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50Cal. 01-15-05 05:41 AM

Maintain
 
ME CALAMITY AND DIABOLIC THIS IS FOR OUR A.I DEMO HOPE YALL LIKE IT :thumbup: HIT MY SOUNDCLICK :thumbup:
i left feed on young duke ride wit me
tha q dont mean no queer
and spul hip hop

Eternal 01-15-05 05:48 AM

dayum lol tight beat in my opinion...

Cali - hittin em multis hard man nice flow quality is good
Calam - dayum man u got the fire in the song ahahah tight flow great quality man tight shit
Dia - the quality could be better but the words are lyrical dopness... tight flow man

overall the song is dope in my opinion.... i seen a spark of fire flaming in the middle...lmao.. dope track 8.6/10.... :thumbup:

Status 01-15-05 06:03 AM

aight the intro was nice....

aight good shit cali

i see you are finding your style

CALI: just keep working on that style....nice lyrics as always...nice spit man...i see you have alot of emotion...damn nice


CALAM: damn man you are like always ripping tracks...nice....i like oyur lyrics and your metaphores were hot........just about everything oyu spit got my attention

diabolic...nothing really got my attention but solid flow prety nice...but qaulity was not as well as the otherd on the song...just work in quality

all in all preetyy nice....dont really give out numbers but what about this....1118274744 out of 39745759 lol

but yeah good hsit

Shi-1 01-15-05 06:03 AM

Cool ass track on the real...i was listenin to the lyrics and each verse was consistant.
This is one u can close ur eyes to and let the semi eerie track guide u to the mood of the song u know? lyrics fit the mood of the tune of this track.
Good work yall!

.....advanced.....

50Cal. 01-15-05 06:17 AM

^thanks to all who gave feedback nice to know yall like it;)

Dex 01-15-05 06:36 AM

Cali: hit them multis hard and fast. Good verse

Calam: Good flow, hot metaphors. This was cool

Diabolic: Cool aswel. liked the flow.

Good from all yous. I see the reason i wanted in AI is right in this track

~Lady Fiya~ 01-15-05 11:44 AM

cali- u did good on this track..

calam-killed it with the metaphors, i was feelin ya verse mos def

diabolic-you fell off at certain parts but i was feelin ya lyrics mos def..

i liked the beat you all had picked for this one, overall nice collabo.. stay up, gentlemen.. :thumbup:

kaveh 01-15-05 04:51 PM

yo im listenin....and the intro is tight,first verse had real tight flow,delivery,and lyrics was on point...second verse is also dope..it gotta a tight flow and delivery,lyrics again on point....thrid verse also had good flow and it was pretty tight...nice beat choice also...so overall dope track

50Cal. 01-15-05 06:02 PM

^thanks for the feed that means alot since i dont know most of these people thanks

parasite 01-15-05 06:19 PM

nice shit. pure classic. everyone had a great verse with good vocabulary and multis. pure fire. 10/10.

Graphical 01-15-05 06:21 PM

pretty good song i liked it a lot but it would be better if quality was better... but i still like it good job

Black Queen 01-15-05 06:23 PM

da beat was tight as fuck i like da echo and some of the parts i like the wat it was about shit was mad crazy the beginining was tight and the end was to the whole fuckin song was good big ups cali 9/10

Compose 01-15-05 06:27 PM

i think its really good...

^and quality is fine(to bomber z) i could understand all the lyrics thats all that matters for me the flow is good and beat too
great job to all 3 of you...

peace

50Cal. 01-15-05 07:05 PM

^thanks final i agree fuck a quality we aint got no equipiment we do it how we can its clear and understandable at least

The Jett 01-15-05 07:25 PM

Cali....Keep readin bro.(really cant tell u record every line seperatly)
Calamity.....Metephores, spit, flow, nice...real nice...wrong people to collab wit tho
Diabolic....Sound like ur in a toilet or summin....however u flo better than cali.

Calamity.....ahhh....phoenix....
just make this solo....so I can D/L it an drop it in my car. -1

Elegiac 01-15-05 07:25 PM

I liked this it had nice multies. Also I loved the beat and I loved the overall feel and flow of this track. Nice track feelas good fuckin' job it was hot as hell.

Yung Duke 01-15-05 07:50 PM

aye dog most people who leave feedback then ask for it aint that hot. but i give everyone a chance and I'm glad i gave you one. the entire track was hot. maybe you'd wanna collab some time. but ya lyrics was on point and the flow and beat was perfect for the concept of the song. keep doin what you do and you gone go places. but on the real if u wanna collab holla at me. good drop. I look foward to hearin more shit from you

[.:D:.] 01-15-05 08:06 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by CarsonJetX2
Cali....Keep readin bro.(really cant tell u record every line seperatly)
Calamity.....Metephores, spit, flow, nice...real nice...wrong people to collab wit tho
Diabolic....Sound like ur in a toilet or summin....however u flo better than cali.

Calamity.....ahhh....phoenix....
just make this solo....so I can D/L it an drop it in my car. -1




hmm..u always hatin on niggas...but thats just ya way of makin ya btch ass feel that ur betta...then go ahead...ckuz if u forgot...u have a whip...u kno where Bmore is..

50Cal. 01-15-05 08:12 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by [.:Diabolic:.]
hmm..u always hatin on niggas...but thats just ya way of makin ya btch ass feel that ur betta...then go ahead...ckuz if u forgot...u have a whip...u kno where Bmore is..

and thats word stupid fag got a big mouth but your mad pussy stop posting in our fucking threads we get 20 posts saying the track is dope your the only one posts some dumb shit and record each line seperatly?stupid fuck i record all at once on my verse so jump off my dick everyone in this track is better then you now stay the fuck out my threads carson you stupid fag or come to ny and ill beat yo ass then post the pics on rv :nono:

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New Meth0d 01-15-05 08:22 PM

wasnt feelin cali's flow or delivery seemed off .....didnt flow to well....second dude came better flowd pretty well decent delivery, last kid came the strongest with a solid flow and delivery, lyrics were coo by all, but cali's flow was just bad. without calis verse it would be better

overall this track was just aight

-RKS- 01-15-05 08:25 PM

cali your flow and delivery were pretty decent

calam you shined on this track the most in my eyes your flow and delivery were nice

dia ive heard you come way betta before your flow was choppy in some parts but over-all aight your lyrical content is always fire

over-all dope song keep doing ya ish

50Cal. 01-15-05 08:38 PM

^thanks rks and carson new method jpoll and rdot stay the fuck outta my threads you fAGS ALWAYS have some thing negative to say even when every other posts says its dope yall are all dickriding fags stay outta our threads

New Meth0d 01-15-05 09:01 PM

its called criticism

Artemis 01-15-05 09:26 PM

ok RTF.

quality is ehh....

Cali: damn, you got much better than last time I heard you man. props on that. quality got a lil better, but still is jus aiight. But I thought it was nice. But for yo multi's, shit was good, and it shows you got good lyrical capabilities, but don't jus fill the whole shit up wit multi's, cuz then it makes it much easier to talk about more things and hit other parts of the topic better. But either way, not a bad verse. I expected worse, but this suprised me. nice job, man. you elevating.

Calam: nice shit as always, man. lol Flow was tight as hell. awesome lyrics as well, man. It was real good. yo quality wasn't as hot as yours is, but still was good. Overall nice shit here, man. nothing much to criticize.

Diabolic: don't kno what effect you use, but it sounds like you on a phone or something. Quality was aiight. Flow was pretty nice throughout tho. Jus fell off on a few spots. near the end mostly. Lyrics were pretty tight. nice job.

Overall, this was a pretty nice track. Good listen. I liked the beat. good work. I give it a 7.5/10 keep droppin'. pc

50Cal. 01-15-05 09:57 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by New Meth0d
its called criticism

no its called hate fag now stay out my thread :nono:

New Meth0d 01-15-05 10:01 PM

Stay out why would you want me to? See everytime i post in here your thread goes up and gets more views. so in acutally you should want me to keep posting in here


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