your front door lotty, ya lifes always gonna be the same
full of broken dreams and empty french fry boxes, its enough to make u wanna cry
i bet all you ever do is sit around and wonder why it is when at night u look to the sky
lol nice!

^ rotflmmfao @ that, you're kidding right?

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uppin..... we in the same crew now so i guess the beef stops here... uppin tho

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stop sleepin on this shit.... fuck i hate EFL.. no one votes

Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

this seemed like a very lopsided battle lol
Flow: both
style: both
opener no one
closer pop
punches wicked (i saw one)
personals wicked
rhyme scheme wicked
vocab wicked

winner wicked

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Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

ehhh not too hot battle but i think wicked clown took this battle. both verses seemed kinda forced n werent to much fun to read. but wicked had a better flow n punches hit harder in my opinion. both work on throwin some multies in there to make ur verses more interesting.
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Voted For: Pop Lotty

wicked~some of ya lines were good, but i wasnt feeling the mcdonalds lines,lol, your lines seemed to be too long as well, like you were lookin for more filler, this verse wasnt bad, but nothing really stuck out and made me say wow, but nonethe less good job..keep at it, i felt this wasnt strong enough for the win..1
pop lotty~your verse was short, but to the point, you had some personals that are verifiable, liked the cocaine line,and the declaration of independence lines about his long verses, good, creative punches, i thought your opener could have been better, but you made up for it with the ending 2 bars, it got better as i read on, nice job...1

ok this kid didnt even rhyme... how in the hell does cocaine rhyme with straight fluidmoon? you said u liked that line but it made no sence... bunch of fuckin dick ride votes

Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

wow wicked nice drop cuz it wsa hot snoooop lol but anywho I liked ur's better becuase I felt the flow and I felt the imagry and the hits where harder vocab was good opener-closure was iight and ur strucutre was good flow was iight and rhyming was excellent. so hey return the fav and hit up on my links peace

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Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

nice verses peeps but Wicked definately took this.

Wickedclown: Ya verse flowed so good man, it was looking like a fuckin topical. That fat - mcdonalds thing was going at start, middle and end. Your punches were real good, some nice metas, nice vocab and decent structure. Easy to read and enjoyable too. -Long and full of quality.

Best bar: "ya get beat up for ya change when u walk into the schools halls
run home hide in the corner cryin and poundin ya flabby fists on the walls"
-Liking this for some reason loads.


Pop Lotty: Nice verse bro, with some real good punches. Only reason you lost this is cos he had the volume of quality wen yours was in moderation. Ya opener was good and your close was sublime! Well done for making this red hot verse but oyu should have extended it.

best bar: "Fuck faggot, dickrider...how can you say your straight
You'll do anything for White, and it wont be cocaine"
-This is good, and your closer too.

No hate Poppy, keep doing ya thing

Voted For: Pop Lotty

wicked ya verse was ok...but nothin hit hard......nothin at all, werk on ya drops son n rematch this cuz you have potential with ya punches but you lost...
,...lotty easily put your last 2 bars won you this battle ...nice perrsonal play n punch but overall ya drop
was weak n infant like in complexity.......

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Voted For: Pop Lotty

Wack battle...

Wicked Clown....your lines are too stretched, wack punches are here and there, and flow is wack. Are you actually dissing your opponent?

Mcdonalds is lookin for a customer of the year, you the only candidate
fuck this fat ass, lyrics makin me laugh like chris rock in head of state
^^^omg...

but no single answer to you will be givin once i prevail
comfort ya self with a Bigmac, i hear Mcdonalds is havin a sale
^^^you've got to be kidding me...

Pop Lotty, this is nothing like the shit you dropped in the final, you got some wack lines, but you took this because you're actually dissing your opponent.

Someone needs to kill you, put u in the ground dog....
...cuz ever since May 5th, RV has been on a fuckin downfall
^^^kid that's just played

But at least you're dissing him, and your punches, even though some are wack, but they're more direct...

vote: Pop Lotty

Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

WickedClown you had an aight verse there were some good parts in it a few good punches & personals however the flow and structure weren't as good as they normally are and that effected ya verse in a way...i felt it on the lyrics side of it and thats most important at the end of the day...it was a good verse bars i liked best were

Mcdonalds is lookin for a customer of the year, you the only candidate
fuck this fat ass, lyrics makin me laugh like chris rock in head of state

but no single answer to you will be givin once i prevail
comfort ya self with a Bigmac, i hear Mcdonalds is havin a sale

^ liked the repetition of the opener and closer not many prolly picked up on that though

Pop better flow and structure definitely i'll give you that but punchwise wasn't really dope material a lot of bars were weak rhymes and they only work best in audio because of accentation and that harms ya verse i learned...also it was very unorthodox the layout which wasn't equal so some bars didn't flow well but it only happened in one bar real badly and it was this one

Wanna have 9494 lines,your verse is jus a run on sentence
I knewd this be a free win, verse look like the Declaration Of Independence

And also ya best punch which was good...but i think WC got this coz more was put into it than you...so he gets the vote.

No open battles...therefore no 3 day limit :thumbup:

Voted For: Pop Lotty

@ wicked clown- some of your lines were really stretched, you had too many fat jokes, it was funny tho..
so here we go:
Mcdonalds is lookin for a customer of the year, you the only candidate
fuck this fat ass, lyrics makin me laugh like chris rock in head of state
^nice opener.. the chris rock and head of the state part was a filler to close the rhyme, not too hot for that part.. but eh, not bad for an opener
its time to relate to the fact you aint shit in this world and there aint no debate
that all you create is bullshit rhymes, ya aint neva gonna make it in the game
^^hella stretched, not a good punch..
aint no fame on the way to your front door lotty, ya lifes always gonna be the same
u missed the other half of your bar.. but not bad first half
full of broken dreams and empty french fry boxes, its enough to make u wanna cry
i bet all you ever do is sit around and wonder why it is when at night u look to the sky
^seen where u were going wit this, but u didn't deliver right.. so it turned out as a bad punch
to find the answers to all ya problems you see ya lost in the 'RANKS' Shabba
fuck you bitch, no ones ever gonna know you, ya just a lyrical grave robba
again coulda been worded better, but a good attempt to name play..
stealin old ass lyrics and puns, rappin about nothin but gangstas and guns
when in real life your just a fucked up little nerd tryin to be a net thug
^^aight nice personal.. not hard hittin tho
ya get beat up for ya change when u walk into the schools halls
run home hide in the corner cryin and poundin ya flabby fists on the walls
^not a bad personal.. kinda funny too.. lol
askin god why he made you this way, why he wanted you to fail
but no single answer to you will be givin once i prevail
^^not a good bar, period.. wack fa real
comfort ya self with a Bigmac, i hear Mcdonalds is havin a sale
^wtf? where's the other half, and repeatin McDonalds again is not a good idea.. not creative

Pop Lotty:
came with str8 punches some were just decent..
but anywayz, here's the critique--
I'm gonna bring the toast to wicked, you know I'll cook em
Made his verse bleed...ready for an ass whooping
^aight opener, not hard hittin tho..
Fuck faggot, dickrider...how can you say your straight
You'll do anything for White, and it wont be cocaine
^LOL good personal and punch.. *dies* lmao
He knew you'd battle me in the future, and I'd whore em
and that i'd clown on him so bad...he made an alias for it
^another good personal, coulda been worded betta
Wanna have 9494 lines,your verse is jus a run on sentence
I knewd this be a free win, verse look like the Declaration Of Independence
LMFAO another good personal.. second half nice meta good connection lol..
Someone needs to kill you, put u in the ground dog....
...cuz ever since May 5th, RV has been on a fuckin downfall
closer kinda played.. so blah

Aight, It's pretty clear who took this battle, Pop Lotty, took this almost by a landslide, if it wasn't for his closer which was played.. WickedClown, ur lines are too stretched and your content for your punches were still not worded right.. Pop Lotty took this.. good luck..
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