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The Black Plague vs MaRVJay1009
Battle Rules:
14-16 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting My bad about the other 2 battles.. this one is the rite one Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 01-17-05 at 04:57 PM Must drop verse in 3000 minutes after check in. |
aight im waitin 4 u fam
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Waitin for me? I'l accept when u get back online
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The Black Plague has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-16-05 08:14 PM.
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MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-17-05 01:39 AM.
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dont waste ya time makin new songs,u been waitin 2 long!..
talk shit i bet ya block sound like "2 days be4 you was born"* u wanna c me traped in shackles,cuzz i know y fags attack u.. rv dis fukin "FRUiT" done had alot of dicks in his "adams-APPLE" so chill hoe...u dont have a ill flow..ur "fake" but "Real" slow... yeah u can buy a "plastic-dick" but u'll neva get a "deal-tho".. dis bitch a neva be betta tha me F how sick dis BROaD pen is. 10 wins still dis dirty "bumm sleepin on me" like "park benches" ya not on my level stupid dis dude jay is just servin you.... use ya writtens i'll "cum off da top" like "tupa's in convertibles" i'll murda you so why you goin at dis kidd i do hurt dreams.... u winnin? umm no only time u'll "OWN-MJ" its dem "NEW 13'S" it aint a thing homes!..back up from da KiNGS THRONE!.... cuzz black u couldn't "CELL"*sell* spittin off a "RiNGTONE".. my raps just torchin him punches dont land cuzz dis fags is forcin em only time u'll "DROP a single" is in "chruch" when they "pass da offerin" nuff said..... explinations.... *my first bar his birthday is july 6th...and july 4th is 2 days be4 it..u'll get da line ppl pleez explain ya votes |
All these wins you got like shootin heroin up in ya jugular..it gets to ya head quick
But ya errogance is ignorant, shows you just “hard headed” like a lead-dick Yea ya perfect record nice, but all ya wins came against wack lames like you Its unfair, like puttin mini-me and simon birch vs. MJ and shaq in games of 2 on 2 Just look at cats you battle... proud cuz you gonna beat "the wackest MC"? We "established" you havn't got balls to beat peeps ya own caliber, cuz you losin to me* My punches hit like tsunamis…. Ya face was a beach I’l throw 1 to the shore Since ya moms only had ya wack ass to give me a win, I guess I owe 1 to the whore Ya pathetic personals are pitiful, bringin em is pointless, like piss hole contraceptives You tom cruise and this your “mission impossible”… cuz winnin is ya objective Dropped my verse now you foldin under the pressure, like a bad poker hand Chewed u up and spit you out…this battles like Lil Fips rap game..its over man You wack, lackin skills, talent is absent..you more herbish than snoops pocket Didn’t come hard enuff got dropped like the franchise from the Houston Rockets Ya fear growin like rogaine, face burnin like propaine.. But you earned it yaself Dumb idea to hit accept.. Call you kurt cobaine cuz you murdered yaself *He battlin "thewackestmc" and his crew named "the establishment" |
uppin 4 some more votes ppl
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This was feedback posted for The Black Plague
checkin polls........................................
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Voted For: The Black Plague
iight I gotta give this to blackplague is verse was a lil betta... Blackplague: Alright for one man your verse was to stretch, but ya verse didnt fall apart which gave you the win you're flow was consistant and you had good simili's in this you're punches were hiting hard and you're vocabulary was much betta than marv your personals were good searched it well you're openore was good and I liked ya closer even though the concept is plain you made it sound good on the account on the wordplay you used on it...overall good verse. Marv: ok you're verse was ok not as good yet ok you fell off sometime like u were doin good until u met the mj and the 13 line which was just wack, you're wordplay was bad cuz I couldnt quite catch any flow to it...you gad some good punches and only one good personal which was you openor and you're closer was also good which was a good and I liked it but you're whole verse wasnt as enjoyable and u fell of sometimes which made u loose at the end...overall good verse...but not as good as black plague. votes..............Black Plague Vote removed.. alias backlisted |
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
Wow Marv Reachin Hotshh Level Kid Iss Nice.... Openor=Marv,Good Punch And Personal Shit Wass Hott Strukture=Tie,Both Yall Shit Wass Easy Ta Read Personals=Tie,You Both Had 1 Personal Punches=Off Tha Back Marv,His Shit Wass Hot And They Hit Hard Vokab=Tha Black Plague,Had Better Vokab Up Ya Vokab Both Yall Wordplay=Marv All His Lines Had Somethin Ta Do With Tha Punch Multies=Marv,Damn Tha Multies Wass Hot Closer=Tha Black Plague,Marv Ya Shit Aint Rhyme AT Tha End Overall Marv Took Thiss Hiss Punches Wass Hittin Like Hell An Ok Personal Good Wordplay And Multies...... u wanna c me traped in shackles,cuzz i know y fags attack u.. rv dis fukin "FRUiT" done had alot of dicks in his "adams-APPLE" ^^^ Lol Shit Wass Mean As Hell /V Marvjay1009 Rtf................... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Uppin for some more votes... i will return the honest favor
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uppin 4 more fukkin votes
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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
checkin dem pollz..................................
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uppin 4 more votes damm
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Uppin for some votes in here..
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dam whuts good with u muthafukkaz vote already damm
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This was feedback posted for The Black Plague
checkin this battle...............................
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Man people lets get some fuckin votes in this bitch
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uppin 4 more votes
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Man this is fuckin bullshit aint nobody votin in here... been up over a week and we got 2 votes... damn
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Voted For: The Black Plague
aight ima give this one to black plague cuz i felt like he got this battle by a margin, a small margin. yall both pretty much had the same style, marvjay had a few hot lines it aint a thing homes!..back up from da KiNGS THRONE!.... cuzz black u couldn't "CELL"*sell* spittin off a "RiNGTONE".. nice shit, and black plague had his moments of shine as well Ya pathetic personals are pitiful, bringin em is pointless, like piss hole contraceptives You tom cruise and this your “mission impossible”… cuz winnin is ya objective very nice line there i must say, black's structure was a lil bit off, but i felt overall he came more creative and made his verse more indepth than marvjay's. marv's was nice, had a lot of flow, but the material just wasnt matchin up to black's punches, very nice battle though, best of luck to both of you |
Voted For: The Black Plague
you got this shit hands up dawg better skill better rhymes better hits better structure good job man Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: The Black Plague
Breakdown for marv: dont waste ya time makin new songs,u been waitin 2 long!.. talk shit i bet ya block sound like "2 days be4 you was born"* Your setup contains a fake personal..ne never dropped a audio before, an I get da punch but its plain wack...u gonna be blasting him?....gat lines in a text battle is played, unoriginal, & jus plain wack u wanna c me traped in shackles,cuzz i know y fags attack u.. rv dis fukin "FRUiT" done had alot of dicks in his "adams-APPLE" Setup is blah, the punch was worded horribly & its incredibly played so chill hoe...u dont have a ill flow..ur "fake" but "Real" slow... yeah u can buy a "plastic-dick" but u'll neva get a "deal-tho".. Setup was blah, so was the punch dis bitch a neva be betta tha me F how sick dis BROaD pen is. 10 wins still dis dirty "bumm sleepin on me" like "park benches" Setup was blah again, completely pointless, punch was worded horrible an ended with a seriously played simile ya not on my level stupid dis dude jay is just servin you.... use ya writtens i'll "cum off da top" like "tupa's in convertibles" Setup was once again BLAH, punch was weak...dat wasn't really wordplay u parenthesized but nice try..still a very weak line i'll murda you so why you goin at dis kidd i do hurt dreams.... u winnin? umm no only time u'll "OWN-MJ" its dem "NEW 13'S" Setup was decent for a change, but da punch was weak as hell.....another MJ line...more played shit..damn marv it aint a thing homes!..back up from da KiNGS THRONE!.... cuzz black u couldn't "CELL"*sell* spittin off a "RiNGTONE".. Setup was complete blah again, punch was wack...u tried for wordplay again an jus came off wack my raps just torchin him punches dont land cuzz dis fags is forcin em only time u'll "DROP a single" is in "chruch" when they "pass da offerin" Setup was blah once again, I'll give u a lil credit for da punch tho..it wa ssomewhat creative..but still nothing special but for a closer its subpar Breakdown for Black: All these wins you got like shootin heroin up in ya jugular..it gets to ya head quick But ya errogance is ignorant, shows you just “hard headed” like a lead-dick Setup had a fair similie, punch was decent nothing great..an its weakened even more cuz u chose it as a opener Yea ya perfect record nice, but all ya wins came against wack lames like you Its unfair, like puttin mini-me and simon birch vs. MJ and shaq in games of 2 on 2 Setup alarmed me to what was to come next...ya setup was played..the old "u ain't battled nobody concept"...an ya punch was seriously played..everyone has done the unthinkable sports matchups theme..very played line Just look at cats you battle... proud cuz you gonna beat "the wackest MC"? We "established" you havn't got balls to beat peeps ya own caliber, cuz you losin to me* Setup was almost a good one but u worded it poorly....punch was weak..its almost a knock on yourself My punches hit like tsunamis…. Ya face was a beach I’l throw 1 to the shore Since ya moms only had ya wack ass to give me a win, I guess I owe 1 to the whore Setup was wack..everyone's on a tsunami kick since the recent events an u worded it poorly as well, the punch was played an wack as hell...a momma concept?..come on man Ya pathetic personals are pitiful, bringin em is pointless, like piss hole contraceptives You tom cruise and this your “mission impossible”… cuz winnin is ya objective I like the alliteration in ya setup..good shit, the meta wasn't bad neither...the punch was kinda corny & somewhat played but it was decent...nothing great but noticeable Dropped my verse now you foldin under the pressure, like a bad poker hand Chewed u up and spit you out…this battles like Lil Fips rap game..its over man Setup was based on a overly used, overly played concept an it was wack to boot...da punch was jus plain ass You wack, lackin skills, talent is absent..you more herbish than snoops pocket Didn’t come hard enuff got dropped like the franchise from the Houston Rockets Setup was decent...the punch couldn't be more played than it was...a franchise houston rocket line....u can't be serious? Ya fear growin like rogaine, face burnin like propaine.. But you earned it yaself Dumb idea to hit accept.. Call you kurt cobaine cuz you murdered yaself Setup opening meta "rogaine one" makes no sense & the rest of it was jus wack....the punch was decent but very basic & a bad choice of closer but a decent line Overall: Both dropped shitty verses...neither really had much of nothing...voting for the winner in this on was tough cuz there really wasn't much to go on. Flow: Marv Structure: Marv Punches: Black Personals: Tie Metas: Black Vocab: Black Creativity: Black Vote: Black |
Uppin again 1 more vote in this bitch...
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Voted For: The Black Plague
haha...aight...this was an aight battle..both of you droped some good shit...well some better than the other...both of you had good vocab and flow...the structures were a little bit off tho...and some lines on both were streched...black plauge came harder with the punches and personals tho...his were just way more better...and even flowed throughout...so my vote goes to black because it was just on a different level of skioll.... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
sorri black but u had a couple unexplained votes and i did have lethal lunatics alias on my blacklist...
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^^ Then Korda's vote should be removed, feedback didn't break down verses at all
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Uppin this again... lets get this shit closed for good...
Drop links and i will return honest votes |
Man what the fuck? Vote in this shit
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
this battle was kinda weak. not too good to me... i think marv came out with tha win, cuase he came with more creativitie, and his structure was better. i think he had harder punches that landed in tha right areas, and his wordplay was also better. OVERALL, u had a good verse, i was feelin it for tha most part, but i still think u should elevate more, cause ur punches didnt land as hard as they shouldve TBP-u had a nice verse, but i think most of ur barz were kinda played. not too much creativitie. and ur structure was fucked up, cause u had increadiblyyyy stretched lines. but u had some good shit. u tried to fit too much in one bar, and i think u should learn how to extend ur punches, without makin ur lines stretched. elevate on that. but overall, u had a nice verse, but i think u had too many mistakes to get my vote. NO HATE THO. overall-i wasnt really feelin this battle. i seen better from both of yall...real talk. TBP, i was suprised when i read ur verse, cause i never seen u come with so many stretched lines. marv, i was also suprised when i read ur verse, cause i never seen u come with so many wack punches....but whatever. everybody can elevate, NO HATE... PLZ RETURN THA FAVOR, CAUSE I TOOK THA TIME OUT TO VOTE ON YALL BATTLE. AND PLZ MAKE IT EXPLAINED, CAUSE I WAS HONEST WITH THIS ONE, AND I EXPLAINED IT THOUROUGHLY.... GOOD BATTLE. NO HATE...take all tha negative and positive feedback, and elevate.... ~1~ |
hey...RTF PLZ....THA BATTLE AGAINST CJ......THAT NEEDS TO BE CLOSED QUICK.....
THANX |
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Uppin again god damn at least we got 1 vote
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Voted For: The Black Plague
Black Plague~your flow is good here, structure,but some of your lines are a little stretched, your opener was great,good wordplay.."hard heade like a lead dick", good bar...and personal on his other battle with wackestmc, i liked your vocabulary in this verse,one of your best lines was the tsunami line,"ya face was beach,i'll throw one to the shore","since ya moms only had wack ass to give me the win,i guess i owe one to the whore",THIS WAS YOUR BEST., well written, i also liked how you used names of celebs in your punches, very creative lines and effective bar with the tom cruise, mission impossible line..lol@the houston rockets line, your closing bar started off strong, but i think kurt cobain lines are played, but overall strong verse....good job. marv~your opener wasn't that strong here, try to use words instead of abbreviations, to fit it all in, it seemed like you struggled, watch the spelling too, lol@the "fruit" done had a lot of dicks in his adams apple", dope bar there, nice wordplay with "BrOad pen is", i liked your closing bar, you had some good wordplay, but i dont think your verse was as effective as Black's..i just thought he had better punches....overall tight battle both..1 |
uppin 4 some more votes
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
u wanna c me traped in shackles,cuzz i know y fags attack u.. rv dis fukin "FRUiT" done had alot of dicks in his "adams-APPLE" i'll murda you so why you goin at dis kidd i do hurt dreams.... u winnin? umm no only time u'll "OWN-MJ" its dem "NEW 13'S" vs. nothing Marv won. Easily. Black your shit was mad stretched and lacked punches. Everything was either non-existant or supremely weak. Marv has a vet-ish skill level but they style of a fuckin newbie. Switch that up and let 's die with July yo. Both can elevate on complexity and strength in punches. But at least I didn't throw up reading this. :) v-marv |
aigh uppin 4 more votes
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Damn socrates sounds like a hate vote... unexplained too didn't say nothin about my verse
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Uppin god damn vote people i will return the favor when the battles closed
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