Element vs WerdSmith
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines....
No Crew Votes.....
No Recycling.......
No Biting......
No Feeding.....
No Dick Riding....


Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 01-18-05 at 01:50 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

WerdSmith has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-18-05 01:22 PM.

Element has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-18-05 01:33 PM.

No personal's today yo, really can't be fucked...but my punch's should be enough yo..

First, id like to disperse my worst verse, an leave this faggot rattled
How do you consider yourself a Werdsmith...if you've never even battled
Too rush to the top - the mush gotta stop,or you'll neva will win nadda
My superior linguistics throw punches, that make you look like a piñata
Six lines aint enough time, to rhyme and try to make you feel neglected
With half my skill I still ripped you....just wrong battle you accepted

What was that nigga?....you dropped straight up garbage yo.

Voted For: Element

winner-element
flow-tie
mutli-element
punches-tie
finisher-werdsmith
opener-element

both finishers were good,
nice battle

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Yes I did, and that will make you look even worse after you lose.:thumbup:

This was feedback posted for Element
 

Checking the polls on this shitaki mushroom.......what?

Uppin.............

Voted For: WerdSmith

Element

First, id like to disperse my worst verse, an leave this faggot rattled
How do you consider yourself a Werdsmith...if you've never even battled
^hehe,good opener

Too rush to the top - the mush gotta stop,or you'll neva will win nadda
My superior linguistics throw punches, that make you look like a piñata
^decent one

Six lines aint enough time, to rhyme and try to make you feel neglected
With half my skill I still ripped you....just wrong battle you accepted
^okay closer

Started nice but kinda fell of towards the end and with 6 line battle, you should be able to stay consistent.Vocab and structure were good, was feelin ya flow. Some good punches in there but nothing extremly hardhitting,overall good drop though!


WerdSmith

I'd swing punch's at ya verse, but i'd be jabbing at thin air.
I'm just takin' ya for a ride...But everyone'd agree it ain't 'fair'.
^decent opener

On the building block's of life?..you still on the fuckin' mechanno.
Yeah i think ya \phat/ but just cuz ya keep it \rollin/ like tht nigga John Doe.
^nice one

Abuse my verse? Ya like claudia schiffer and napolean dynamite, ya \no match/.
But Element's punch's are played, that's why i saw the \string's attached/.
^haha,good closer

Stayed on top of it throughout the entire battle,nice wordplay that made me laugh here and there.Structure n vocab were tight and ya flow seemed okay to me. You said it yourself,no personals whatsoever but your punches were indeed nice...Solid drop!


Vote goes to WerdSmith cause he had some funny things in his verse but it was close battle though. No hate, return the favor please...

Upping this battle yall

Upping this.........

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Voted For: WerdSmith

werdsmith took this one to me, he came harder with punches i think, and he seemed more prepared. i think his structure was good, and his wordplay got it.
element-u had a good verse, and u made it a challenge. i think u came hard with punches, and u had some good personals in there. i think u should elevate and come a lil harder in ya verse, but i think this wasnt enough lines. if it was more, u wouldve won...
overall-yall got skillz, i think yall could elevate a lot, and become dope...click tha link in sig, NOK, and tryout....we wunna see yall on tha roster...yall got skillz...but i just think werdsmith came a lil harder in this one...

plz return tha favor in this one, cuase too many battles gettin slept on. tha battle link is in sig, tha one against CJ. last one...and plz xplain ur vote, cause i xplained this, and i took my time out to vote on this....


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Voted For: Element

First, id like to disperse my worst verse, an leave this faggot rattled
How do you consider yourself a Werdsmith...if you've never even battled
decent opener…punch landed
Too rush to the top - the mush gotta stop,or you'll neva will win nadda
My superior linguistics throw punches, that make you look like a piñata
decent persona…punch was aight…
Six lines aint enough time, to rhyme and try to make you feel neglected
With half my skill I still ripped you....just wrong battle you accepted
decent closer…punch was kinda weak but was aight

overall u had a decent drop..punches all the way
decent drop from you though


I'd swing punch's at ya verse, but i'd be jabbing at thin air.
I'm just takin' ya for a ride...But everyone'd agree it ain't 'fair'.
…weak opener…punch didn’t really connect
On the building block's of life?..you still on the fuckin' mechanno.
Yeah i think ya \phat/ but just cuz ya keep it \rollin/ like tht nigga John Doe.
decent punch, kinda played here…
Abuse my verse? Ya like claudia schiffer and napolean dynamite, ya \no match/.
But Element's punch's are played, that's why i saw the \string's attached/.
decent closer

overall u had a decent drop, punches were aight
flow was choppy…decent drop from you though

Voted For: Element

element........
First, id like to disperse my worst verse, an leave this faggot rattled
How do you consider yourself a Werdsmith...if you've never even battled
nice opener...good personal....hit hard...8/10

Too rush to the top - the mush gotta stop,or you'll neva will win nadda
My superior linguistics throw punches, that make you look like a piñata
lol...nice....set up line nice...good punch...7/10

Six lines aint enough time, to rhyme and try to make you feel neglected
With half my skill I still ripped you....just wrong battle you accepted
ehh decent...coulda came harder with a better closer....5/10


20/30..........


werdsmith......
I'd swing punch's at ya verse, but i'd be jabbing at thin air.
I'm just takin' ya for a ride...But everyone'd agree it ain't 'fair'.
pretty good opener here....hit ok...6/10

On the building block's of life?..you still on the fuckin' mechanno.
Yeah i think ya \phat/ but just cuz ya keep it \rollin/ like tht nigga John Doe.
ehh didnt like it....decent punch though....5/10

Abuse my verse? Ya like claudia schiffer and napolean dynamite, ya \no match/.
But Element's punch's are played, that's why i saw the \string's attached/.
nice.....hit good....good concept.....8/10


19/20.................


the fact that element came with personal prolly made the difference in the battle.....i just felt that elements punches were better....

oh yea element........return the favor PLEASE.......link in sig

Uppin..................

Voted For: Element

..u win dis easy fam

opener-ele good personal...werd decent opener but didn't hit hard

structure-ele shit was real...werd ya lines stretched 2 much

punchlines-i'd have da say ele

personals-ele.....werd didn't have nun

finisher-ele.....werd ya shit was weak fam

overall-ele takes dis cuzz he was more consistant and had a personal...

return da favor link in da sig

This was feedback posted for Element
 

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Voted For: Element

I'd swing punch's at ya verse, but i'd be jabbing at thin air.
I'm just takin' ya for a ride...But everyone'd agree it ain't 'fair'.
^^^^what????every agree it ain't fair what?
On the building block's of life?..you still on the fuckin' mechanno.
Yeah i think ya \phat/ but just cuz ya keep it \rollin/ like tht nigga John Doe.
^^^^this \ / is not needed and what dude john doe?
Abuse my verse? Ya like claudia schiffer and napolean dynamite, ya \no match/.
But Element's punch's are played, that's why i saw the \string's attached/.
^^^^one decent line

First, id like to disperse my worst verse, an leave this faggot rattled
How do you consider yourself a Werdsmith...if you've never even battled
^^^^ok if it's leading into something
Too rush to the top - the mush gotta stop,or you'll neva will win nadda
My superior linguistics throw punches, that make you look like a piñata
^^^^lol nice i liked this lolol
Six lines aint enough time, to rhyme and try to make you feel neglected
With half my skill I still ripped you....just wrong battle you accepted
^^^^nice closer and good mults
vote element