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Spektikul vs Death
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Crew Battle: Twizted Government Vs. The Establishment 6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-18-05 at 06:06 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Death has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-15-05 06:12 PM.
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Spektikul has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-18-05 03:49 AM.
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This crew has gone to your head, too much governments got you twisted They dont even think your dope, the bottoms where youll remain listed I Insisted to battle better, saw the letters in your name re-arranged Before you had to battle me you called yourself Life, then it changed Fuck a K.O., I'll lay in the middle of the ring, and wait for the pin What yall dont know is he mailed me his sig,as a bribe to let him win Its funny how you try an diss...cause all of your punches always miss Whats it like having the touch of death...when you go and take a piss I thought you had some real talent dawg, but so much for all the hype Youll never get a chick, because even your'keyboard' aint your 'type' Your just an absurd-computer nerd herb,who is workin for minimum wage Can't bring death to me on a page, Only possibility would be old age Your rage has got you steamed, and the warmth has got you turning red After this battle youll be left just like your crew soon enough..dead I heard he tried to spit audio, but death's breath was left screaming Your so self - glorified, if you continue your name will lose meaning Your lyrics might be deadly... but your conceidedness eats at my hate I'll hold a mirror in you face, so you can visually realize your fate Only half of my skills were used,yet I still managed to destroy death Whats the point in dropping,do everyone a favour and save your breath |
sorry yall...I used the wrong color. whutevs, its dope...
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^^^^funny guy(not really)
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yo lets do this shit.
i fry niggas from coast to coast, your ass is toast im a pimp, easily have your mother open her legs wider than a field goal post yo dog your name sounds like a fucking cartoon rejection that thing you see poking out my jeans aint a erection the only thing you spreading is AIDS and you need to stop it* you aint shit, just a proud member of the STD clinic** you a bitch,ill slap you and keep you in check your names right, compared to me you are just a Spek*** your sig's right you are one of a kind cuz your in a gender all by yourself ill leave the weak closing lines for you to use,to your bitch ass, a loss i just dealt *'s 1.His signature says Spreading the Vibe 2.His signature says Proud member of the Establishment 3.His name |
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This was feedback posted for Spektikul
shouldn't of u sed a fuckin grey text nigga.... hahaha jus playing.........checkin the polls you fuckin killed him though mayne...good drop......
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LMAO @ this kat...gl tho...uppin...
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This was feedback posted for Spektikul
checkin the fuckin polllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Voted For: Death
I felt death more on this battle he came harder I believe and his strucutre and flow was iight. opener-closure goes to death multis go to death vocab was a tie, personels went to death and overall it was all death. No hate just a vote and plz return a vote peace. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^ unexplained izzle...........plus that dudes beefing with people in our crew....aka marv
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Voted For: Spektikul
Voted: Spektiful the opening from death was gangsta in a way everyone who has nothing to talk about. Death almost didn't have wordplay or punchlines, just some allround shit you can use on anyone. Spektiful did hsve punchlines, and wordplay. However Death had multies, Spektiful didn't (well, listed and twisted maybe) But with multies you don't win a batle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Spektikul
Spektikul Could hardly read your drop, from the way you put it in gray and shit, but anyway. Nice drop though, punches were on point, some of them were kinda blah though, but out of the whole drop they landed. Vocab was nice, structure was good too, even though you centered it up, it was still good, and the flow was aight too, but overall you had a nice drop man, decent wp's in there also... Death Your drop wasn't really the thing I was alooking for into this battle. Your structure needs improving though, because, shit, dont add the //'s and don't space out your lines too, just makes it look gay. But overall your punches were decent, not really hardhitting though, but decent. Overall just elevate more on your punches and add a little persona's in there too No hate to Both... Return Tha Favor Spek http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=171164 |
Voted For: Spektikul
Opener - Spektikul.......personal....harder. Closer - eh..neither...both..weak. Punches - Spektikul.....easily. Personals - Spektikul.. Metas - Spektikul. Multies - eh...not...much. Structure - Spektikul....consistent. Vocab - Spektikul..easily. Creativity - Spektikul...slightly. Death=played....that...AIDS..line...blah. one-sided. v/Spektikul |
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^Return tha favor Spek..................
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Voted For: Spektikul
v/ Spek at ease, i voted spek for obvious reasons. death was none of the above: dope, ill, decent, comprehendable, mediocre, original, expressive, above average, or defying. but thats what this site is for, to elevate, and your off to a good start. not trying to hate, just consider this positive critism. spek: didnt have to come as hard as you did. but ya didnt wanna fall short, so nice drop, nice personals, nice multis, nothing negative to say about this besides " challenge someone thats a bit closer to your rank. equality is good, plus those kinda battles earn you respect. not to mention mad d/r. anyways. congrats, you got my vote. peace, dont return the favor...thats not why i vote. |
Voted For: Spektikul
Spek Took Thiss Otha Kid Had Stretched Bars And His Lines Wass 2 Simple... Openor=Spek,Good Punch Vokab And Personal Strukture=Spek,Otha Kids Verse Wass Stretched Vokab=Spel,Had Decent Vokab Punches=Spek,Hard Hittin Punches Personals=Tie Both Had Personals Wordplay=Umm None Really Closer=Spek,Damn Tha Death Ya Shit Wass Wack.. Spek Came Harder With Tha Punches Vokab And Personals, Death Fix Ya Strukture Have Some Harder Punches /V Spektikul................. |
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hahaha ^^ thanks to whom ever that is. Just looking at how the votes are rolling in.
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Voted For: Spektikul
spektikul won this battle pretty easily. Death's verse was pretty juvenile n plus he didnt spit enuff bars really. he should've done more wit unlimited lines cuz u never know how much the other guy is gonna do. but alsospek's punches were more creative n hit harder. structure was good for both. spek took the opener n closers. get at me http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=172972 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=173384 |
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