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MaRVJay1009 vs 50hater_killer
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10-16 lines... No Crew or hate Votes No Recycling No Biting opener- structure- punchlines- creativity- multis- wordplay- personals- finisher- enjoyed- ^^^^datz how u vote ppl just copy n paste da shit 2 vote...other wise da shit aint gon count check in fam if u decline dis ur a bitch...reason i set dis up is cuzz u be hatin so lets go Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 01-18-05 at 10:45 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
50hater_killer has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-17-05 10:54 PM.
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MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-17-05 10:59 PM.
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Only person I see here tryin to rhyme is you,
for I am not hatin but everyone is hating jew! I see u have to show how to vote, for ur ass does not know what a parade uses as a float, my words might be overplayed, but I think me and my boys took ur mom who is overplayed, did I tell you that she enjoys the cock, witch she told me that she would love to rock! So I am threw with this shit, for iam done with u for my lyrics have bit JEW! reminder he comes from queens of spades witch from where he gave is slutty girl friend AIDS |
look...
dis gon be a easy nun of da bars from dis herb personaL fam how girls merkin u? matter fact u got koed by girlmerkinu ya flow aint gon get u shit mines gon get me papah.... i get it now u rap like "Ja-RULE" datz y call ya self "50 hater" but really quit rap fam cuzz ya shit is gettin me nauses.. nigga ya overall record on dis site is 7 WiNS & 17 LOSSES* u could hate marv shit...but afta i spray large clipps... ........i dont mean "WORKiN LaTE" u'll get put in da dirt so fast it'll make da "graveyard-SHiFT" dont try rap like me...bitch your da only fukkin fag i see i'll give ya "LiP-TEN" then they'll put u in a "bag like tea"** u not ruthless just dumb,so whut u be in da booth wit ya gun u'll only aim in da air like "steve nash" you "shoot 4 da sun" nuff said..... first bar...click da link he got killed by a girl name girlmerkinu third bar..his overrall record is 7-17 cuzz he had another name which was kkk hater |
upppin dis shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppppppin dis shit for this pussy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
opener-Marv,Good Personal structure-50th,Marv Ya Shit Wass Kinda Stretched punchlines-Marv,Hiss Hit Way Harder creativity-Marv,Had Some Good Ways Of Makin His Wordplay multis-Marv Good Shit With Tha Personals wordplay-Marv Had Decent Wordplay personals-Marv,Couple Personals finisher-Marv Good Multies And Punch enjoyed-Marv,His Wass Good /V Marvjay1009........................ |
fuck marv might win this one but his pussy ass is afraid to take on cali jeez I wonder why?? I smell I smell pussy! uppin
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uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!
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upppppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnn!!!!!! !
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This was feedback posted for 50hater_killer
checkin da polls...................................
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uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin dis^^^^^^^^^^^^
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upppppppppppppppppppppin fur some votes up in here!!!
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
opener- structure- punchlines- creativity- multis- wordplay- personals- finisher- enjoyed- I ain't gon' vote with that, because you tell me to. Too bad, Marvjay did some good personals, however some parts I didn't understand. 50Hater had some good things, but too bad that part about the cock and the mother was a bit unoriginal. You can do way better |
upppppppin for some more votes peeps!^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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uppin 4 more votes and 3 is a tko
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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
Marv got this hands down...punches and personals came way harder then the 25hater...Vocab was decent both sides..flow was at a higher level then his...structure was a tie....Multis go to marv barely cuz he kept goin at the guy and da other just said sumthin waited a while and said sumthin decent again..
Mulits-Marv Vocab-Both Punches-Marv Personals-Marv Structure-Both Flow-Marv /Marvolous1009.... |
^^suppose ot bea a vote but oh well go report that to strobe so he can change it..~1~
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
alright i guess you won this battle but you need ta work on ya punctuation anyway you won with better hits,better lyrics, better flow, and better disses, all 50 had was shitty misses |
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
opener- Marve structure- Marve punchlines- Marve creativity- Marve multis- ?? wordplay- Marve -I suppose personals- Marve but close finisher- 50hater enjoyed- 50haters was a bit more enjoyable but that wasnt enough to earn the win. Marve's was too errgh. Sorry 50hater bro but your verse just wasnt on his level in this battle. Funny tho cos iv seen you do much btter. Should have came harder in this |
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By the way thats a dumb vote, it cant count |
upppin dis shti once again for some votes loosing oh well but uppin :D
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
in my opinion a bit of a one sided battle people.... 50 dont step up to someone this good next time aight... opener- marv structure- marv punchlines- marv creativity- marv multis- marv wordplay- marv personals- marv finisher- marv enjoyed- marv ok a lot of a one sided battle i feel sory for 50 becuz this looks like a d/r vote but its just becuz marv murked u in every way possible.... return the favour link in the sig.... no hate and stay up :thumbup: pz. |
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