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Pleim vs Killah.Bwoy
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Letz see how "dope" you really our :laugh: Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 01-14-05 at 07:09 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Killah.Bwoy has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-14-05 06:42 PM.
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Pleim has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-14-05 06:44 PM.
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Listen ya fake azz vet, i show no remorse at all
See imma rob KB..............with NO toys involved You been here forever and still no respect? shit Say you the "underdog"....but thats just a bitch Look son, all of your punches are at such a void I'd think a fag like you could at least spell "boy" You suck homeboy,what else you need to learn? Whatchu gunna do Wendy's voters see you served? It's over, and it's done, what else do I gotta say? You're just a nerd who averages 55 posts a day! :laugh2: |
Aiight, Listen..
Fuck You, Dawg, Cummin At Me..Better Luck Bustin a Nut.. I Swear On My Life, I'll take Your ass Cheeks, and Glue Them Shut.. That Eliminates my Job, Now I Don't Have to "Shit On You".. Crush Your House, What You Gon Tell The Judge, I cut Your trashbin in two? Face It Kid, Your Hands The Closest thing your gettin to pussy.. How Can Killah Fall off, When I Got mini Mouse tryna push-me.. Pop! Pop! Naww That Aint The Gun, Thats your Mom Thirsty Again.. Kid can't seem to miss the target, Shame, he alwayz aims for the rear end.. I Release Shaq Attacks, Fuck L.A, Like Your Team, You Fell Off.. And I Aint talkin bout church when I sound The Bells Off.. |
Voted For: Killah.Bwoy
Yo, you doiminated every single category. Other dude came with some bullshit. I don't even think i need to say anything more. He attempted wordplay, and failed miserably. Killah, you came hella whack to, but you obviously wrote to the level of your competition. It was mostly self-glorification, but at least you had something resembling punches. Overall, just a below-par battle by both. Vote: KB -CJ- |
This was feedback posted for Killah.Bwoy
Just checking pollz
........................... Nice battle here though |
yes indeed. killah. doesnt try unless needed to.....
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Voted For: Pleim
This was a real close battle. I dont know who took this one right now. Killa-u had nice flow, but i wasnt feelin ur structure. you came hard with tha personals, but i think pleim won in that category. or i dunno, it was close. this battle was more of personals from both of yall. yo intro was nice, but i feel your intro bar wasnt complete. tha second line was wack to me. u got skillz tho. pleim-u got mad skillz also. i was lovin yo intro also. creative and nicely worded. i liked ur structure thru-out this whole verse. but i also feel u fell off near tha end, but u came hard with tha punches. personals were hard too, this was a close battle. overall-i think this was a close battle. i think yall came neck and neck and was mad prepared. but i think pleim came off a lil harder. BREAKDOWN: OPENER:pleim Rhyming:Pleim Structure:Pleim Personals:Killah Bwoy Punches:Pleim Closer:Killah Bwoy Overall:Pleim this was close. Not hate Killah....sry.... plz RTF on battle in sig...............1........... |
why yu change ya name dawg? pure bitch move sun
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This was feedback posted for Pleim
cant be bothered to vote...but the way i see it pleim won...killah had way too many played lines, and pleims punchs hit harder..
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Voted For: Killah.Bwoy
pretty decent battle but ima have to give this one to Konfliktz Kon Fuck You, Dawg, Cummin At Me..Better Luck Bustin a Nut.. I Swear On My Life, I'll take Your ass Cheeks, and Glue Them Shut.. pretty decent opener That Eliminates my Job, Now I Don't Have to "Shit On You".. Crush Your House, What You Gon Tell The Judge, I cut Your trashbin in two? LOL!!! Face It Kid, Your Hands The Closest thing your gettin to pussy.. How Can Killah Fall off, When I Got mini Mouse tryna push-me.. not feeling it Pop! Pop! Naww That Aint The Gun, Thats your Mom Thirsty Again.. Kid can't seem to miss the target, Shame, he alwayz aims for the rear end.. decent I Release Shaq Attacks, Fuck L.A, Like Your Team, You Fell Off.. And I Aint talkin bout church when I sound The Bells Off.. Okay , closer but coud have been better 7.5/10 Pleim Listen ya fake azz vet, i show no remorse at all See imma rob KB..............with NO toys involved LOLZ. NICE opener You been here forever and still no respect? shit Say you the "underdog"....but thats just a bitch not feeling it Look son, all of your punches are at such a void I'd think a fag like you could at least spell "boy" NIce You suck homeboy,what else you need to learn? Whatchu gunna do Wendy's voters see you served? Decent It's over, and it's done, what else do I gotta say? You're just a nerd who averages 55 posts a day! Nice personal , but could have been better 7/10 Close battle but Konflitz took this one by alittle bit good battle both , keep it up Vote- Konflitz |
umm i changed my name because killah bwoy is mad old
kid its not a bitch move i dont need to change my name to merk you. you aint no challenge. nuff said |
im not a challenege yet i am close in the votes :laugh:
uppin yall, real voters |
its only 2-1 thats not close fuckin retard..........
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This was feedback posted for Killah.Bwoy
meh im not voting cuz you didnt try and got ripped :(
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Voted For: Killah.Bwoy
Aiight, Listen.. Fuck You, Dawg, Cummin At Me..Better Luck Bustin a Nut.. I Swear On My Life, I'll take Your ass Cheeks, and Glue Them Shut.. aww nasty N good.. That Eliminates my Job, Now I Don't Have to "Shit On You".. Crush Your House, What You Gon Tell The Judge, I cut Your trashbin in two? ha nice diss.. Face It Kid, Your Hands The Closest thing your gettin to pussy.. How Can Killah Fall off, When I Got mini Mouse tryna push-me.. nice ... Pop! Pop! Naww That Aint The Gun, Thats your Mom Thirsty Again.. Kid can't seem to miss the target, Shame, he alwayz aims for the rear end.. decent I Release Shaq Attacks, Fuck L.A, Like Your Team, You Fell Off.. And I Aint talkin bout church when I sound The Bells Off.. could of been a better ending but still decent.. tight verse hard punches good flow nicely done K.B..... Listen ya fake azz vet, i show no remorse at all See imma rob KB..............with NO toys involved decent but almost what fabolous said.... You been here forever and still no respect? shit Say you the "underdog"....but thats just a bitch no hit... Look son, all of your punches are at such a void I'd think a fag like you could at least spell "boy" not a good diss... but aight... You suck homeboy,what else you need to learn? Whatchu gunna do Wendy's voters see you served? nah... It's over, and it's done, what else do I gotta say? You're just a nerd who averages 55 posts a day! ok ending, no hard hits, flow aight, creativeness weak better luck next time... |
mayne yall niggas got some bullshit votes, if you think i won just vote cuz this nighga is cheating or soemthing, i obviously merked him
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dont whine, bout it...to much newbs do that these days
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Voted For: Killah.Bwoy
aight pleim first two bars were his only nice punches.......kon. was more consistant, and that min mouse line killed it.........so i vote kon for better punches and overrall verse v/kon |
Voted For: Killah.Bwoy
Pleim: uh your verse wasnt that great there might have been good stucture but you made it that way by using.................thats dumb dont do that the vocabulary was weak and you didnt have a very good punch and twist to yoru verse to actually diss Konflicks try using metaphores and punches to diss him to win...no hate Konflicks: not the best from you cuz the stucture was weak but your punches were creative and you used metaphores to express them...the vocab wasnt there but you had a better twist to using something close....the emotion off the punch was good i jsut felt you got this...pz Opener: K closer: K vocab: K metas: K punches: K stucture: P flow: P win/ Konflicks |
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