Mier vs .MictoriouS.
 

Battle Rules:

5 Bars
10 Lines

No Dick Riding
No Recycling
No Biting
No Favoritism
No Swaying

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-15-05 at 02:08 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Mier has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-15-05 01:40 PM.

.MictoriouS. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-15-05 01:47 PM.

..Man your style is just a question of writing u'll get disrespected- for-rhyming...
Cuz u and 'illness' don't go together like dyslexics- and-writing !!

See...My Spits 'Rock', So Don't Be surprised if ya get Hit witta Boulder...
Game Over, Cuz Like R-Kelly n' Hova, I'll leave a Big Chip on ya Shoulder..

Mic’s words get |under ya skin, inta ya veins| n Go [Straight-to-his-Heart],
Its like| Im owning bars in prison yards| the way this Pussy’s [raped-in-my-bars],

He cant wait to be ripped whne he’s [missin-his-patience]
As Im spittin bars that |Diss-Orient| like Im [rippin-an-Asian],

This bitch got straight fooled like this Bitch is a villain//
Cut accross your body to leave you more scarred than a ritual killing//


G/Luck

its mier, and i dont wanna hurt the broke queer
but the last time you gotta check was right here
you banned d/r cuz nobody likes you at all? well
that wont be a problem for you, cuz your ugly as hell
you wanna be good, but your wack as shit
who can succeed ''with l punches l like l this l''
we talk about the best, but your wack is what be tell em
he puts a 'l' after every punch, cuz thats what he's gettin
so in conclusion ur gay, and showed me what wack is like
so it wont be retirin, when i put down this mic

uppin for some votes..............................

Voted For: .MictoriouS.

winner-Mictorious

flow-tie
punches-mic
multies-mic
finisher-mic
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Mier ur verse was aight, Mic just came harder

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Voted For: .MictoriouS.

Mic took this hands down. i feel he came harder and more prepared. I think Mic is tha one with thaa better style.
Mic-u had some hard punches in there, and some hard mettas. i think ur structure was really bad. yo lines were un-even and stretched. Near tha end of ur barz, ur rhymes were kinda bad, and i think u fell off near tha end, but u got skillz. i think u shuld elevate more, and practice, cause ur verse wasnt that hard, but it was still nice...
Mier-u verse was too simple to me. u came a lil soft in this battle. i think u shuld also elevate and practice more. i think ur structure was better in this battle, but i didnt see much creativitie from u. i dont think ur ready to be a dope emcee right now, but i think wit a lil work on ur bars, and punches. u can be one of tha best on RV soon. ur just a lil too simple.
overall-this was a one-sided battle to me. tha punches were a lil too simple from yall, but i think mic took this one...good battle....elevate yall.........

and plz return tha favor on battle in sig............1.............

^^un explained vote....lol...RV voters...*ugh*....but dont forget to return tha favor, becus i took my time out to vote on this....peace*

Voted For: Mier

damn my boy mier got dat FIYAH i mean he basically killed this nucca cuz i mean look at diz lines
you banned d/r cuz nobody likes you at all? well
that wont be a problem for you, cuz your ugly as hell
he clowned this fool it wasnt een close, mic you gotta work on your punches nd stuff cuz they wasnt that strong but mier is pretty good i bet he coulda won that tourny fa real cuz this duke is fiya

oh and yall needa hit up duh linkz in mah sig and vote fa sho

Voted For: .MictoriouS.

Polls..................................

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This was feedback posted for Mier
 

lmao.shit sucks so bad.

LOLOL ^^ ... Uppin this thing people .. :]

Peace

we got 2 unexplained votes in here dude............

Voted For: .MictoriouS.

its mier, and i dont wanna hurt the broke queer
but the last time you gotta check was right here
nope........
you banned d/r cuz nobody likes you at all? well
that wont be a problem for you, cuz your ugly as hell
i cant even think of a word to describe that
you wanna be good, but your wack as shit
who can succeed ''with l punches l like l this l''
i sure as hell can succeed
we talk about the best, but your wack is what be tell em
he puts a 'l' after every punch, cuz thats what he's gettin
wow...that made sense..still sucked...culdve been written better...
so in conclusion ur gay, and showed me what wack is like
so it wont be retirin, when i put down this mic
hah.................no

1/10

mictorious

IP:


..Man your style is just a question of writing u'll get disrespected- for-rhyming...
Cuz u and 'illness' don't go together like dyslexics- and-writing !!
blah...that was decent
See...My Spits 'Rock', So Don't Be surprised if ya get Hit witta Boulder...
Game Over, Cuz Like R-Kelly n' Hova, I'll leave a Big Chip on ya Shoulder..
nah...that was played
Mic’s words get |under ya skin, inta ya veins| n Go [Straight-to-his-Heart],
Its like| Im owning bars in prison yards| the way this Pussy’s [raped-in-my-bars],
repitition aint good...dunt use the same word in the same line..structure aint good
He cant wait to be ripped whne he’s [missin-his-patience]
As Im spittin bars that |Diss-Orient| like Im [rippin-an-Asian],
couldve been written better
This bitch got straight fooled like this Bitch is a villain//
Cut accross your body to leave you more scarred than a ritual killing//
aint feelin it

5/10

mictorious gets this fo betta punches

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Voted For: .MictoriouS.

Mictorious-Nice decent punches, with some ill wordplays. Flow was kinda chopped up. Stop with the, {} and shit, messing up the flow.Either way, nice decent punches with some good wordplays, fam.



Mier- Ok, much needed in elevation of punches, you've came out played and basic. Punches wasn't really "effective" enough to give you a win. Flow was "ok". Punches is what you lack in, elevate fam.




overall=Ok, battle is one-sided. Mictrious had some "effective" punches with flow and ill wordplays.On the otherhand mier punches was played and basic, much needed elevation in punches, mier. I give this to mictorious, cause he came harder with punches and wordplay. Mier came basic and played out.

wun

Voted For: .MictoriouS.

Aii do I really Got To explain My self ....damn I Hate doin this
Mier
you Came Sort of weak Mayne ya structure was Off A Lil and Your punchez didnt connect and i seen no personals multi's or metas

Mictorious
took this one by a long run Came wit some nice personals and punchez but multi's were absent but no biggy vocab was str8 um Basically you did betta than your oppenent and you get my vote

RTF ill have my Battle up in a Few min

Lol .. For got about this battle LOL ..
Well I'm Uppin .. This

Voted For: .MictoriouS.

.Mictorious.
your punches were aight here, some of them landed
your structure needs improving too, so work on that
your flow was good, and the vocab was decent overall
you had an okay drop, nuttin much here though

Mier
your flow was good, vocab was aight in this one
the structure was pretty decent, and not like Mic's
but overall your punches could've been harder though
and you would've tookin this battle here