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parasite 01-15-05 06:09 PM

Mier vs Death
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-18-05 at 06:09 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 01-15-05 06:09 PM

Death has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-15-05 06:09 PM.

parasite 01-15-05 07:01 PM

after i fry your ass everyone will be saying Mier who?/
nobody got your back, your shadows the only thing rolling with you/

yo kid,to spit your verse and lose your running out of time/
only time i aknowledge your presence is when your thread is next to mine/

dude aint got a dick but he love that ding-a-ling/
im still hot when its 20 below freezing/

you cant spit tight shit, you aint able/
your flow is as unstable as a three legged table/

my rhymes are a promise,not a threat, i show no regret/
all this hardcore shit you talking, you just faking it/

yo we need a bodybag over here,some bitch died/
cuz this has just been a lyrical homicide/

System 01-15-05 08:23 PM

Mier has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-15-05 08:23 PM.

Mier 01-15-05 08:39 PM

looks like rv killed all good ppl, and have faggots left
your wackness is the reason we dont wanna witness death
the message in the quick reply, has to apply to you
not cuz ur dumb...cuz nobody wants to read a verse from you
ur ugly as hell...you wonder why no one wants to be em
your lyrics are deadly...but thats not why we dont like to read em
you dont get, you dont kno how much of a fag you are
unlimited lines? no limits to how wack you are
u cant beat me. and you have no life , thats just the deal my friend
that shows you why in life...death always comes at the end

Mier 01-15-05 09:38 PM

iight man....can we get some votes in here plz........

Mier 01-16-05 06:19 PM

uppin 4 some votes man.............................

parasite 01-17-05 01:40 PM

easy ass win.upping for votes.............

MC IgGY 01-17-05 02:31 PM

Voted For: Death

winner-death
finisher-death
flow-tie
multi-death

after i fry your ass everyone will be saying Mier who?/
nobody got your back, your shadows the only thing rolling with you/

nice punch,

yo kid,to spit your verse and lose your running out of time/
only time i aknowledge your presence is when your thread is next to mine/

hot punch, good flow so far

dude aint got a dick but he love that ding-a-ling/
im still hot when its 20 below freezing/
this was aight,

you cant spit tight shit, you aint able/
your flow is as unstable as a three legged table/

nice inner rhyming, punch was nice too


my rhymes are a promise,not a threat, i show no regret/
all this hardcore shit you talking, you just faking it/

inner rhyming was there, punch was pretty good

yo we need a bodybag over here,some bitch died/
cuz this has just been a lyrical homicide/

nice finisher, good verse overall


Mier

looks like rv killed all good ppl, and have faggots left
your wackness is the reason we dont wanna witness death

pretty nice, not too strong though

the message in the quick reply, has to apply to you
not cuz ur dumb...cuz nobody wants to read a verse from you

a little inner rhyming, punch wasnt too strong

ur ugly as hell...you wonder why no one wants to be em
your lyrics are deadly...but thats not why we dont like to read em

haha good punch, liked this one


you dont get, you dont kno how much of a fag you are
unlimited lines? no limits to how wack you are

this one was ok, not too good

u cant beat me. and you have no life , thats just the deal my friend
that shows you why in life...death always comes at the end

pretty good finisher,

MC IgGY 01-17-05 02:32 PM

can yall please return the favor but only fair votes plz

parasite 01-17-05 02:41 PM

thanks.upping..................

....Gone.... 01-17-05 03:47 PM

Voted For: Death

Death- Weak punches played out homie. Flow was good. You had a wordplay in there. Punches on the otherhand was basic and weak, elevate homie.



mier- You punches was played and basic too. Weak punches, didnt have no effect at all. Flow was pretty good, but still the punches was weak and basic.Elevate.




overall=This is an weak battle,nothing special. Both heads needs to elevate on Punches and using personals.The person with the most effect punches but still basic needs elevation, is death. His punches had an little effect, but still needs to elevate. Mier on the otherhand, his punches didnt have no effect, plain wack and basic.

Peace.

parasite 01-17-05 03:52 PM

upping...........

Mier 01-17-05 07:58 PM

wow man his closer wasnt even a punch how can my lines be played when all of them were talkin about him dude i hope this is not wut dis site is about dickridin man

uppin

Ike 01-17-05 08:38 PM

Voted For: Mier

Mier.......
looks like rv killed all good ppl, and have faggots left
your wackness is the reason we dont wanna witness death
decent opener...could have been worded better though...

the message in the quick reply, has to apply to you
not cuz ur dumb...cuz nobody wants to read a verse from you
pretty good punch here......hit good

ur ugly as hell...you wonder why no one wants to be em
your lyrics are deadly...but thats not why we dont like to read em
ehh ok.....nothin more than an average bar....

you dont get, you dont kno how much of a fag you are
unlimited lines? no limits to how wack you are
decent 2nd line....didnt like the set up line....but 2nd line hit very well

u cant beat me. and you have no life , thats just the deal my friend
that shows you why in life...death always comes at the end
decent closer....


Death...............
after i fry your ass everyone will be saying Mier who?/
nobody got your back, your shadows the only thing rolling with you/
not good....gotta open w/ something better than this

yo kid,to spit your verse and lose your running out of time/
only time i aknowledge your presence is when your thread is next to mine/
no......played out

dude aint got a dick but he love that ding-a-ling/
im still hot when its 20 below freezing/
self glory...no point to this bar

you cant spit tight shit, you aint able/
your flow is as unstable as a three legged table/
ok......average bar......

my rhymes are a promise,not a threat, i show no regret/
all this hardcore shit you talking, you just faking it/
hmm decent.....

yo we need a bodybag over here,some bitch died/
cuz this has just been a lyrical homicide/
not a good closer


overall......
mier got this easily....punches hit harder....he was more consistent through his verse......i wasnt feelin deaths verse at all.....he came with self glory and played out concepts.....couple of "OK" bars....and thats being nice.......no hate...just what i thought of the battle....

Ike 01-17-05 08:39 PM

lol @ death winning this battle......hahahahahahaha.....jesus people need to learn how to vote

ChaoticStealth 01-17-05 08:48 PM

Voted For: Death

starter:death
flow:mier
punches:death
closer:tied
overall enjoyable:death

Death just came a lil harder with the punches and I liked his setup more, good battle though

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

parasite 01-18-05 04:59 PM

upping for votes................

parasite 01-20-05 12:50 PM

upping for votes......................................

Mier 01-20-05 06:09 PM

uppin.............................................

parasite 01-21-05 06:37 PM

upping..................

Mier 01-22-05 04:44 PM

uppin 4 sum votes............................................. .

Mier 01-22-05 09:55 PM

uppin............................................. ..

parasite 01-23-05 12:08 PM

upping..............

DeE Block 01-23-05 04:11 PM

Voted For: Mier

i give mier dis vote
bcuz he had betta punchez n flow
death ahd betta structure but the line that took dis match was

looks like rv killed all good ppl, and have faggots left
your wackness is the reason we dont wanna witness death

dat wuz a good opener

DeE Block 01-23-05 04:12 PM

o yea return da favor man iight no hate dawg iight peace

gotaasswhoopin4u 01-24-05 02:30 AM

This was feedback posted for Mier
 
n000000000000000000000000bs....................... ...................

Mier 01-25-05 07:30 PM

.................................................. ...............................uppin 4 votes

Dex 01-25-05 07:33 PM

This was feedback posted for Death
 
you cant spit tight shit, you aint able/
your flow is as unstable as a three legged table/ -Dope line! Good drop homeboy. Ya doing well

~Da_Illest~ 01-25-05 11:35 PM

Voted For: Death

i like diz battle but i have 2 say death killed it literally:
opena: death
punches: death
personals: mier
structure: death
multis: death
closa: death
death won my vote 4 da simple fact he came harder in da battle

Mier 01-30-05 10:50 PM

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*Phantom* 02-05-05 01:34 PM

This was feedback posted for Death
 
checkin pollz....................

Da_Throwdest 02-19-05 11:18 PM

Voted For: Death

this was an 1-sided battle all the way out:
opener: parasite
vocab: para
structure: mier
multis: both
closer: para
para just came harder & hit wit more punches in this battle then mier; also no hating but mier u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes more
make sure 2 return the favor

L. Veracity 02-22-05 03:42 PM

Voted For: Death

MIER this wasn't good for you, not at all...you had no good punchez and your rhyme scheme was madd simple...you beat around the bush too much...you could've done so much with him having a name like "parasite" but you B.S.'d...work on your punchez duke...

Parasite, you should've switched your 1st and 2nd "line" of the 1st "bar" around that would've made the opener better but it's still good and so is the 2nd part of the 2nd bar...3rd bar you were talkin' about you, the battle's about the other person so try and cut back on that...nyce try on the multies, but you gotta throw some internal rhyme in to make it a REAL bar of multies...pretty good closer though kyd...

VOTE: Parasite

(give feed on a battle of mine, I got like 3 up now)


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