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~Lady Fiya~ Vs. Disorda
Rules:
Battles Go Up Friday Check In Due Sunday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time Verses Due Tuesday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time Voting Ends Thursday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time 20 Lines Minimum 40 Lines Maximum No Biting No Recycling Do Not Go Over The Line Limit Or Under The Line Limit Meaning No Less Than 20 Lines No More Than 40 Lines You Must Vote On 3 Battles Per Week And Edit Them Into Your Check-In.. If You Dont Do So, Youre Banned From The Tourney The Following Week Topic: Life In Iraq |
checkers............................... good luck, disorda.. :thumbup:
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sup, have i missed it or wot?
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if not gl chick, never battled a female before.
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you str8... good luck, ma i remember you from the Emcee Introduction............... :thumbup:
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ok here goes,
you better fall back fiya cos im launchin first stike like a set of US missiles going boom in the night yeah right, why u putting up a u fuckin fight? u cant defeat or compare to my lyrical might or intelligence level, ill show u up blow u up like a pissed iraqi rebel i got the mind of george bush i got the face of the devil fuck droppin bombs ill take u down at ground level im a madman insane like sadaam hussain, got u locked in a prison with electrified chains fuck a coalition ill run my own campaign, you can be the good guys ill be a tyrant on the reign shooting rpg rockets at u once and again capture u and inject venom in ur veins ill abuse u like the inmates of Abu Ghraib prison then get of scot free cos it wasnt my decision it came from command sittin in the homeland away from the gunshots away from the sand away from little kids with grenades in hand its amazing man, this shit it aint even planned, like when the us dropped bombs on there own damn vans or when there super-sonic jets get shot crash land lets do it 1on1 lets make our own war use words as our weapons then count up the scores a faceless person sent a letter threw my door saying K.I,A : duchess of metaphors just come to terms ur unable to defeat me and if u do ill behead u on live cable tv ;P |
^^^^^^^^^^lmao rofl.......... you're only supposed to write about IRAQ this is a topical battle.. you supposed to write a topical about Iraq not a diss to me, and mentioning Iraq....
mayne my verse will be up in a lil' while..... good luck, ma |
shit man, i aint used to this stuff. me dropping again there or wot? will see wot happens here but me wants battles man,
cheers |
lADY if she agrees will let ya drop again and that would give me an eye to respect her even tho she is a killa. ;)
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If it were me, you'd get another chance and I think Fiya would prefer winning the right way than like this...hope she agrees...everyone makes mistakes...
DQ |
yea, chica you can drop again.. it's due tonight, so go ahead and get ya shit right, and drop i ain't got no problems, just don't be late.. drop before midnight.. good luck.. :thumbup:
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jeez what a gurl she has the respect from me peace gurl check ur pms. ;)
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safe guys and gals, i prefer the more aggresive style o rap but ill give it a shot.
- new tape comes in, its a message from the dead new victim siezed, hes missing his head listen instead to the music they play to the insurgents ears trying to change there ways fools armed with rifles and hand grenades news asking us about the bang we made we remove madman-saddam and man be saved soldier asks for armour but damn delayed his mother pays respects to an empty grave all because big man thinks bombs be made takes a thousand lives for his fathers name shame the world watches on these days cant get away with the shit ur commader says think there gonna leave yeah right no ways fallujahs fucked shits ablaze parentless children wake around in a daze trying to navigate the destruction maze get caught by exploiters and sold for slaves all this shit so we remember his name mr George bush, the man to blame sitting in safety thinking he cant be shamed there u go, |
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god tell me why the beheading part has me teary probally cuz my pops is in iraq but waiting for u lady. ;)
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50Hater_Killer stop freeposting
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sorry to bring up shit close to heart man, got given a topic so i drop it
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word i'll post my verse in a minute.. it's only 11...... :)
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stayin up late for this shit, 5:30 here
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ok flow i cant see k no edit button so i gotta double post my votes,
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1904053 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172102 |
We’re alone inside an old shed, outside theres more bloodshed
From the raids of war, back and forth, shouts near my bunk bed Half the neighbors have fled.. Unfamiliar soldiers and gun shells So empty, but plenty delivered in bodies, faces missin sum detail The water I brought to my face to clear my thoughts a tragedy daily Lately, the earliest shadow of sunset shows my faith as it’s fading The one I ask for help, does not answer, we answer our own prayers I’m lookin for the reasonable explanations, but even those aren’t there -Lookin amongst the ground, the nearest sound, I stepped on used flare- My heart jumped probably higher than young children testin mines Told they would be fine, Rebels dress them up in heavy material blind The little souls used for someone’s escape route, there’s no comfort The men are aggressive, a lesson is women are forced to be mothers Liberty is unlawful, quite awful how our world is collided into fueds Of other kinds.. The Nike, Reebok, Filas.. Shoes we’d never used Our rare supply for food.. What countries consider as extreme fasting Is an average meal, for the elders, the wells without water it’s drastic We pass these things because I’m used to the shortage, it’s normal And natural for our surroundings to look horrible, admit our troubles But continue to struggle for dreams of bigger nations is not our quest We have yet to establish a future, that may be criticized nonetheless And we want no harm amongst those who died trying to protect cultures Once grown and practiced for a long time now.. Our religion is open And the doors have never been closed to those who plead to return try to understand our difference, comparing 2 worlds.. bout time u learn |
lady won this due to her verse not being a battle verse, also because she had a way better story line and more imagery..
vote: lady |
sorry for free posting ;) but I felt lady on this one homes no affense it was just as if I was living it as I am now and had me thinkin more and more of my pops. But her strucutre was good she had better rhyming and her vocab and multis where good but no hate on u just keep elevating on that iight.
vt lady and please check out my topical I had a no show. |
i read disordas 2nd verse
not much to vote on, landslide victory in my opinion lol emotion-lady fiya, disorda had emotion in her verse too but it just wasnt as much as lady fiya in anyway...fiya brought a lot more with her lines and descriptions... imagery-lady fiya, wasnt feelin any in disordas verse lady brought a great amount of vocabulary and it helped describe what was happening tremendously...a lot of props here on the vocab too... the rest was basically fiya, i actually thought disorda had a better flow since her lines were shorter for a better syllable count but lady got the other aspects... good luck to both peace |
dude im a dude, nice going fiya
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i coulda sworn u said u were hopin u were the first white chick on here in ya welcome thread.. but anywayz good luck, Disorda :thumbup:..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172106 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172102 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172110 ^if i need more Flow, just lemme know.. i believe 3 was enough.. |
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gonna give this one to lady fiya being a vet to this i think she easily took it to the kid in all categories flow, imagry, etc...The verse was a good all around drop. Disorda did a alright job for first time doing this but could tell he didnt know what was going on when he dropped a battle verse...its all good if ya need any more feedback pm the kid. :spit: :spit:
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Vote Lady
Why? Imaginary And Flow Was Decent Plus Emotion Disorda- I Didnt Felt Emotion Was Put On Your Verse Nor Imaginary Either V. Lady, Wun |
nice going lady, loved the verse. think me shud stick to cuss battles, dus rv have any or am i just blind?
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vote/ Lady
Pretty simple vote, Lady had Disorda beat on everything - Flow, Emotion, Imagery The piece was tight Lady, so much emotion and beautiful imagery, it was a pleasure to read. |
Lady Fiya Wins By K.O
Lady Fiya +5 Disorda -3 |
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