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MaRVJay1009 vs Assas-Sin
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Crew Battle: Twizted Government Vs. The Establishment 6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-18-05 at 06:11 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
check in fam...
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Assas-Sin has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-16-05 03:15 PM.
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Assas-Sin has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-16-05 03:17 PM.
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Damn,you like micheal jackson?Cuz i see you like to mock
Why are ya protective when it comes to guys cocks? I'll nok ya with da 9 and then pick up da 5th!And show ya 9-5 Me winning over you will only take one shot like GoldenEye Fuck fam?You got 10 wins will its stoppin right there After you see this..You're gonna be like a 8yr old sayin "This isnt fair" Come on you from da Queens?Well i see why cuz ya surely aint a King I just saw ya "Ass" walking out of a gayclub.Maybe youre a Drag Queen? LOL,Yo all the ASS lines have been said!Go refer to the 2 line with ya friend Since sayin ASS is ya only answer to were ya like that cock stuck in ^^And idont get any ideas!Cuz my answer is no faggot When it comes to girls?You like Nelly's line"I cant take it" Me merking you isnt unusual to any of ya family members Look my verse is a saw and he's the family tree~"TIMBER" Im fucking up ya whole family since ya the weakest in the Brady bunch I'll cut ya in squares and stuff ya in a box like Captain'Crunch Man!Im murdering this kid from limb to limb All those fake personals ya say! Will get ya face smash in sorta like Jin What the fuck yall establishing?I clan of herbish fags 5bucks say ya whole crew is gay?Since when it comes to pussy all of yall gag |
MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-16-05 08:35 PM.
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look...
dont go at marv STOP im 2 gutta,plus i'll POP a few brotha... dat a change ya "lifestyle" like you koped a new "rubber".... ya crew? alot of u studdar,stop tellin ppl u gota blue hummer damm sin yo ass "Lie"*lye* more than ya "prostitute mother".. i spit crack u feens is lovin...and fam my team is thuggin it... afta dis u gon do like "collen powell" & "leave da government"* been here 4 a minute fam rap like u been spittin 4 some weeks 5 teams in ya past dis "CREW-HOPER" got blister's on his feet. ya 6-2 dogg da 6th gonna be ya last win,ppl of rv i asked him da kill his self..then said "i'll pay him" since he's an "assassin" shit i'll b movin thru ya state...talk shit put ruga's 2 ya face... ya moms was gon name u "whiteout" cuzz u was a "mistake".. wait..dude talk shit about marvjay suppose he could die... but sin "ODD"*i'd* kill ya punk ass you wont "EVEN" try... fam stop it really...u 14 dat aint even enuff da kop a philly... ya head is "TU-BiG" sin u'll neva be da next "PaC OR BiGGiE".** so get off my dick fagget i got DiFFERENT TEXT Da ORDER... while im in a benz you'll be in a "iNTERNET-EXPLORER".....lol nuff said.. explanations.... *his crew is da government..and collin powell is leavin da government.. **i said TU-BIG u'll neva b da next PAC OR BIGGIE..u'll get it* |
This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
checkin . . . .. . .. . .. .
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Uppin 4 Some More Votes
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
was this even a battle?????????? marvs wins this easily...... marv had better personal, better punches, better wordplay, better structure, better multis......... i felt that marvs punches hit harder....assassin had a couple decent punches....but the good ones were few and far between whereas marv had atleast a decent punch every bar........marvs personals hit harder...there werent a whole lot of personals in this battle....but marvs were better.....wordplay....definitely marv....he had some pretty decent wordplay all through his verse...whereas assassin didnt.........overall this was a 1 sided battle.....marvs verse was just on a whole different level......please return the favor marv....link in sig |
good verse fam....i think you got dis one...nice job homeboi
still uppinthiz famz |
aight goodlookin uppin
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This was feedback posted for Assas-Sin
Cant choose............................................
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so y would you freepost??????
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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
you took this with ease.... nice job mayne :thumbup:
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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
checkin polls for my homie..hes in my crew.........uppin it too
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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
checkin the muthafucking polls............................................. ..
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uppin 4 some more votes ppl
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uppin 4 more votes
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This was feedback posted for Assas-Sin
checking polls and upin your guys shit.............................................. ...................
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uppin 4 more votes
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uppin stop sleepin ppl and yo 3 votes is a tko fukk dat
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Voted For: Assas-Sin
checkin dem pollz.................................. |
dang i didnt mean to vote i meant to leave feedback so pm strobe w/e u do
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
WHOA WHOA WHOA marv got this hands down assassin ur shyt was pretty dope. but the first line. was mad played. MJ and mic lines are gettin played. the rest was decent. your best line was Come on you from da Queens?Well i see why cuz ya surely aint a King I just saw ya "Ass" walking out of a gayclub.Maybe youre a Drag Queen? Your structure and flow really killed the verse though 7.3/10 Marv Dope structure and flow. this shit was fire dawg. you're doin the damn thang now. your punches hit em hard. haha at the closer FIRE and good multi's best line: so get off my dick fagget i got DiFFERENT TEXT Da ORDER... while im in a benz you'll be in a "iNTERNET-EXPLORER".....lol no errors in this wun. a few filler lines but rest was fire 8/10 vote: marv return da fav ya'll http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173032 |
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wow yo why did u check da polls in every wun of my battles...damm fukkin vote u not in my crew we not friends so u dont need da be checkin my shit |
uppin 4 more fukkin votes stop sleepin niggaz
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uppin 4 more fukkin votes ppl...yo ass y u not uppin dis shit fam
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uppin 4 more vote yo ass u a real bitch fam
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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
*definition:
humdrum=something that makes no sense. (look it up) [ill let you know if i see any other words your too dumb to know the meanings of] |
shut da fukk up i neva said i didn't know whut it meant u just abused umm word fam step ya rap game up 4real and u scared da battle me lol
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
Im fucking up ya whole family since ya the weakest in the Brady bunch I'll cut ya in squares and stuff ya in a box like Captain'Crunch Man!Im murdering this kid from limb to limb All those fake personals ya say! Will get ya face smash in sorta like Jin vs. dont go at marv STOP im 2 gutta,plus i'll POP a few brotha... dat a change ya "lifestyle" like you koped a new "rubber".... i spit crack u feens is lovin...and fam my team is thuggin it... afta dis u gon do like "collen powell" & "leave da government"* shit i'll b movin thru ya state...talk shit put ruga's 2 ya face... ya moms was gon name u "whiteout" cuzz u was a "mistake".. so get off my dick fagget i got DiFFERENT TEXT Da ORDER... while im in a benz you'll be in a "iNTERNET-EXPLORER".....lol I only put the last line in there cuz it was type funny...but yeh, you had more lines I like, so v/Marv Can yall hit up my battle vs. phive? thanks, yo. |
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
MaRVJay - flowed nicely, good vocab (coulda been betta), i liked ya punches p the colin powell line was hott Assas-sin - good flow, vocab was iight, had some good punche... i was feelin marvjay more so he gets my vote... return tha favor |
yeah w.e...i tryed to drop something dope as yours marv...will im uppin dis for you so you can get a win..sry for not uppin it earlier...much love fam...~1~
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Yeh, can you go vote on my battle now? He dropped ass. I want it close already...VOTE, yo!
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im not even thta mad at thiz cuz i've only been here for only 1 month and he's been here clearly longer than me....
but you best ta know ima come back atcha homeboi lata down da line...so till den ~1~ |
umm okay fam do dat its nothin about bein on a site longer than u its about ya rap skillz unless u just started rappin when u came on dis site if so datz not good
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uppin 4 1 more fukkin vote damm..................................
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
damn interesting battle i enjoyed it: opena: marvjay punches: marv personals: assas-sin structure: marv multis: marv closa: marv da win goes 2 marv-jay 4 da simple fact he came harder & assas-sin u did ok but u need 2 elevate ur rhymes more when u do u'll have my vote |
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