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marvjay1009 vs poetry2abeat
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6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-21-05 at 02:17 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-18-05 02:23 PM.
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poetry2abeat has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-18-05 02:24 PM.
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your hated at this site so its best you leave,
you stand up to no-one like your christopher reeves, after reading what i wrote you wished you declined, your brain in your mouth is the only way you speak your mind, couldnt spit fresh if your lyrics were minty like a tic-tak cuz the only hot bars your drop are flamable kit-kats, marvjay1009 your nothing unique, a r.v. reject, like you misplaced aritha franklin, you just lost respect, having a buddy on this site would be your ulitmate feeling, but that would be more "fuked up" than "sex on a ceiling" went easy just cuz your a herb,plus keystyled it in 10 minutes or sooner |
its easy dont need a beat da write 2 FaG,y niggaz like u brag?
nigga u couldn't make "HEaDS-LiNES" if u was a "tight durag" admit it niggaz u luv marvjay you been a fan 4 a week...... when i "CaTCH" dis 'biter' rv ima put my "HaND ON HiS TEETH" u sweet ur real candy b,u gon merk sombody? it cant be me i'll kill you and make ya punk ass "leave" ya "family tree"........ your just a net mc dogg so go head n SPiT 2 ya DELL.... u couldn't "drop a hott single" if u was "tippin a stripper in hell" i bruise lames when i let da tool aim..but fam YOU STRaNGE.. plus ya fukkin bars' "STRETCH LONGER THaN ya CREWS NaME" explanations..... first bar...when i mean HEAD LINES i mean like da news and shit and u kow how TIght DURAGS leave a line on ya head last bar...his crew is W.s.g.t.w.n.l.c.w.s.d.a.h.a.y.c.n.b.u.c.w.b.t.y.a. S.d.a.g.t.y.c.n.w.a.u.c.w.d ^^^datz they name so you'll get da last bar explain ya votes ppl |
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
poetry2abeat........ your hated at this site so its best you leave, you stand up to no-one like your christopher reeves, eehh ok opener here....hit decent.... after reading what i wrote you wished you declined, your brain in your mouth is the only way you speak your mind, nice wordplay n punch here....good bar couldnt spit fresh if your lyrics were minty like a tic-tak cuz the only hot bars your drop are flamable kit-kats, ok wordplay here.....kinda played concept though marvjay1009 your nothing unique, a r.v. reject, like you misplaced aritha franklin, you just lost respect, set up line wasnt good...2nd line was nice....hit good having a buddy on this site would be your ulitmate feeling, but that would be more "fuked up" than "sex on a ceiling" PLAYED....ive read this on this site 1000 times..... MarvJay................ its easy dont need a beat da write 2 FaG,y niggaz like u brag? nigga u couldn't make "HEaDS-LiNES" if u was a "tight durag" lol nice opener here.....hit hard admit it niggaz u luv marvjay you been a fan 4 a week...... when i "CaTCH" dis 'biter' rv ima put my "HaND ON HiS TEETH" good wordplay here.....hit decent u sweet ur real candy b,u gon merk sombody? it cant be me i'll kill you and make ya punk ass "leave" ya "family tree"........ most peeps wont get this....hit ok your just a net mc dogg so go head n SPiT 2 ya DELL.... u couldn't "drop a hott single" if u was "tippin a stripper in hell" nice all around bar here....hit hard i bruise lames when i let da tool aim..but fam YOU STRaNGE.. plus ya fukkin bars' "STRETCH LONGER THaN ya CREWS NaME" lol nice closer and personal here....set up line wasnt too great overall marvjay gets this for harder hitting punches and actually having a personal or 2 in his verse......structure was about even...wordplay was about even....just thought marvs punches hit harder.....return the favor.....PLEASE |
uppin 4 some more votes
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uppin 4 more votes yo first da 3 is a tko shit take 2 long
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This was feedback posted for poetry2abeat
checkin dem pollz...................................
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uppin 4 some fukkin votes
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Voted For: poetry2abeat
marv its easy dont need a beat da write 2 FaG,y niggaz like u brag? nigga u couldn't make "HEaDS-LiNES" if u was a "tight durag" ^^^^ wasnt the best opener,no punch.spelling mistakes made it not make sense. admit it niggaz u luv marvjay you been a fan 4 a week...... when i "CaTCH" dis 'biter' rv ima put my "HaND ON HiS TEETH" ^^^^^weak punch, not a solid rhyme.no personal. u sweet ur real candy b,u gon merk sombody? it cant be me i'll kill you and make ya punk ass "leave" ya "family tree"........ ^^ another weak punch, medium rhyme. not the best. your just a net mc dogg so go head n SPiT 2 ya DELL.... u couldn't "drop a hott single" if u was "tippin a stripper in hell" ^^ allright punch, bruise lames when i let da tool aim..but fam YOU STRaNGE.. plus ya fukkin bars' "STRETCH LONGER THaN ya CREWS NaME" ^^allright personnal, but its a bit of a gimme.feel me? I mean I could of predicted you would use that line from a mile away. poetry2abeat your hated at this site so its best you leave, you stand up to no-one like your christopher reeves, ^^ good opener,nice punch after reading what i wrote you wished you declined, your brain in your mouth is the only way you speak your mind, ^ medium punch,a bit played. couldnt spit fresh if your lyrics were minty like a tic-tak cuz the only hot bars your drop are flamable kit-kats, ^^ good bar right here, nice punch. funny as fuck. marvjay1009 your nothing unique, a r.v. reject, like you misplaced aritha franklin, you just lost respect ^^ I didnt get this 100% only cause I dont real;ly knwo who aritha franklin is. so I have no comment on this bar. having a buddy on this site would be your ulitmate feeling, but that would be more "fuked up" than "sex on a ceiling" ^^ dope closer, you killed him here. vote goes to poetry2abeat |
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
poetry decent punches from you... punches were on point, some of them lacked though, ur flow was pretty good decent vocab & structure, but overall here your punches could've came a little harder 6/10 MARVJay decent drop from you...dont know why u facin these newbs, ur not gonna get better that way but anyway, punches were okay...structure was in place...get rid of the [size=4]"..overall you had a slight better drop than poetry......... no hate to both RTF MARV http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=173278 |
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
no doubt here.marv got this.......had punches good wrd play....lol good opena......good shit............here......yo poerty dude elevate.....aiight its easy dont need a beat da write 2 FaG,y niggaz like u brag? nigga u couldn't make "HEaDS-LiNES" if u was a "tight durag" admit it niggaz u luv marvjay you been a fan 4 a week...... when i "CaTCH" dis 'biter' rv ima put my "HaND ON HiS TEETH ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ best lines lololololol |
yo return the favour in my battle below.///////
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uppin 4 more fukkin votes
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This was feedback posted for poetry2abeat
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Voted For: poetry2abeat
Aii Ima Have to give my vote to Poetry2abeat because he came really good wit the Punchez and personals but also did Marv but still Poetry was alot better and thats just how i fell so i jus gonna give my vote to Poetry 2 a beat because I Was jus fellin his alot more v.poetry2abeat |
uppin and stop fukkin hatin damm
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
v/marvjay1009.....this was a good battle but my vote goes to marv he came wit harder diss's an was more creative wit the punchs..... punchs=marv vocab=marv structure=marv overall=marv *RETURN THE FAVOR* |
good battle marv but every battle ive read from you was so ething always dealing trees and leave? why that?
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
aite dis is how i see it... its easy dont need a beat da write 2 FaG,y niggaz like u brag? nigga u couldn't make "HEaDS-LiNES" if u was a "tight durag" ^1st line, 4/10 no punch, 2nd line 6/10 hard punch. admit it niggaz u luv marvjay you been a fan 4 a week...... when i "CaTCH" dis 'biter' rv ima put my "HaND ON HiS TEETH" 1st line again justa set up for 2nd line 3/10..2nd line gd wordplay but eh not hard 5/10 u sweet ur real candy b,u gon merk sombody? it cant be me i'll kill you and make ya punk ass "leave" ya "family tree"........ again notha set up 1st line 3/10 2nd line decent your just a net mc dogg so go head n SPiT 2 ya DELL.... u couldn't "drop a hott single" if u was "tippin a stripper in hell" gd bar decent punch gotta giv it 6/10. i bruise lames when i let da tool aim..but fam YOU STRaNGE.. plus ya fukkin bars' "STRETCH LONGER THaN ya CREWS NaME" 1st line waz decent not a direct punch, 2nd line gd play on hiz crews name 7/10 Overall marv u had a solid drop so i think u won dis u were more consistent and complex compared 2 poetry2abeat RTF in my sig u kno how it iz. your hated at this site so its best you leave, you stand up to no-one like your christopher reeves, [B]no hard punch 2/10 after reading what i wrote you wished you declined, your brain in your mouth is the only way you speak your mind, Not a gd set up, but 2nd line waz shaky, kinda played BUT decent couldnt spit fresh if your lyrics were minty like a tic-tak cuz the only hot bars your drop are flamable kit-kats, Wack meta in da 1st line, 2nd line IS PLAYED AS FUCK marvjay1009 your nothing unique, a r.v. reject, like you misplaced aritha franklin, you just lost respect, 1st line is fake, how can u b a reject??2nd line decent having a buddy on this site would be your ulitmate feeling, but that would be more "fuked up" than "sex on a ceiling" [B]1st line waz jus WACK,2nd line not bad gd meta Overall not very gd, u shud do poetry cuz u realli need 2 elevate, no hate, but u werent as hard hitting az marv... RTF MARVJAY |
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