Marvelis vs A.K.A.
 

Battle Rules:

1-2 minutes
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-19-05 at 11:43 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

upin when is da due date i need to know

Marvelis has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-17-05 12:03 AM.

A.K.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-17-05 12:15 AM.

soundclick uploading my verse right now so i'll have it up soon

ok i got it............................................

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/jerseydevilsmusic.htm
the only one on there. it's kinda low so turn the speakers up

dude you need help or something? where you at?????

yo i did my shit www.soundclick.com/themarvel

time for people to vote

yeah thats wha;s up let get some votes. dude i heard you verse and all i could hear was you saying your name

Voted For: A.K.A.

aight.... u can tell this was both yalls first audio battle but not bad... heres my break down:

Marv... it sounded just like u were reading it straight off the page brotha... get that shit memorized and just spit it man... that hurt ya flow.. the sound quality was good... punches and personals were pretty good but could have been better... vocab aight but like i said. ya biggest problem was flow and mic presance, it sounded like u were tryin to be quiet... beat was aight.... 4/10

AKA- what.....? cant hear you.... goddamn i had to turn my shit WAAAAAAAY up... but once i was able to hear it your flow was touchy but it was ok, work on that and your mic presance... punches and personals won this for you... they were pretty dope... good vocab and shit too... good beat just up on the sound quality and the mic presance and youll get there

no hate to either of you... good battle

VOTE- AKA

Voted For: Marvelis

marvlis..................this was the fucking sorriest battle ever....you both suck...but you win becuase his shit is longer than 2 min....so tell strobe to dq...this battle

Voted For: Marvelis

Look this shit is easy as hell to vote on seriously..

A.K.A.. That was wack as hell..
1. Up the volume.
2. Learn some mic control.
3. Actually rap, dont just read your lyrics quietly..
4. Write some better lyrics..

If you cant do this shit, then stick to text straight up.. It sounds like your parents dont know you rap so your trying to be quiet or some shit.. Seriously, its wack..

Marvelis- Ya shit wasnt amazing, vocals were pretty good, but I aint into that slow flow you got goin man it made you fall off the beat at times.. Kinda makes you sound docile n shit.. Lyrics wernt anythin amazin either, but work on ya punches n shit and youll have it down.

Shit should be enough to get you a KO this time anyway..

Voted For: A.K.A.

lmao....... ima vote like Marvelis...... AKA got this...... altho u need turn ur shit up.... ur first three bars killed his wholel thing...

ehh NOstra...... i finally got his shit louder, and his punches were like touches of god compared to marvelis's shit........ but u got ur opinion.... but yea, they both sounded kinda like they were readin.... cuz Marvelis had that slow ass flow that made it seem like he was sittint their freein, thinkin of shit to say

uppin ^^^^^^^^ and sorry to my fans that it was so low

This was feedback posted for Marvelis
 

checkin the pollz.................................

ok i need 3 more vots to win come on people

upping............................................

same here yo................................................ .......................

Voted For: A.K.A.

OK TRUTHFULL YOUR BOTH WACK AS FUCK BUT HERE GOES MARV GOOD VOICE VOCAB WAS WEAK AS FUCK AS WERE PERSONALS NO PUNCHES EXISTED IN IT FLOW WAS OK YOU SAID YOU NAME MADD TIMES WHICH IS ANNOYING AS FUCK THIS WAS JUST MEGA WEAK 2/10
AKA GOOD VOICE ALSO FLOW WAS OFF DECENT PUNCHES AND PERSONALS WON YOU THIS QUALITY WAS HORRIBLE HERE 3/10

Voted For: A.K.A.

i give a.k.a dis one he had betta flow n punches
marvelis had betta multis
ma vote went 2 a.k.a

yo return a favor man at da link iight no hate man

This was feedback posted for A.K.A.
 

checkin da polls...................................

upping for 1 more vote.....................................

this is fucked up man u got u boyz to vote for u me shit is batter then ur

Voted For: A.K.A.

nice drop bewteen you 2 here

AKA:
you had a nice drop, the beat was pretty nice, and you had the flow to it, overall you had some nice rhymes, and some of the punches were aight, but overall you had a nice drop

Marv:
your shit was good to, nice beat, the flow on ur drop was aight, punches were there, but some weren't but overall u had a good drop too, but i thought you didn't come as hard as AKA did though, but NO HATE BOTH