Flamin Barz vs Armada Da 187
 

Battle Rules:

10-15 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-16-05 at 03:32 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Armada Da 187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-15-05 03:33 PM.

Flamin Barz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-15-05 03:34 PM.

Yo My rhymes leave you lost like Jason in the Labrynth
Enforce harsh laws cuz Armada is da Da captain
Blow ya knee out, now u down beggin
Nex time anyone sees itll be the war of Armeagedon**
Flamin? maybe so but Armadas got the water
smother you out faster then Kane did his brother

Ya take a 2nd glance, once u walk past me
wonderin what Im up to like you a supersticious Nazi
you a scary ass nigga who aint goin blast
when... I see you.... nigga I Laugh,
cuz cant none of ya'll niggaz whoop my ass

When Armada be down cats keep it on the Low Low
Flamin be the Jew n Armada be the Gastapo
Murderin Peeps like him every day yea thas rite
got ya hidin at ya moms, only comin out at night

G'luck man les have sum fun

"c-bo, i really don't want to battle you" - so are you beggin?-
i'll just destroy you with 'paintbrushes' - like 'arts' a weapon-
Kid your plain and stupid - this flake just makes excuses-
if your from the pits of hell tell me what deoderant satan use's-
watch me rape this nuscence - you cant frighten my perfection-
kids aint even afraid of the dark - since the night light was invented-
i fight with a vengence - then write and then figure your bold-
ur sentences are so long they need help - u should consider parole-
puttin shit check - ur pussy ass rhymes are inheritable threats-
so u must feel like ur 'losin for the right thing' - like 'charitable bets'-
all ya verses complete garbage so strobe can take it to the trash can-
ur gettin bashed fan - leave u longen for victory like a cripple for a last stand-

Voted For: Flamin Barz

Voted: Flamin Barz
reason: armada have used pieces of fuck dre, and what do we see on top, your own rules, no BITING! (from lil C style)

now, can you both vote on my battle,http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=171615
I need votes too (and armada, promise me you will be a good boy from now on, and don't bite anymore)

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man this battle is streung out like 4 weeks n only 1 vote phewwww lol good verse Flamin

yea, we need votes here - uppin this shit again----

Voted For: Flamin Barz

okay flaming bars had the structure flow punchline let me tell you this in one word everything and what did armada had this nazi shit come on armada get your rhymes straight cuz you gonna lose every time you dont now as you figured my vote is for flamin barz you would know that if you are smart enough

Voted For: Armada Da 187

weak battle ya openers didn't even rhyme
i give it to u cuz falmen barz had da wackest linez i eva heard
this line below is da gayest thing i eva heard flamen barz log off an don't log bac on
Kid your plain and stupid - this flake just makes excuses-
if your from the pits of hell tell me what deoderant satan use's-

ahhh if u check bitched slapped forums u will see shorty n we r beefin so he hate votin so...... I would like to see his vote DQed, its only the right thing to do yano

Voted For: Flamin Barz

armada had a nice verse, but ur structure was terrible, and i think thats whats did it for you. if ur structure was a lil better, u prolly wouldve took it. also, i didnt think ur rhymes were hard enough. ur punches were kinda soft, and i think u should elevate in that. and learn how to be more original in battles. voters like readin new stuff.
flamin barz-i think u took this one with better structure and harder multies. ur multies really tied tha ribbon in this one. u also had some hard punches that i felt landed in tha right places at tha right time. u can consistent in this one also, how u started out nice, and ended nice. and stayed focusin on ur oponent. u never fell off in this one, andd i feel ur verse was flawless. but i think u should work on ur mettaphores. u got tha multies, structure,punches, and rhyming, now if u can master mettas, u will be a real dope head l8r on...so elevate on that fam...
overall-i think this was a good battle, but not exactly perfect. i told yall what yall did good, and what yall should elevate on, just take that, and better urselves...

and plz return tha favor on tha battle link in siga against Countree Jay. that really needs votes, and plz explain ur vote. i enjoyed reading these verse, and would hate to not vote on none of yall's stuff no more because yall dont RTF

Keep elevating, and practicin...NO HATE...good battle


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This was feedback posted for Flamin Barz
 

checkin pollz.......................................

Voted For: Flamin Barz

flamin barz won this battle pretty easily.
structure=flamin barz
flow=flamin barz
punches=flamin barz
vocab=flamin barz def
i was really feelin flamin barz verse alot more. he just came alto harder than armada in thi sbattle. he aint have any hot punches or really good multies to win me over. work on ya structure too armada
RTF RTF
holla back at me
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174350
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174654

Voted For: Flamin Barz

yo this was a weak battle but i'm gonna go with flamin barz because Armada's verse was stupid he was talkin about himself too much. the whole battle was overal weak. ya'll need to elevate